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:Jackson also has an older brother who is a gun runner who is an CI for the Denver Police. Hessa has a older brother who is an FBI agent. What do you think of my picks? [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 04:41, January 24, 2020 (UTC)
 
:Jackson also has an older brother who is a gun runner who is an CI for the Denver Police. Hessa has a older brother who is an FBI agent. What do you think of my picks? [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 04:41, January 24, 2020 (UTC)
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::Yes, that's true. I think the Donnell family, Hessa's brother and maybe Jackson's father will wait until season 2. Besides, I'm not even sure who else will recur in the first season. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 07:17, January 24, 2020 (UTC)
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:::I might start the first season of ''The Sullivans'' after Hartman and L&O: NO finishes their seasons.
   
 
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Are you doing [[Law & Order: Dallas]] before crossover? Talix has been goes off since August... (Ednasharon24534)
 
Are you doing [[Law & Order: Dallas]] before crossover? Talix has been goes off since August... (Ednasharon24534)
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:I have to say this. I'm not sure how long we should wait for Talix to write the crossover in his end. I hate to say this, but if he takes too long, we should change plans for it. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 02:17, April 19, 2020 (UTC)
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== 200th episode ==
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I am thinking that 200th episode of Hartman to be 60 minutes episode to make it different and long than other episode. (Ednasharon24534)
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:Who do you think should write that episode since it's main focus is the wedding of Grieco and Ramsay? [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 03:42, January 29, 2020 (UTC)
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::I wrote the 200th episode of Hartman. I tried my best to figure what would happen to the past main characters and such with it. If there's anything to add, do so. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 19:20, January 29, 2020 (UTC)
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== Triple crossover ==
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Nash, have you heard from [[User:Talix|Talix]]? He/she has only wrote the first episode of the current season of L&O: Dallas and he/she said he was having personal issues and that he will work on it. But Ednasharon24534 is anxious to get that triple crossover done and I'm a little concerned about this. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 15:27, January 30, 2020 (UTC)
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== 13th season 11 episode of Hartman and 12th and 13th episode of L&O: NO ==
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I wonder what social issue the 13th episode of season 11 of Hartman should be about. I wouldn't what the best social issue might be during the case. Also, we should write the 12th and 13th episodes of L&O: New Orleans since they are before the triple crossover event in the 14th episodes in each shows. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 22:54, February 2, 2020 (UTC)
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:?Any ideas what social issue the 11x13 of Hartman should have? [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 18:51, February 19, 2020 (UTC)
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== Plans for the first seasons of ''The Sullivan'' ==
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Here are the plans for the potential first season of ''The Sullivans''.
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*Drake helps Katherine find the mob hitman who killed her parents and two older siblings when she and her brother Joey were young. Hessa later joins in to help them out.
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*Ruiz's womanizing ways often ires other members of the FJU, including Winder.
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*The newly-married Holmes will become a father.
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*One of Donnell's daughters witnessed a crime.
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*Newly assigned Sergeant Nicole Richter adjusts to her post while continue visiting AA meetings for her previous opioids addiction while trying to get custody for her son.
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*Bishop and Doyle have an awkward working relationship due to Bishop's conservative views and that one of Bishop's daughters is a lesbian which led to a previous estrangement as the result of it.
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*Katherine's estranged brother Joey appears in one or two episodes when he did a book signing in Denver of one of his novels.
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*One episode will be mostly flashback on how Drake and Katherine met and how they became a couple.
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*Nazario struggles with his health due to years of drinking, smoking, and some poor dieting.
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*Ryan becomes restless in his retirement and lending himself out as a part-time legal consultant.
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*Winder becomes Holmes' go-to guy for advice on fatherhood. Also, he deals with his older son finishing medical school, and his younger son graduating college and opting to join the FBI as an agent.
