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Are you doing [[Law & Order: Dallas]] before crossover? Talix has been goes off since August... (Ednasharon24534)
 
Are you doing [[Law & Order: Dallas]] before crossover? Talix has been goes off since August... (Ednasharon24534)
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:I have to say this. I'm not sure how long we should wait for Talix to write the crossover in his end. I hate to say this, but if he takes too long, we should change plans for it. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 02:17, April 19, 2020 (UTC)
   
 
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:::I think either Stephen Lang or Michael Rooker would portray Ryan's older brother. I'm not sure the names of the extended Sullivan family. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 03:53, April 7, 2020 (UTC)
 
:::I think either Stephen Lang or Michael Rooker would portray Ryan's older brother. I'm not sure the names of the extended Sullivan family. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 03:53, April 7, 2020 (UTC)
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::::I think I came up with some names and added a family member for the extended family who will appear in the potential season 3. Ryan's older brother could be either Desmond, Patrick or Mark. The brother's wife (Cherry Jones), a semi-retired IT expert, could be named either Tara, Chloe, Emily or Clara. The brother's son who is a firefighter could be named Thomas, Adam or Daniel. The daughter who is the train operator could be either name Abbie, Grace or Megan. What do you think? [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 01:36, April 11, 2020 (UTC)
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::::::I hope you can reply to me and Ednasharon24534 about our messages. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 14:12, April 17, 2020 (UTC)
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:I understand how things are busy around here now. Anyway, I put those names for the Sullivan extended family in my profile and I added the name of Daniel's wife on there too. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 21:09, April 17, 2020 (UTC)
   
 
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::I think what we should do since we saw that 15th episodes of both ''Law & Order: New Orleans'' and ''Hartman'' were added, we should maybe probably add the other episodes of each show while we wait for Talix to add his stuff...that is if he's going to do it. Other than that, I'm not sure what to do if it takes too long for Talix to add his stuff on ''Law & Order: Dallas''. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 20:09, April 8, 2020 (UTC)
 
::I think what we should do since we saw that 15th episodes of both ''Law & Order: New Orleans'' and ''Hartman'' were added, we should maybe probably add the other episodes of each show while we wait for Talix to add his stuff...that is if he's going to do it. Other than that, I'm not sure what to do if it takes too long for Talix to add his stuff on ''Law & Order: Dallas''. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 20:09, April 8, 2020 (UTC)
   
== [[Taylor Lucas]] ==
 
   
*Which year Taylor Lucas (Hartman's half-brother) born?
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Should you work with writing of full history (biography & personality) of [[Hartman (TV Series)]] current and former main characters? I did some but I have been busy. It has been season 11 so yet and we are still waiting on Talix. Focus on that while waiting for an answer from Talix. (Ednasharon24534)
*Which year he end up in prison?
 
*How old is Nancy Moreland.
 
I was thinking to get him involved in next episode where he bonded with Nancy over her father before talking her around to see her father but gets a nasty surprise when knowing who is Nancy's father. He must know about who was Rich - revealing Taylor's connection with Rich and/or Hannah.
 
   
I still haven't got a idea but there could be consequences in season finale. Just saying... if it happened. I am going to wait until the crossover is complete. (Ednasharon24534)
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:I think next week if there's no response from Talix, we should add the 14th episode crossovers in New Orleans and Hartman because Talix has not been answering. If he does respond later on and added it, we'll edit those episodes. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 01:44, May 10, 2020 (UTC)
   
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== Flashback characters ==
   
Should you work with writing of full history (biography & personality) of [[Hartman (TV Series)]] current and former main characters? I did some but I have been busy. It has been season 11 so yet and we are still waiting on Talix. Focus on that while waiting for an answer from Talix. (Ednasharon24534)
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I am going to clear out about the flashback characters, how old are they in 1992 and which year they was born.
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Royce will turn 45 at the beginning of the flashback episode where his campaign manager was found stabbed to death at his home after the mayor's birthday party.
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*Kathryn Newton - Tawny Thompson (age 23 in 1992, born at 1969)
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*Patrick Wilson - Bill Royce (age 44/45* in 1992, born at 1947)
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*Elizabeth Banks - ADA Holly Donovan (age 43 in 1992, born at 1949)
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*Patricia Arquette - Captain Siobhan Thompson (age 50 in 1992, born in 1942)
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*Carmen Ejogo - Detective Jane Daniels (age 42 in 1992, born at 1950)
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*Claire Foy - Shannon Royce (age 36 in 1992, born at 1956)
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*AJ Cook - Vanessa Donovan (age 39 in 1992, born in 1953)
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== Detroit ==
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Parker and Queen will appear in flashback[[File:New_Orleans_to_Detroit.jpg|thumb|330px|The journey is long...]] episode at present day. They will appear in some scenes in some scenes their journey to Detroit and the rest of the episode shows the full story of their first case.
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The episode will end in present day when Parker and Queen arrive at Detroit to confront their past (to end the episode with cliffhanger) (Ednasharon24534)
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== Villain Fanon Wikia ==
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I found a Fan-made wiki about Villain in the internet. To create your own villain.
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[[https://villainsfanon.fandom.com]]
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Can you fix episode 19 of Hartman season 11? I tries to follow the plot from the last episode. There is the short summary of episode 19. My best one.
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"Tenision rise between Hartman and the team after Richie Daniels' arrest when Hartman believe there is something fishy over Jasmine's death. While, Delgaldo finds himself in dangerous situation as older kids target Daniel over his dead mother and Taylor visits Nancy's father in prison where their connection are revealed."
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== Richie Daniels ==
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Who will plays Richie Daniels in season 11 of Hartman? (Ednasharon24534)
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:Depends on the age and ethnicity of Richie Daniels. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 21:21, April 25, 2020 (UTC)
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==Hartman/The Sullivans crossover==
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You know, I think there should a midseason crossover between Hartman and The Sullivans. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 21:21, April 25, 2020 (UTC)
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:I think ''The Sullivans'' should start the first part of the crossover and conclude it with ''Hartman'', so that Drake and Katherine can visit Hartman's family like she did with them in the backdoor pilot. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 14:46, May 11, 2020 (UTC)
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== Flashback episode ==
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What is the plot of flashback episode of [[Law & Order: New Orleans]]? I want to do it but I trusted you because you are the better writer. I was thinking to end the flashback with a shock twist... and episode 19, we are taking a short break to wait for Talix over crossover. If he taking too long, just create two parts crossover between New Orleans and Hartman. (Ednasharon24534)
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:I think Ednasharon24534 is right. If Talix takes too long past them, we will just do a two part crossover with New Orleans and Hartman. If he does return and has written it in his own end, we will rewrite those crossover episodes. Also, you might want to write the 19th episode of New Orleans. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 02:09, April 27, 2020 (UTC)
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Don't worry about the plot of Flashback episode. I am going to do the plot. Just wait when I finished (Ednasharon24534)
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I know I am writing a long plot but after I finished it, I will sort out a page for flashback episode and then you rewrite everything shorter in [[Law & Order: New Orleans]] page. (Ednasharon24534)
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Help me out... Nash. I mess up with the flashback episode.  I through McCorrea was born in 1970s but I got it wrong. McCorrea was born in 1982, making it almost 10. I change the story but right back where I started. (Ednasharon24534)
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And Carcaterra is 27/28 in flashback episode and Josh Server is 41 years old. Too old to play a 27 years old detective. Change the actor as young Carcaterra. (Ednasharon24534)
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I have finished the plot of flashback episode and added the page of "The First Case" to let you know.(Ednasharon24534)
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One thing, don't rewrite anything short yet until I added all of the plot in "The First Case" page. OK? (Ednasharon24534; 11.39pm) May 5, 2020
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== Hartman final three season 11 episodes ==
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I probably will write the third to last episode of season 11 of ''Hartman''. Any hints that could help out for it? [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 02:28, May 8, 2020 (UTC)
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:What about part 2 of the season finale of Hartman? [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 01:49, May 11, 2020 (UTC)
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==Parker's family==
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Who will play Parker's older brothers - James, Davis and Robert (only appear at police academy in 1992) in [[The First Case (Law & Order: New Orleans)|flashback episode]]? I am having bit of a problem of finding actors... (Ednasharon24534; 1.52am) May 9, 2020
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== Plan? ==
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I am bit shocked that you choose [[Hartman (TV Series)]] to be end after 12 seasons. I thought the show will carry on longer but why? What is your plan? (Ednasharon24534; 3.47am) May 11, 2020.
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And I already added Tom Felton in [[The First Case (Law & Order: New Orleans)]] as Joseph Morgan - the reporter and Tawny Thompson's colleague. I should warn you, it must be difficult. (Ednasharon24534)
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I already know the plan but should we renamed it to task force something, not characters show title because it sound better than your idea name? It will mainly involves a team than two main characters.
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To make something different...(Ednasharon24534; 3.35pm) May 15, 2020
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Your idea is OK but I don't like the name of the show.  (Ednasharon24534; 3.11pm) May 15, 2020.
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:I think it's an alright name. It's like Cagney & Lacy and Rizzoli & Isles. Think about that. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 16:32, May 15, 2020 (UTC)
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:I don't know the name sound the same but bit odd. I know this is long time to start everything, what is the name of task force? "Task force?" It will sound better. (Ednasharon24534; 8.28pm) May 15, 2020.
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::Let it be. It's Nash's choice. Besides, "Vargas & Shane" sounds okay to me. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 20:21, May 19, 2020 (UTC)
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:OK but I still thinks the name of task force could be the name of the show, could be better. "Vargas & Shane" sound random. No offence but it is my opinion... Don't want to argue and this is Nash's choice, his decision. That is my final say. (Ednasharon24534, 1.19am) May 21, 2020
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== Hold on? ==
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I am sorry. What is a task force? I thought I knew but I actually don't... Help me out, anybody? Please? (Ednasharon24534; 8.36pm) May 15, 2020
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:I'm sure we'll know the name of the task force soon enough. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 19:41, May 15, 2020 (UTC)
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==The two crossover episodes==
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I think we should write the episodes that weren't meant to do a triple crossover with ''Dallas''. Once ''Dallas'' is written, we'll rewrite them. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 19:41, May 15, 2020 (UTC)
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== Hartman Season 12 Ideas ==
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I got a idea for Hartman season 12 premiere. It will be very difficult. The premiere will be a special lockdown episode which mainly involved on Hartman and the team handle the situations while the city goes to lockdown. We wants to explain how the police and D.A and their loved one handle everything while being on lockdown during works and home.
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It will not be a two parts episode, it will be 70 minutes special - longer episode ever of Hartman series. Episode 2 will move forward after the lockdown, carrying on as normal with normal minutes. I think my idea will worry because I seen other shows attempts to handle the topic but it will be different with the lives of police and D.A during lockdown.
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https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=F3jKkU0GBIk
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https://www.digitalspy.com/soaps/emmerdale/a32627796/emmerdale-return-to-filming-coronavirus-lockdown-episodes/
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(Ednasharon24534, 7.15pm) May 21, 2020.
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:Wait a minute, Ednasharon24534. The year of Hartman season 12 is actually 2029, which is nine years after all this. I get your intentions for this idea of yours, but seems inconsistent with the year of season 12. Also, if the idea does happen, it will have to be in flashback. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 18:21, May 21, 2020 (UTC)
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:Yikes, I didn't know but I don't think the flashback episode will be sorted. I wants a show to deals a real-life topic, a life during lockdown. The show we create is not real life, just fandom. We can use the idea but change it bit. (7.27pm, Ednasharon24534) May 21, 2020.
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::I know the show's fandom. I'm just trying to get you to understand the issues of consistency of the years of it. Alright, just make some necessary changes for it, but have it look like the people knew what they are doing after all this and have a fictional illness, among other things. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 18:30, May 21, 2020 (UTC)
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:::What about a massive earthquake? L.A. tends to have a lot of those. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 18:46, May 21, 2020 (UTC)
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:::It could work. Great idea. The city goes to lockdown while emergency attempts to deal the situation, attempts to protect the public. (Ednasharon24534; 7.47pm) May 21, 2020.
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:::Season 12 premiere will takes place 3 weeks after season finale. The next episode will takes place 5 months after the crisis. To make things easier. And nobody will died, it will be a life situation during city lockdown and all of the characters is involved. Nobody will be miss out.(Ednasharon24534, 8.10/19pm, 3.17am) May 21, 2020.
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== The Sullivans characters added ==
   
== #22.15 of Law & Order: New Orleans ==
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I added some the characters of ''[[The Sullivans]]'', including [[Drake Sullivan]], [[Katherine Sullivan]] and [[Eugene Winder]]. Feel free to make some changes in some of their family names. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 22:05, May 24, 2020 (UTC)
Can you sort out the ending of season 22 episode 15 of [[Law & Order: New Orleans]] I added?
 

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Hello, Nashwalker, I'd like to inform you that your talk page exceeded the byte count limit, so it's been archived. You can view the archive above, all of your previous messages are there. Thank you. Chris6d (talk) 15:20, June 10, 2017 (UTC)

IdeasEdit

Hello I was wondering if you wanted to do a crossover with my show October Blue about a NYPD Detective. I think Chloe and Chris will work well together. ~ ~ ~ ~

Thank you for taking it into consideration. I have edited and added more things. Hopefully it will be enough to create a crossover. I have so many ideas ~ ~ ~ ~

I let to do season premiere of Law & Order: New Orleans Season 20. Carcaterra's fate will be revealed despite the actor is leaving... (Ednasharon24534)

DiscordEdit

Hey, Nashwaklker, you're a senior editor on the Fanon Wiki, so just letting you know that in case you haven't already seen, this wiki has an unofficial Discord server, so if you have Discord, I'd encourage you to join. If you don't have a Discord, I'd encourage you to make one, as it's free and epic. Once you're ready, join the server by clicking "Connect" in the Discord window on the Main Page of this wiki. If that doesn't work, tell me your Discord username and tag and I'll DM you the invite. Thanks, Chris6d (talk) 17:17, June 4, 2018 (UTC)

A character stabbedEdit

Who do you think will be stabbed at the end of episode 11; Beth, Young or Fontana? They will get mistake for Vargas after Gordon's plan goes wrong. (Ednasharon24534)

Gordon hired somebody to kill Vargas after he decides to have her "dealt with" but the plan end up goes wrong when the assailant attacks Beth, mistaking for Vargas before stabbing her. The assailant is not Gordon, he is a hitman who Gordon hired to kill Vargas. (Ednasharon24534)

Flashback episode (Season 9 of Hartman) Edit

Episode 13 of Hartman's season 9 will be flashback episode involved Shane and Vargas's past with Gordon. The episode will reveals the full story of Shane and Vargas's abuse at the hand of Gordon. The episode will takes place at 2006 to a year before Season 8.

In the other episodes, Gordon will attempts to track down Vargas after Hartman hides her. He will clashes with Hartman who threatens to expose him if he don't back off. (Ednasharon24534)

Have you asks Talix about which date of doing 12th season of Law & Order: Dallas? (Ednasharon24534)

Re: L&O Season 12Edit

The release date is targeted on a early to mid August. But I'm going to reveal some spoilers on the Dallas page soon. (Talix (talk) 06:10, July 2, 2018 (UTC))

Do you know which date Talix will being season 12 of Law & Order .Dallas? He says mid-August... (Ednasharon24534)

I had a family vacation. Don't worry, I'm about to finish s12 very shortly. And give you details of a game-changing season 13. (Talix (talk) 09:49, December 31, 2018 (UTC))

Message Edit

Talix send me the message; he said he will starts Season 12 of Law & Order: Dallas on August 1 but we will restart Law & Order: New Orleans and Hartman on the day after, August 2. We let Talix starts Season 12 first before we restart everything.

https://fanon.wikia.com/wiki/User_talk:Ednasharon24534#Re:_L.26O_Dallas_Season_12 (Ednasharon24534)

L&O: New Orleans Season 20 & Hartman Season 10 dates Edit

Law & Order: New Orleans's Season 20 premiere on October 19, 2018

Hartman season 10 premiere on October 27, 2018.