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*Finn and Mary face bullying from several other kids at school, and the reasons behind it turn out to be linked to a previous case their parents worked on. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 17:10, February 5, 2020 (UTC)
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*Nice ideas for Winder, Nazario, Ryan and the Sullivan kids. I know for Hessa; she used to be an undercover FBI agent until she got fired for torturing a terror suspect to stop an attack and Katherine helped her get a job as a DA Investigator, which is why she is helping her and Drake find the hitman in that first season. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 08:19, February 6, 2020 (UTC)
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::I think Francis should be recurring for the first season and also midseason, a police lieutenant should join in at a recurring basis, like what I saw in Hartman. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 19:07, February 10, 2020 (UTC)
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:::Sounds good. What do you think happened to Wie's sister since she is taking care of her sister's kids (a boy and a girl)? [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 07:33, February 14, 2020 (UTC)
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:Nice to know. I added the ideas of ''The Sullivans'' in my profile page with subplot ideas from seasons 1 and 2 among thing. Any more subplot ideas for season 2 would be good. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 22:13, February 14, 2020 (UTC)
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::Hi, sorry to bother you. I could use your input on the plans for ''The Sullivans'' on my profile page and what story of episode 13 of ''Hartman'' should involve. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 20:05, March 4, 2020 (UTC)
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:::Those plans sounds good. I might make some minor changes, but thanks for the help. I think in season 2 is where we introduce the families of Holmes and Andrea. For partners, I think Drake should partner up with Andrea and Ruiz will partner up with Holmes.
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:::BTW, I added episode 13 of season 11 of ''Hartman''. I haven't gotten the title name of it and I'm not sure what personal events of the main characters will have in it. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 18:46, March 5, 2020 (UTC)
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:Ah, Nash. I saw that Ednasharon24534 has added a brief summary of the 19th episode of season 22 of [[Law & Order: New Orleans]]. I think maybe I'll add the summary of the backdoor pilot of ''The Sullivans'' on season 11 of Hartman and leave the rest of the episodes of that season blank until the triple crossover has been written. How's that? [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 03:37, March 23, 2020 (UTC)
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== The Sullivans backdoor pilot added ==
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The backdoor pilot of ''The Sullivans'' is added on ''Hartman''. So do your thing on it. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 15:05, March 23, 2020 (UTC)
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:Good job working on it. BTW, so you know. I added ''[[The Sullivans]]''. There's some season 1 news I put up, including how Odette Annable and Kelly Hu will later join the show. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 05:01, March 25, 2020 (UTC)
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::Alright, I managed to add some backstory of some of the recurring characters. It was my best describe them. Katherine and the others in the D.A. Office, I'm not sure what to describe their backstory. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 04:25, March 29, 2020 (UTC)
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:::I was able to add the backstory of Doyle, Hessa and Bishop and partially for Nazario. Don't exactly know what to describe Katherine yet. From what I figure, she is a 15-year ADA and became Executive ADA with a near perfect conviction record. We know that she and her brother Joey saw their parents and two older siblings murdered by a mob hitman when their father was going to testify against the New York mob boss, which she and Joey are estranged as the result of it. Katherine is know to be steadfast & uncompromising against those who commit unspeakable acts against families & children, but is compassionate toward victims of domestic violence, child abuse & rape and loves her family. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 19:21, March 29, 2020 (UTC)
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Have you heard from Talix about Dallas and the crossover? Only asking. (Ednasharon24534)
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== My idea for a Hartman spin-off/miniseries ==
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I got a idea but it isn't clear yet. My idea will mainly involved youngester of Hartman characters, a spin-off/mainseries will take place during season 12 of Hartman when the adults investigate crimes. They still gets involved in the beginning of season 12.
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"The kids planned to create their own club while the adults working on their job. But a young girl reveals a dark secret which makes things difficult for the young investigations."
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It will have 7 episodes with 22-27 minutes before their story will come together in the middle of Season 12 when the adults getting involved of their kids' mess.
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Young Investigations: Daniel, Aurora, Angela, Jonathan, Diana Boscorelli, Marisol Barrera, Harrison Castillo, Ashley Novak-Lowry and Sean Novak-Lowry.
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Other kids are involved like Stephen and Vanessa - Everett's older children and Harrison's siblings. The adults from the show will appear for a small cameo.