I got a question, is Talix still doing Season 12 of Law & Order: Dallas or Season 12 have finished? (Ednasharon24534)

I am bit confused. Has Taliz finished season 12 of Law & Order: Dallas? (Ednasharon24534)

Has Taliz finished his season of Law & Order: Dallas? (Ednasharon24534)

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Have Talix finished season 12 of Law & Order: Dallas?  I can't wait that long. I wanted to start the new season of Law & Order: New Orelean and Hartman before Christmas. Any news? (Ednasharon24534)

Any luck yet? Have Talix finished Season 12 of Law & Order: Dallas? I can't wait too long. (Ednasharon24534)

Starting date for a new season of Law & Order: New Orleans and Hartman is March 6.

Who will plays Georgia Ramsay, the biological mother of Mike Ramsey? Any idea? We should explore Georgia's past if... 

What is the name of Hartman's half-brother and who will plays the half-brother? (Ednasharon24534)

#10.13 of HartmanEdit

Can you write season 10 episode 13 for Hartman? "True Lies". I am running out of idea. Please? (Ednasharon24534)

RE: Dallas Season 14/NOLA Season 22/Hartman Season 11 x-overEdit

Actually yes I would be interested in a crossover with Dallas Season 14/NOLA 22/Hartman 11. (Talix (talk) 06:55, August 1, 2019 (UTC))

What's your idea? I'm curious. (Talix (talk) 10:36, August 4, 2019 (UTC))

Idea for backdoor pilot of Hartman Edit

Hey, there. Sorry to bother you. I went over your Law & Order: New Orleans and Hartman stories and anything related to it. I think they work nicely, but you should make some tweaks, like adding fanfic seasons of those shows and such.

Anyway, I thought of something after seeing that. I think there should be a backdoor pilot of Hartman in one of the later episodes of the upcoming season or something like that. I have some plans for it if you're interested. BattleshipMan (talk) 00:19, November 23, 2019 (UTC)

I think that a married couple from either Denver, Boston, Philadelphia or one those cities, the husband is a former elite soldier now detective in some type of special unit and the wife is a ADA, along the husband's police partner, go to Los Angeles searching for a suspect that matched the pattern of the current case that Hartman and the others are working on. BattleshipMan (talk) 02:40, November 23, 2019 (UTC)
What more you want to know is that the husband's name is Drake Sullivan (imagined to Chris Pratt), a former elite soldier (probably Delta Force, Navy SEALs and Marine Force Reconnaissance) turned main detective who comes from an Irish-American family. He is known to be confident, gritty, headstrong, rough-edged on the job with a strong sense of justice and is sensitive about cases involving children, since he has two himself. He has little regard or respect for authority and politics. On his personal life, he loves his family and is shown to be overprotective of them. His wife, ADA Katherine Sullivan (imagined to be Bryce Dallas Howard), the mother of his children, is shown to be uncompromising and stern against those who committed atrocious crimes against families and children, but can two-sided when it comes those who suffered a traumatic event or past that made them commit crime. She is compassionate to rape victims, abused women and children, since she has children with Drake and would seek justice for the families of the victims of the terrible crime. Katherine is also a very intelligent & well-organized person and is also hardened survivor of a past event that haunts her and only talks to Drake, her boss and few others about it. Because of that and her near perfect conviction record, she is the youngest executive ADA. She is also licensed to carry firearms. On the personal life of Drake and Katherine, they loved each other a lot, even though they banter and argued about cases, and are devoted to each other and their children, 10-year-old Finn (imagined to be Jason Maybaum) and 8-year-old daughter, Mary (imagined to be Spencer Moss), in their off time. Finn and Mary are often watched by Drake's father Ryan (imagined to be Clancy Brown), a retired judge. They swore to each other that their personal and private life would not interfere with their careers. Drake's police partner, Miguel Ruiz (imagined to be Nicholas Gonzalez), a womanizing police detective. He is dedicated to the job and the victims of the crime, but his personal life is jumbled. He had parents who abandoned him as a child and was raised by his uncle. He's twice divorced and has three kids from both marriages and often dates & leaves many women. Two other detectives include blunt, straightforward African-American Jackson Holmes (imagined to be Corey Hawkins), a former Army Ranger and squad leader, and single mother Andrea Donnell (imagined to be Teri Reeves), a tough, but compassionate detective who came from a law enforcement family. The IT guy is Officer Kyle Francis (imagined to be Joe Alder). Their CO is Captain Eugene Winder (imagined to be Keith David), a second-generation cop and a tough police veteran, but loyal to his officers. On Katherine's workplace, her second chair is Trent Doyle (imagined to be John Francis Daley), a competitive young ADA hoping to rise up his career. The DA is Andrew Bishop (imagined to be Scott Glenn), a conservative district attorney is who known to be stern and serious with the law.
What do you think? BattleshipMan (talk) 16:39, November 23, 2019 (UTC)
Well, I think either Denver, Boston and Philadelphia are the best settings. Might be a fictionalized police unit. Boston has some specialized police divisions, including The Fugitive Unit, which pursues local fugitives and Family Justice Division, that consists of four units: Crimes Against Children Unit (CACU), Domestic Violence Unit (DVU), Human Trafficking Unit (HTU) and Sexual Assault Unit (SAU). Denver has a Major Crimes Division which specialized investigations for homicides, robbery, sex crimes, missing persons, domestic violence, fraud, and the victim assistance unit. Philadelphia has it's own police divisions. I think Dave, Katherine, Miguel, maybe others, come to Hartman and her team for help on the case that matched patterns on the previous one Hartman and others worked on. What do you think it's the best? BattleshipMan (talk) 20:25, November 23, 2019 (UTC)
I might call the show The Sullivans about the family, a husband who is a cop and a wife who is an ADA that fights crimes involving families. Since it will take place in Denver, the Denver PD Family Justice Unit works on investigating crimes that involves families; rich, poor and such. The crime includes murder, kidnapping, rape and such. I think the pilot episode will have a family abducted from home and investigate the motive while trying to find them. BattleshipMan (talk) 03:59, November 24, 2019 (UTC)
I might need some help with plot ideas for a season. Also, what suggestions should I have for the Sullivan family and the other main characters? Also, I will need an idea for a case that Dave, Katherine, Miguel (maybe others) that would come to Los Angeles to meet up with Hartman and the others about the case that is related to the previous Hartman and others worked. BattleshipMan (talk) 05:30, November 24, 2019 (UTC)
Well, here's one case that will be ongoing for the season. It might be the one is the cold case murder of Katherine's parents and fiancee who were killed in a massacre in their home by a mob her father testified against the mob boss in court when she was 10 and she & her younger brother are the only survivors. Her brother leaves elsewhere. The hitman responsible was never found and the hitman responsible would be found by season's end. Drake helps Katherine find the hitman so she can have closure and to ensure their children's safety as the result. Also, I thought of the two child actors for Finn and Mary. Jason Maybaum for Finn and Spencer Moss for Mary. What do you think? BattleshipMan (talk) 08:13, November 24, 2019 (UTC)
Glad to hear that. I think I backdoor pilot would involve a murdered family in Denver and the patterns are matched to a case in Los Angeles, which is why Drake, Katherine and Miguel would go to Los Angeles and ask Hartman and others for help since they worked on the murder of the family in Los Angeles that went unsolved. BattleshipMan (talk) 16:48, November 24, 2019 (UTC)
I think after the backdoor pilot, I might add two D.A. Investigators on it. What do you think? BattleshipMan (talk) 02:00, November 25, 2019 (UTC)
I get to work on the adding the two D.A. Investigators who will be revealed after the backdoor pilot.
I see that the next season of Hartman comes out in a few days. I know you can't tell me much, but do you think The Sullivans backdoor pilot will be in the upcoming season? BattleshipMan (talk) 09:01, November 25, 2019 (UTC)
This is what I thought as the DA Investigators. Mario Nazario (Jeremy Ratchford), an old-school ex-Denver cop now top DA Investigator. His partner is Hessa Cohen (Sheila Vand), a third-generation Iranian-American, younger DA Investigator who was brought in by Katherine after she was fired as an undercover FBI agent when she was forced to use, let's just say, unorthodox methods to thwart a terrorist plot. What do you think? Any suggestions on those characters? BattleshipMan (talk) 01:59, November 26, 2019 (UTC)
Thanks for the suggestion. BattleshipMan (talk) 08:20, November 26, 2019 (UTC)
I think the good episode title name for the Hartman backdoor pilot might be "L.A. meet Mile High" or something with "Mile High" since Denver is a mile above sea level. BattleshipMan (talk) 22:05, November 27, 2019 (UTC)
I'm planning to put the backdoor pilot of The Sullivans in the later part of season 11 of Hartman. Since season 11 is about to begin, I want to make you and Ednasharon24534 are reminded. Also, do you think I should do it in one or two parts? BattleshipMan (talk) 04:25, November 29, 2019 (UTC)
Episodes 15 and 16. Got it. If there's any changes that are necessary to fit Hartman better during the backdoor pilot and some better improvements for it, you have my permission to make some necessary changes and corrections for it. BattleshipMan (talk) 04:58, November 29, 2019 (UTC)
I know I want Hartman to go to Denver in The Sullivans backdoor pilot while Barrera would take charge of things. The question now is which two detectives should go to Denver with Hartman (Greico, Ramsay, Ariel and Boscorelli)? Another question is since the Gordon Fontana case is a big one, how will the characters in the backdoor pilot would react to that? BattleshipMan (talk) 00:46, December 2, 2019 (UTC)
Okay, I'll have Hartman, Ramsay and Vargas go to Denver. BattleshipMan (talk) 01:25, December 3, 2019 (UTC)
I'll title the two-part backdoor pilot "Mile High City". BattleshipMan (talk) 01:25, December 3, 2019 (UTC)
I'll take what you said under consideration about Jackson, Trent and the recurring basis of Officer Francis, but D.A. Bishop will be a series regular in the first season. Also, I thought that Drake would have two other siblings (one deceased, one alive and working elsewhere). His mother had died of cancer few years before the backdoor pilot. Katherine will have a past that haunts her and only confides it with Drake, Ryan, D.A. investigator Hessa Cohen and to a less extent, Bishop. Captain Winder probably had a family with adult children. Andrea is a single mother who comes from a police family and she is tough as she can (since the actress I imagined Teri Reeves is a black-belt in Brazilian Jiu Jitsu). Hessa is a former undercover FBI agent who was fired from the bureau for torturing a terrorist which prevented an attack and Katherine got her a job as a D.A. Investigator. She has an older brother who is still in the FBI. Not sure on the personal lives on Nazario, Francis and Bishop. BattleshipMan (talk) 03:05, December 7, 2019 (UTC)

Here's what I got on the main characters of The Sullivans.

Chris Pratt as Drake Sullivan: Denver P.D. Senior Detective. Married to Katherine and has two children (Finn and Mary). His father Ryan is a retired judge. His mother Rachel died of cancer four years before. Older sister Amanda died in a car accident six years before and is survived by her husband & two sons. Younger sister Lydia is married with four children and lives in Chicago, where she works a Chicago 911 dispatcher.

Bryce Dallas Howard as Katherine Sullivan: Executive A.D.A. Married to Drake and has two children (Finn and Mary). Parents and two siblings murdered at a young age by a mob her father testified against. Is estranged from her surviving younger brother Joey who is living elsewhere.

Nicholas Gonzalez as Miguel Ruiz: Denver P.D. Senior Detective. Divorced twice with three children from both marriages (A son from the first marriage, two daughters from the second one).

Keith David as Captain Eugene Winder: Commanding Officer of Denver Police Family Unit. Married for 20 years and father of two (two sons).

Corey Hawkins as Jackson Holmes: Denver P.D. Junior Detective. Recently married to ICU nurse Kim Quincy and is expecting their first child.

Teri Reeves as Andrea Donnell: Denver P.D. Junior Detective. Divorced single mother to two daughters (Diana and Emily).

John Francis Daley as Trent Doyle: A.D.A. Openly gay and has a boyfriend.

Jeremy Ratchford as Mario Nazario: Former Denver cop now D.A. Investigator. Widowed with two sons.

Sheila Vand as Hessa Cohen: Third generation Iranian-American. Former undercover FBI agent now D.A. Investigator. Single with no children. Was fired from the FBI for torturing a terror suspect to stop the attack. Older brother is a FBI agent.

Jason Maybaum as Finn Sullivan: Drake and Katherine's oldest son.

Spencer Moss as Mary Sullivan: Drake and Katherine's youngest daughter.

Scott Glenn as D.A. Andrew Bishop: Conservative, married 24 years, has five children (two sons and three daughters) and several grandchildren. Was estranged from one of his daughters when she came out as a lesbian, but have since reconciled.

Clancy Brown as Ryan Sullivan: Retired judge. Widowed when his wife Rachel died of cancer. Has three children Amanda, Drake and Lydia and eight grandchildren. Older Amanda was killed in an car accident and is survived by her husband and two sons. His middle son Drake lives with him along with Drake's wife Katherine and their two children Finn and Mary. Lydia is a Chicago 911 dispatcher and is married with four children.

Joe Alder as Kyle Francis: Police officer who serves as an computer expert. Single with no children and has a twin sister who works a doctor in a local hospital.

See what you think? BattleshipMan (talk) 08:10, December 7, 2019 (UTC)

Glad you agree with the characters for the backdoor pilot. I have the plot for it set up. It will be ready when the finishing touches of episode 14 of season 11 of Hartman is done. I think when I wrote the backdoor pilot here, you probably should do some finishing touches and some necessary changes for it.
BTW, I added the article of Sean Carter, Brianna Carter's husband. BattleshipMan (talk) 20:09, December 8, 2019 (UTC)
I might change actors for Miguel Ruiz. Either Anthony Ruivivar, Lombardo Boyar, Rey Gallegos or Nicholas Gonzalez, one of those guys. What do you think? BattleshipMan (talk) 05:27, December 31, 2019 (UTC)


Nice picks on the recurring characters, not to mention another of the Winston siblings. Here's what I thought of as recurring characters also.

  • Commander Sam "Red Fox" Cutter, the police district commander where the FJU is at, probably will be only for the first season. His father was Caucasian and his mother was Native American. Was a Denver police officer for a long time and rose the rank of Commander. He is a widower with one son. Portrayed by Graham Greene.
  • Nathan Whitman, the widowed husband of Drake's older sister Amanda and the father of their two sons. He owns a shopping mall in Denver. Portrayed by Sebastian Arcelus.
  • Lydia Graves, Drake's younger sister and Ryan's youngest daughter. She is married with four children and works as a police dispatcher for Chicago Police Department. Portrayed by Elaine Cassidy.

What do you think? BattleshipMan (talk)

Thanks for that.