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Yes or no for my idea; it will not become a long-time series, just short spin-off for Season 12.  It will premiere a day after episode 3 of Hartman (season 12).(Ednasharon24534)
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== The Sullivans characters ==
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I noticed that you have ideas for characters like A.D.A. Joshua Saxe (Matthew Goode), Lt. Henry Sykes (Ted Danson), Det. Nathan Redruth (Taylor Lautner) and Det. John Lincoln (Kenton Duty) in your profile page, as well as Wie, Quelling & Alicia Pearce (which I know of before). Wie & Quelling will become series regulars (Wie in season 2 and Quelling in season 3) and Pearce will be recurring in season 2 for the plot arc of ''The Sullivans''. What's the involvement of Saxe, Sykes, Redruth and Lincoln in the show?
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In season 2, Bishop will have a personal tragedy midway in season 2 and appointed A.D.A. Jeremy Pierce (Neal McDonough) as interim DA. I'm going to have Bishop retired as DA at the end of season 3. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 00:20, March 30, 2020 (UTC)
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:Nice ideas, actually. After Bishop retires, Pierce should be DA as of season 4. I think around in the potential season 6, with Sykes as Lieutenant, Winder will retire at the end of season 6 and Sykes will take a captain exam & will become Captain in the potential season 7. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 04:44, March 30, 2020 (UTC)
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::Well, I think either Rob Brown or Thomas Gibson will be goods ones as a Lieutenant in season 7. I think the best name for that character will be Lieutenant Gordon Stevens. What do you think? [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 04:09, March 31, 2020 (UTC)
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:::Okay. Here's some suggested names for the Lieutenant in season 7. Mike Coffey, Andrew Williams, Barry Knox, Robert Smith, Kevin Chambers, Benjamin Lloyd, Nick Lynch and Terry Buckley. See what you think of the names. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 06:17, March 31, 2020 (UTC)
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::::Yes, that would work. I think Rob Brown is a right pick for Issac Whitlock since I saw him in ''Blindspot''. Also, I hope Talix will give a reply soon. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 20:42, March 31, 2020 (UTC)
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:I have Lance Henriksen guest as Katherine's uncle who raised her and Joey after their parents and two siblings were killed in season 1. I think in season 3, Drake and Ryan's family will be further explored. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 14:52, April 1, 2020 (UTC)
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::I have one plan for a potential season 3. Drake and Ryan's family will be explored. A relative of Katherine passed away in New York and she, Drake, Ryan, Finn and Mary go to New York to attend a funeral. They would make a pit stop in Boston where Drake and Ryan's relatives live for a quick visit. I'm not sure what to name the relatives, but here's what i thought of. Ryan has an older brother who is a retired Coast Guardsmen living in Boston and he has a son (Travis Van Winkle) who is a firefighter and a daughter (Amanda Righetti) who is train operator for Massachusetts Bay Transportation Authority, both of them are Drake's cousins. The son is a married to a Boston SWAT officer (Jaina Lee Ortiz) having met while in a hostage situation. The daughter is married with a son. What do you think? [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 03:51, April 5, 2020 (UTC)
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:::I think either Stephen Lang or Michael Rooker would portray Ryan's older brother. I'm not sure the names of the extended Sullivan family. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 03:53, April 7, 2020 (UTC)
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::::I think I came up with some names and added a family member for the extended family who will appear in the potential season 3. Ryan's older brother could be either Desmond, Patrick or Mark. The brother's wife (Cherry Jones), a semi-retired IT expert, could be named either Tara, Chloe, Emily or Clara. The brother's son who is a firefighter could be named Thomas, Adam or Daniel. The daughter who is the train operator could be either name Abbie, Grace or Megan. What do you think? [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 01:36, April 11, 2020 (UTC)
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::::::I hope you can reply to me and Ednasharon24534 about our messages. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 14:12, April 17, 2020 (UTC)
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:I understand how things are busy around here now. Anyway, I put those names for the Sullivan extended family in my profile and I added the name of Daniel's wife on there too. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 21:09, April 17, 2020 (UTC)
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== Any word... ==
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Any news from Talix  about Law & Order: Dallas and the crossover? (Ednasharon24534)
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:I have to say this. This is taking way too long already. I hope we get an answer from Talix soon. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 16:34, March 31, 2020 (UTC)
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::I think what we should do since we saw that 15th episodes of both ''Law & Order: New Orleans'' and ''Hartman'' were added, we should maybe probably add the other episodes of each show while we wait for Talix to add his stuff...that is if he's going to do it. Other than that, I'm not sure what to do if it takes too long for Talix to add his stuff on ''Law & Order: Dallas''. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 20:09, April 8, 2020 (UTC)
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Should you work with writing of full history (biography & personality) of [[Hartman (TV Series)]] current and former main characters? I did some but I have been busy. It has been season 11 so yet and we are still waiting on Talix. Focus on that while waiting for an answer from Talix. (Ednasharon24534)
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:I think next week if there's no response from Talix, we should add the 14th episode crossovers in New Orleans and Hartman because Talix has not been answering. If he does respond later on and added it, we'll edit those episodes. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 01:44, May 10, 2020 (UTC)
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== Flashback characters ==
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I am going to clear out about the flashback characters, how old are they in 1992 and which year they was born.