Here's what I thought of for the first season. There should be a flashback episode where Drake and Katherine first met and that how they became a married couple. Here's what I thought of: Drake, who had gotten out of the Marines not too long ago, is living in solitude and Katherine, who was newly appointed ADA and a second chair to one of the Executive ADAs who is seeking to become a DA, met each other, but with their differing personalities, they didn't exactly see eye to eye. Then when Drake was accused of murdering an ex-girlfriend, Katherine was the second chair on the case. It looked like a open and shut case at first, but when she learned from one of the DA investigators that there was evidence that would exonerated Drake and the Executive ADA she is working with had suppressed that evidence to get a conviction as a political stepping stone. Katherine then worked with Bishop, then Sergeant now Captain Winder and Ryan, who was then a judge at the time, on finding the evidence and discovered the actual killer was the jealous ex-boyfriend who killed her after she rejected his advances. Drake was then cleared of all charges and Katherine and Bishop turned in the corrupt Executive ADA to the bar association and he got disbarred. Afterwards, Drake and Katherine became a couple they are now and have two children as a result. What do you think? BattleshipMan (talk) 04:45, January 21, 2020 (UTC)

15 seasons...Maybe. That probably will be good. And Emily Deschanel is a good idea as Amanda. David Ramsey as Lydia's husband Owen...I think so if it works for interracial couples. Also, Ryan's wife and Amanda, Drake and Lydia's mother Rachel, who died on cancer four years before. She probably will have to appear in flashback scenes and episodes set in the past. BattleshipMan (talk) 17:09, January 21, 2020 (UTC)
Here's what I thought of. You can make some changes if you like. For the evidence, Drake was the last person to see his ex-girlfriend alive and he found the body. He didn't have a better alibi and he was subsequently suspected for the murder. The corrupt EADA saw that case as an opportunity to move him up the ranks and there was a security camera on the street that shown Drake walking at a bar at the time of the murder, which would have exonerated him and the EADA had buried that evidence so he can get a high conviction rating. But the DA investigator who found it told Katherine and she told Amanda, Ryan, Bishop (who was the EADA seeking election for DA) and Winder (who was the investigating police sergeant on the case). They conducted their own investigation and one witness told them that there was another man who was harassing the ex-girlfriend, which turned the former boyfriend of the murder victim. The man was arrested and he confessed that she rejected him & killed him out of jealousy. Drake was cleared of all charges and the corrupt EADA was disbarred. BattleshipMan (talk) 20:21, January 21, 2020 (UTC)
Great ideas. Thanks.
For the backdoor pilot, I like your input. It will involve Drake, Katherine and Ruiz visiting Hartman and the squad because the murdered family they are investigating matched the ballistics to the murdered family Hartman and the squad previously investigated, but the case went cold. Hartman takes Ramsey and Vargas to Denver. They met up with the rest of the FJU squad (Winder, Holmes, Andrea, Francis and a sergeant name Kruger who won't be a regular in the show). They say that they know about the Gordon Fontana case and mentions their shock that he got away with it for so long.
They eventually discovered that each murdered family in their respective cases involved the trucking company that each father worked in and it was a front for a criminal empire that smuggles abducted children and auctioned them off to the highest bidder. Two men were going to blow the whistle on them and they, along with their families, got murdered because of it. Katherine and Doyle got a subpoena to sub-headquarters in Denver with Drake, Hartman and the other detectives and confronted. Then a shootout occurred with six hitmen arrived. Ruiz and Doyle got wounded and Kruger got killed. But the four shooters got killed and one got wounded. When the lead hitman named Spears was about to shoot Katherine, she fired her hidden revolver at him and Drake took him down.
As the hospital took care of the mildly wounded Ruiz and the seriously wounded Doyle, Drake, Katherine and Hartman interrogated Spears in the hospital. Ballistics the gun used by Spears, who killed Kruger, matched the ones that killed the two fathers. Spears pointed out to the truck that carried several children and they stopped it. Winder and Bishop ordered everyone to shut down the criminal ring. Hartman visits Drake and Katherine at their home and met their two children; Finn and Mary and Drake's father Ryan. They talked about family and the jobs they do. Following Ryan's idea, they began to track down the ring by questioning of the kidnapped children, checking out the VIN numbers of the trucks, the cell phones used the shooters and files on the computers used by the company, they identified the mastermind as Jeffrey Dickenson, the owner of several businesses in America, including the trucking company. A joint police-FBI raid led to the arrest of Dickenson and the rescue of the other children nationwide. After the funeral of Kruger, Hartman, Ramsay and Vargas say goodbye to their Denver counterparts.
What do you think?

Thanks for that. BattleshipMan (talk) 04:23, January 22, 2020 (UTC)

Good picks. I have one more addition for series regular since Sergeant Kruger was killed in the backdoor pilot.
  • Annie Wersching as Sergeant Nicole Richter, a police sergeant previously from undercover unit transferred to FJU. She is dedicated to her job and is divorced with a teenage son. Had a history of using opioids due to a gunshot wound she received in a line of duty and went to rehab for it.
For recurring
  • Danny Glover as Retired Colonel Frank Holmes, Jackson's father and retired Army colonel.
  • Judy Greer as Emily Thornton, a prominent defense lawyer who is friends with Katherine since law school.
  • David Morse as Peter Donnell, Andrea's father who is a former Denver homicide detective.
  • Mary McDonnell as Jane Donnell, Andrea's mother who was a former Denver cop until a gunshot wound ended her police career when Andrea and Robert were young. She then raised her children after her injury.
  • Luke Grimes as Robert Donnell, Andrea's brother who is a Denver police patrol sergeant. He and Andrea have an difficult relationship due to differing opinions on some things.
  • Ruben Santiago-Hudson as Judge Adam Wellington, a judge who is a close friend of Ryan when he was a judge. Although a friendly judge, he is nevertheless stern on the court and will be afraid to butt-heads with Katherine or any other lawyer at court.
Jackson also has an older brother who is a gun runner who is an CI for the Denver Police. Hessa has a older brother who is an FBI agent. What do you think of my picks? BattleshipMan (talk) 04:41, January 24, 2020 (UTC)
Yes, that's true. I think the Donnell family, Hessa's brother and maybe Jackson's father will wait until season 2. Besides, I'm not even sure who else will recur in the first season. BattleshipMan (talk) 07:17, January 24, 2020 (UTC)
I might start the first season of The Sullivans after Hartman and L&O: NO finishes their seasons.

Romance? - Hartland Season 11 Edit

Who will Shane date? I was thinking Vargas and Boscorelli (a new character) to get together but what about Shane? "someone we're already familiar with" (Ednasharon24534)

Hartman series's characters biographyEdit

Can you write Hartman (TV Series)'s characters biography - history and personal life? Past and present main characters. (Ednasharon24534)

Present main characters...

Can you write Chloe Hartman's biography, involving her time in Law & Order: New Orleans and Hartman (TV Series)? Please? And also the characters of Hartman series... (Ednasharon24534)

Hartman season 11 Edit

I just hope you liked the episode of Hartman I wrote on episode 6 of season 11. If there's any add-ons or changes that should be done, feel free to do so. BattleshipMan (talk) 21:28, December 15, 2019 (UTC)

You know, I think since it's close to Christmas, there should be a Christmas episode of Hartman. What do you think? BattleshipMan (talk) 04:12, December 23, 2019 (UTC)

Alright, Nash. That will be my last episode of Hartman I wrote until the backdoor pilot of The Sullivans is about to arrive. I might write one other episode after that. Also, I probably will need some help with The Sullivans when it comes to episode ideas, storyline for the characters and such.
Anyway, you should write few episodes of Law & Order: New Orleans as Ednasharon24534 asked to. BattleshipMan (talk) 07:52, December 28, 2019 (UTC)
I think after episode 12, episode 13 might be the time for the triple crossover with Law & Order: New Orleans and Law & Order: Dallas. Episodes 15 and 16 would have the backdoor pilot of The Sullivans. Episodes 18 and 19, would probably be the best place to focus on for the death of someone in Hartman's family. BattleshipMan (talk) 00:01, January 4, 2020 (UTC)
I wonder what the plot of episode 11 of Hartman would be about since episode 12 would involve the wedding of Grieco and Ramsay. I probably won't write it, but there could be some good ideas for it. Maybe one of the subplots of episode 11 would involve the few days before the wedding. Maybe with something Vargas and Delgado and learns that he is a cop. The main plot might have something to do with Angela since she ended things with her boyfriend after what they did. What do you think? BattleshipMan (talk) 03:11, January 10, 2020 (UTC)
Maybe Episodes 11 and 12 of Hartman should be written since episode 14 is where the triple crossover will take place and wait until Law & Order: Dallas is written. BattleshipMan (talk) 04:25, January 22, 2020 (UTC)

Flashback episode Edit

I know this will sound mad but episode 19 will be a flashback episode, revealing how Parker and Queen gets involved with each other for first time as a young officers. This episode will mainly focus on Parker and Queen's first time of meeting each other... Eddie Hicks, Alan Grimes and Cole McCorrea will be involved in the episode. There will youngest actors playing young vision of current and past characters. (Ednasharon24534)

In Parker and Queen's first case, they was involved in serious world of the politics after a campaign was found stabbed to death. Two young police officers was sent by two detectives, Hicks and Carcaterra to investigates a mayor of New Orleans who is romantically involved with a young reporter but they haven't got no idea their life will change forever and a big secret will be revealed. (Ednasharon24534)

Triple crossover Edit

Did you check Law & Order: Dallas page? Is Talix still doing Law & Order: Dallas or not? I feels Dallas has been off at the moment. (Ednasharon24534)

Talix hasn't been on since August and that's kind of a concern. If he's not available, then maybe you guys write episodes of L&O: Dallas until it reaches the crossover. BattleshipMan (talk) 01:55, January 11, 2020 (UTC)

Are you doing Law & Order: Dallas before crossover? Talix has been goes off since August... (Ednasharon24534)

I have to say this. I'm not sure how long we should wait for Talix to write the crossover in his end. I hate to say this, but if he takes too long, we should change plans for it. BattleshipMan (talk) 02:17, April 19, 2020 (UTC)

200th episode Edit

I am thinking that 200th episode of Hartman to be 60 minutes episode to make it different and long than other episode. (Ednasharon24534)

Who do you think should write that episode since it's main focus is the wedding of Grieco and Ramsay? BattleshipMan (talk) 03:42, January 29, 2020 (UTC)
I wrote the 200th episode of Hartman. I tried my best to figure what would happen to the past main characters and such with it. If there's anything to add, do so. BattleshipMan (talk) 19:20, January 29, 2020 (UTC)

Triple crossover Edit

Nash, have you heard from Talix? He/she has only wrote the first episode of the current season of L&O: Dallas and he/she said he was having personal issues and that he will work on it. But Ednasharon24534 is anxious to get that triple crossover done and I'm a little concerned about this. BattleshipMan (talk) 15:27, January 30, 2020 (UTC)

13th season 11 episode of Hartman and 12th and 13th episode of L&O: NO Edit

I wonder what social issue the 13th episode of season 11 of Hartman should be about. I wouldn't what the best social issue might be during the case. Also, we should write the 12th and 13th episodes of L&O: New Orleans since they are before the triple crossover event in the 14th episodes in each shows. BattleshipMan (talk) 22:54, February 2, 2020 (UTC)

?Any ideas what social issue the 11x13 of Hartman should have? BattleshipMan (talk) 18:51, February 19, 2020 (UTC)

Plans for the first seasons of The Sullivan Edit

Here are the plans for the potential first season of The Sullivans.

  • Drake helps Katherine find the mob hitman who killed her parents and two older siblings when she and her brother Joey were young. Hessa later joins in to help them out.
  • Ruiz's womanizing ways often ires other members of the FJU, including Winder.
  • The newly-married Holmes will become a father.
  • One of Donnell's daughters witnessed a crime.
  • Newly assigned Sergeant Nicole Richter adjusts to her post while continue visiting AA meetings for her previous opioids addiction while trying to get custody for her son.
  • Bishop and Doyle have an awkward working relationship due to Bishop's conservative views and that one of Bishop's daughters is a lesbian which led to a previous estrangement as the result of it.
  • Katherine's estranged brother Joey appears in one or two episodes when he did a book signing in Denver of one of his novels.
  • One episode will be mostly flashback on how Drake and Katherine met and how they became a couple.
  • Nazario struggles with his health due to years of drinking, smoking, and some poor dieting.
  • Ryan becomes restless in his retirement and lending himself out as a part-time legal consultant.
  • Winder becomes Holmes' go-to guy for advice on fatherhood. Also, he deals with his older son finishing medical school, and his younger son graduating college and opting to join the FBI as an agent.
  • Finn and Mary face bullying from several other kids at school, and the reasons behind it turn out to be linked to a previous case their parents worked on. BattleshipMan (talk) 17:10, February 5, 2020 (UTC)
  • Nice ideas for Winder, Nazario, Ryan and the Sullivan kids. I know for Hessa; she used to be an undercover FBI agent until she got fired for torturing a terror suspect to stop an attack and Katherine helped her get a job as a DA Investigator, which is why she is helping her and Drake find the hitman in that first season. BattleshipMan (talk) 08:19, February 6, 2020 (UTC)
I think Francis should be recurring for the first season and also midseason, a police lieutenant should join in at a recurring basis, like what I saw in Hartman. BattleshipMan (talk) 19:07, February 10, 2020 (UTC)
Sounds good. What do you think happened to Wie's sister since she is taking care of her sister's kids (a boy and a girl)? BattleshipMan (talk) 07:33, February 14, 2020 (UTC)
Nice to know. I added the ideas of The Sullivans in my profile page with subplot ideas from seasons 1 and 2 among thing. Any more subplot ideas for season 2 would be good. BattleshipMan (talk) 22:13, February 14, 2020 (UTC)
Hi, sorry to bother you. I could use your input on the plans for The Sullivans on my profile page and what story of episode 13 of Hartman should involve. BattleshipMan (talk) 20:05, March 4, 2020 (UTC)
Those plans sounds good. I might make some minor changes, but thanks for the help. I think in season 2 is where we introduce the families of Holmes and Andrea. For partners, I think Drake should partner up with Andrea and Ruiz will partner up with Holmes.
BTW, I added episode 13 of season 11 of Hartman. I haven't gotten the title name of it and I'm not sure what personal events of the main characters will have in it. BattleshipMan (talk) 18:46, March 5, 2020 (UTC)
Ah, Nash. I saw that Ednasharon24534 has added a brief summary of the 19th episode of season 22 of Law & Order: New Orleans. I think maybe I'll add the summary of the backdoor pilot of The Sullivans on season 11 of Hartman and leave the rest of the episodes of that season blank until the triple crossover has been written. How's that? BattleshipMan (talk) 03:37, March 23, 2020 (UTC)

The Sullivans backdoor pilot added Edit

The backdoor pilot of The Sullivans is added on Hartman. So do your thing on it. BattleshipMan (talk) 15:05, March 23, 2020 (UTC)

Good job working on it. BTW, so you know. I added The Sullivans. There's some season 1 news I put up, including how Odette Annable and Kelly Hu will later join the show. BattleshipMan (talk) 05:01, March 25, 2020 (UTC)
Alright, I managed to add some backstory of some of the recurring characters. It was my best describe them. Katherine and the others in the D.A. Office, I'm not sure what to describe their backstory. BattleshipMan (talk) 04:25, March 29, 2020 (UTC)
I was able to add the backstory of Doyle, Hessa and Bishop and partially for Nazario. Don't exactly know what to describe Katherine yet. From what I figure, she is a 15-year ADA and became Executive ADA with a near perfect conviction record. We know that she and her brother Joey saw their parents and two older siblings murdered by a mob hitman when their father was going to testify against the New York mob boss, which she and Joey are estranged as the result of it. Katherine is know to be steadfast & uncompromising against those who commit unspeakable acts against families & children, but is compassionate toward victims of domestic violence, child abuse & rape and loves her family. BattleshipMan (talk) 19:21, March 29, 2020 (UTC)

Have you heard from Talix about Dallas and the crossover? Only asking. (Ednasharon24534)

My idea for a Hartman spin-off/miniseries Edit

I got a idea but it isn't clear yet. My idea will mainly involved youngester of Hartman characters, a spin-off/mainseries will take place during season 12 of Hartman when the adults investigate crimes. They still gets involved in the beginning of season 12.

"The kids planned to create their own club while the adults working on their job. But a young girl reveals a dark secret which makes things difficult for the young investigations."

It will have 7 episodes with 22-27 minutes before their story will come together in the middle of Season 12 when the adults getting involved of their kids' mess.

Young Investigations: Daniel, Aurora, Angela, Jonathan, Diana Boscorelli, Marisol Barrera, Harrison Castillo, Ashley Novak-Lowry and Sean Novak-Lowry.

Other kids are involved like Stephen and Vanessa - Everett's older children and Harrison's siblings. The adults from the show will appear for a small cameo.

Yes or no for my idea; it will not become a long-time series, just short spin-off for Season 12.  It will premiere a day after episode 3 of Hartman (season 12).(Ednasharon24534)

The Sullivans characters Edit

I noticed that you have ideas for characters like A.D.A. Joshua Saxe (Matthew Goode), Lt. Henry Sykes (Ted Danson), Det. Nathan Redruth (Taylor Lautner) and Det. John Lincoln (Kenton Duty) in your profile page, as well as Wie, Quelling & Alicia Pearce (which I know of before). Wie & Quelling will become series regulars (Wie in season 2 and Quelling in season 3) and Pearce will be recurring in season 2 for the plot arc of The Sullivans. What's the involvement of Saxe, Sykes, Redruth and Lincoln in the show?

In season 2, Bishop will have a personal tragedy midway in season 2 and appointed A.D.A. Jeremy Pierce (Neal McDonough) as interim DA. I'm going to have Bishop retired as DA at the end of season 3. BattleshipMan (talk) 00:20, March 30, 2020 (UTC)

Nice ideas, actually. After Bishop retires, Pierce should be DA as of season 4. I think around in the potential season 6, with Sykes as Lieutenant, Winder will retire at the end of season 6 and Sykes will take a captain exam & will become Captain in the potential season 7. BattleshipMan (talk) 04:44, March 30, 2020 (UTC)
Well, I think either Rob Brown or Thomas Gibson will be goods ones as a Lieutenant in season 7. I think the best name for that character will be Lieutenant Gordon Stevens. What do you think? BattleshipMan (talk) 04:09, March 31, 2020 (UTC)
Okay. Here's some suggested names for the Lieutenant in season 7. Mike Coffey, Andrew Williams, Barry Knox, Robert Smith, Kevin Chambers, Benjamin Lloyd, Nick Lynch and Terry Buckley. See what you think of the names. BattleshipMan (talk) 06:17, March 31, 2020 (UTC)
Yes, that would work. I think Rob Brown is a right pick for Issac Whitlock since I saw him in Blindspot. Also, I hope Talix will give a reply soon. BattleshipMan (talk) 20:42, March 31, 2020 (UTC)
I have Lance Henriksen guest as Katherine's uncle who raised her and Joey after their parents and two siblings were killed in season 1. I think in season 3, Drake and Ryan's family will be further explored. BattleshipMan (talk) 14:52, April 1, 2020 (UTC)
I have one plan for a potential season 3. Drake and Ryan's family will be explored. A relative of Katherine passed away in New York and she, Drake, Ryan, Finn and Mary go to New York to attend a funeral. They would make a pit stop in Boston where Drake and Ryan's relatives live for a quick visit. I'm not sure what to name the relatives, but here's what i thought of. Ryan has an older brother who is a retired Coast Guardsmen living in Boston and he has a son (Travis Van Winkle) who is a firefighter and a daughter (Amanda Righetti) who is train operator for Massachusetts Bay Transportation Authority, both of them are Drake's cousins. The son is a married to a Boston SWAT officer (Jaina Lee Ortiz) having met while in a hostage situation. The daughter is married with a son. What do you think? BattleshipMan (talk) 03:51, April 5, 2020 (UTC)
I think either Stephen Lang or Michael Rooker would portray Ryan's older brother. I'm not sure the names of the extended Sullivan family. BattleshipMan (talk) 03:53, April 7, 2020 (UTC)
I think I came up with some names and added a family member for the extended family who will appear in the potential season 3. Ryan's older brother could be either Desmond, Patrick or Mark. The brother's wife (Cherry Jones), a semi-retired IT expert, could be named either Tara, Chloe, Emily or Clara. The brother's son who is a firefighter could be named Thomas, Adam or Daniel. The daughter who is the train operator could be either name Abbie, Grace or Megan. What do you think? BattleshipMan (talk) 01:36, April 11, 2020 (UTC)
I hope you can reply to me and Ednasharon24534 about our messages. BattleshipMan (talk) 14:12, April 17, 2020 (UTC)
I understand how things are busy around here now. Anyway, I put those names for the Sullivan extended family in my profile and I added the name of Daniel's wife on there too. BattleshipMan (talk) 21:09, April 17, 2020 (UTC)

Any word... Edit

Any news from Talix  about Law & Order: Dallas and the crossover? (Ednasharon24534)

I have to say this. This is taking way too long already. I hope we get an answer from Talix soon. BattleshipMan (talk) 16:34, March 31, 2020 (UTC)
I think what we should do since we saw that 15th episodes of both Law & Order: New Orleans and Hartman were added, we should maybe probably add the other episodes of each show while we wait for Talix to add his stuff...that is if he's going to do it. Other than that, I'm not sure what to do if it takes too long for Talix to add his stuff on Law & Order: Dallas. BattleshipMan (talk) 20:09, April 8, 2020 (UTC)


Should you work with writing of full history (biography & personality) of Hartman (TV Series) current and former main characters? I did some but I have been busy. It has been season 11 so yet and we are still waiting on Talix. Focus on that while waiting for an answer from Talix. (Ednasharon24534)

I think next week if there's no response from Talix, we should add the 14th episode crossovers in New Orleans and Hartman because Talix has not been answering. If he does respond later on and added it, we'll edit those episodes. BattleshipMan (talk) 01:44, May 10, 2020 (UTC)

Flashback characters Edit

I am going to clear out about the flashback characters, how old are they in 1992 and which year they was born.

Royce will turn 45 at the beginning of the flashback episode where his campaign manager was found stabbed to death at his home after the mayor's birthday party.

  • Kathryn Newton - Tawny Thompson (age 23 in 1992, born at 1969)
  • Patrick Wilson - Bill Royce (age 44/45* in 1992, born at 1947)
  • Elizabeth Banks - ADA Holly Donovan (age 43 in 1992, born at 1949)
  • Patricia Arquette - Captain Siobhan Thompson (age 50 in 1992, born in 1942)
  • Carmen Ejogo - Detective Jane Daniels (age 42 in 1992, born at 1950)
  • Claire Foy - Shannon Royce (age 36 in 1992, born at 1956)
  • AJ Cook - Vanessa Donovan (age 39 in 1992, born in 1953)

Detroit Edit

Parker and Queen will appear in flashback
New Orleans to Detroit

The journey is long...

episode at present day. They will appear in some scenes in some scenes their journey to Detroit and the rest of the episode shows the full story of their first case.

The episode will end in present day when Parker and Queen arrive at Detroit to confront their past (to end the episode with cliffhanger) (Ednasharon24534)

Villain Fanon Wikia Edit

I found a Fan-made wiki about Villain in the internet. To create your own villain. [[1]]

Can you fix episode 19 of Hartman season 11? I tries to follow the plot from the last episode. There is the short summary of episode 19. My best one.

"Tenision rise between Hartman and the team after Richie Daniels' arrest when Hartman believe there is something fishy over Jasmine's death. While, Delgaldo finds himself in dangerous situation as older kids target Daniel over his dead mother and Taylor visits Nancy's father in prison where their connection are revealed."

(Ednasharon24534)

Richie Daniels Edit

Who will plays Richie Daniels in season 11 of Hartman? (Ednasharon24534)

Depends on the age and ethnicity of Richie Daniels. BattleshipMan (talk) 21:21, April 25, 2020 (UTC)

Hartman/The Sullivans crossoverEdit

You know, I think there should a midseason crossover between Hartman and The Sullivans. BattleshipMan (talk) 21:21, April 25, 2020 (UTC)

I think The Sullivans should start the first part of the crossover and conclude it with Hartman, so that Drake and Katherine can visit Hartman's family like she did with them in the backdoor pilot. BattleshipMan (talk) 14:46, May 11, 2020 (UTC)

Flashback episode Edit

What is the plot of flashback episode of Law & Order: New Orleans? I want to do it but I trusted you because you are the better writer. I was thinking to end the flashback with a shock twist... and episode 19, we are taking a short break to wait for Talix over crossover. If he taking too long, just create two parts crossover between New Orleans and Hartman. (Ednasharon24534)

I think Ednasharon24534 is right. If Talix takes too long past them, we will just do a two part crossover with New Orleans and Hartman. If he does return and has written it in his own end, we will rewrite those crossover episodes. Also, you might want to write the 19th episode of New Orleans. BattleshipMan (talk) 02:09, April 27, 2020 (UTC)

Don't worry about the plot of Flashback episode. I am going to do the plot. Just wait when I finished (Ednasharon24534)

I know I am writing a long plot but after I finished it, I will sort out a page for flashback episode and then you rewrite everything shorter in Law & Order: New Orleans page. (Ednasharon24534)

Help me out... Nash. I mess up with the flashback episode.  I through McCorrea was born in 1970s but I got it wrong. McCorrea was born in 1982, making it almost 10. I change the story but right back where I started. (Ednasharon24534)

And Carcaterra is 27/28 in flashback episode and Josh Server is 41 years old. Too old to play a 27 years old detective. Change the actor as young Carcaterra. (Ednasharon24534)

I have finished the plot of flashback episode and added the page of "The First Case" to let you know.(Ednasharon24534)

One thing, don't rewrite anything short yet until I added all of the plot in "The First Case" page. OK? (Ednasharon24534; 11.39pm) May 5, 2020

Hartman final three season 11 episodes Edit

I probably will write the third to last episode of season 11 of Hartman. Any hints that could help out for it? BattleshipMan (talk) 02:28, May 8, 2020 (UTC)

What about part 2 of the season finale of Hartman? BattleshipMan (talk) 01:49, May 11, 2020 (UTC)

Parker's familyEdit

Who will play Parker's older brothers - James, Davis and Robert (only appear at police academy in 1992) in flashback episode? I am having bit of a problem of finding actors... (Ednasharon24534; 1.52am) May 9, 2020

Plan? Edit

I am bit shocked that you choose Hartman (TV Series) to be end after 12 seasons. I thought the show will carry on longer but why? What is your plan? (Ednasharon24534; 3.47am) May 11, 2020.

And I already added Tom Felton in The First Case (Law & Order: New Orleans) as Joseph Morgan - the reporter and Tawny Thompson's colleague. I should warn you, it must be difficult. (Ednasharon24534)

I already know the plan but should we renamed it to task force something, not characters show title because it sound better than your idea name? It will mainly involves a team than two main characters.

To make something different...(Ednasharon24534; 3.35pm) May 15, 2020

Your idea is OK but I don't like the name of the show.  (Ednasharon24534; 3.11pm) May 15, 2020.

I think it's an alright name. It's like Cagney & Lacy and Rizzoli & Isles. Think about that. BattleshipMan (talk) 16:32, May 15, 2020 (UTC)
I don't know the name sound the same but bit odd. I know this is long time to start everything, what is the name of task force? "Task force?" It will sound better. (Ednasharon24534; 8.28pm) May 15, 2020.
Let it be. It's Nash's choice. Besides, "Vargas & Shane" sounds okay to me. BattleshipMan (talk) 20:21, May 19, 2020 (UTC)
OK but I still thinks the name of task force could be the name of the show, could be better. "Vargas & Shane" sound random. No offence but it is my opinion... Don't want to argue and this is Nash's choice, his decision. That is my final say. (Ednasharon24534, 1.19am) May 21, 2020

Hold on? Edit

I am sorry. What is a task force? I thought I knew but I actually don't... Help me out, anybody? Please? (Ednasharon24534; 8.36pm) May 15, 2020

I'm sure we'll know the name of the task force soon enough. BattleshipMan (talk) 19:41, May 15, 2020 (UTC)

The two crossover episodesEdit

I think we should write the episodes that weren't meant to do a triple crossover with Dallas. Once Dallas is written, we'll rewrite them. BattleshipMan (talk) 19:41, May 15, 2020 (UTC)

Hartman Season 12 Ideas Edit

I got a idea for Hartman season 12 premiere. It will be very difficult. The premiere will be a special lockdown episode which mainly involved on Hartman and the team handle the situations while the city goes to lockdown. We wants to explain how the police and D.A and their loved one handle everything while being on lockdown during works and home.

It will not be a two parts episode, it will be 70 minutes special - longer episode ever of Hartman series. Episode 2 will move forward after the lockdown, carrying on as normal with normal minutes. I think my idea will worry because I seen other shows attempts to handle the topic but it will be different with the lives of police and D.A during lockdown.

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=F3jKkU0GBIk

https://www.digitalspy.com/soaps/emmerdale/a32627796/emmerdale-return-to-filming-coronavirus-lockdown-episodes/

(Ednasharon24534, 7.15pm) May 21, 2020.

Wait a minute, Ednasharon24534. The year of Hartman season 12 is actually 2029, which is nine years after all this. I get your intentions for this idea of yours, but seems inconsistent with the year of season 12. Also, if the idea does happen, it will have to be in flashback. BattleshipMan (talk) 18:21, May 21, 2020 (UTC)
Yikes, I didn't know but I don't think the flashback episode will be sorted. I wants a show to deals a real-life topic, a life during lockdown. The show we create is not real life, just fandom. We can use the idea but change it bit. (7.27pm, Ednasharon24534) May 21, 2020.
I know the show's fandom. I'm just trying to get you to understand the issues of consistency of the years of it. Alright, just make some necessary changes for it, but have it look like the people knew what they are doing after all this and have a fictional illness, among other things. BattleshipMan (talk) 18:30, May 21, 2020 (UTC)
What about a massive earthquake? L.A. tends to have a lot of those. BattleshipMan (talk) 18:46, May 21, 2020 (UTC)
It could work. Great idea. The city goes to lockdown while emergency attempts to deal the situation, attempts to protect the public. (Ednasharon24534; 7.47pm) May 21, 2020.
Season 12 premiere will takes place 3 weeks after season finale. The next episode will takes place 5 months after the crisis. To make things easier. And nobody will died, it will be a life situation during city lockdown and all of the characters is involved. Nobody will be miss out.(Ednasharon24534, 8.10/19pm, 3.17am) May 21, 2020.

The Sullivans characters added Edit

I added some the characters of The Sullivans, including Drake Sullivan, Katherine Sullivan and Eugene Winder. Feel free to make some changes in some of their family names. BattleshipMan (talk) 22:05, May 24, 2020 (UTC)

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