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Royce will turn 45 at the beginning of the flashback episode where his campaign manager was found stabbed to death at his home after the mayor's birthday party.
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*Kathryn Newton - Tawny Thompson (age 23 in 1992, born at 1969)
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*Patrick Wilson - Bill Royce (age 44/45* in 1992, born at 1947)
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*Elizabeth Banks - ADA Holly Donovan (age 43 in 1992, born at 1949)
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*Patricia Arquette - Captain Siobhan Thompson (age 50 in 1992, born in 1942)
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*Carmen Ejogo - Detective Jane Daniels (age 42 in 1992, born at 1950)
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*Claire Foy - Shannon Royce (age 36 in 1992, born at 1956)
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*AJ Cook - Vanessa Donovan (age 39 in 1992, born in 1953)
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== Detroit ==
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Parker and Queen will appear in flashback[[File:New_Orleans_to_Detroit.jpg|thumb|330px|The journey is long...]] episode at present day. They will appear in some scenes in some scenes their journey to Detroit and the rest of the episode shows the full story of their first case.
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The episode will end in present day when Parker and Queen arrive at Detroit to confront their past (to end the episode with cliffhanger) (Ednasharon24534)
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== Villain Fanon Wikia ==
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I found a Fan-made wiki about Villain in the internet. To create your own villain.
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[[https://villainsfanon.fandom.com]]
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Can you fix episode 19 of Hartman season 11? I tries to follow the plot from the last episode. There is the short summary of episode 19. My best one.
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"Tenision rise between Hartman and the team after Richie Daniels' arrest when Hartman believe there is something fishy over Jasmine's death. While, Delgaldo finds himself in dangerous situation as older kids target Daniel over his dead mother and Taylor visits Nancy's father in prison where their connection are revealed."
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== Richie Daniels ==
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Who will plays Richie Daniels in season 11 of Hartman? (Ednasharon24534)
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:Depends on the age and ethnicity of Richie Daniels. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 21:21, April 25, 2020 (UTC)
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==Hartman/The Sullivans crossover==
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You know, I think there should a midseason crossover between Hartman and The Sullivans. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 21:21, April 25, 2020 (UTC)
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:I think ''The Sullivans'' should start the first part of the crossover and conclude it with ''Hartman'', so that Drake and Katherine can visit Hartman's family like she did with them in the backdoor pilot. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 14:46, May 11, 2020 (UTC)
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== Flashback episode ==
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What is the plot of flashback episode of [[Law & Order: New Orleans]]? I want to do it but I trusted you because you are the better writer. I was thinking to end the flashback with a shock twist... and episode 19, we are taking a short break to wait for Talix over crossover. If he taking too long, just create two parts crossover between New Orleans and Hartman. (Ednasharon24534)
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:I think Ednasharon24534 is right. If Talix takes too long past them, we will just do a two part crossover with New Orleans and Hartman. If he does return and has written it in his own end, we will rewrite those crossover episodes. Also, you might want to write the 19th episode of New Orleans. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 02:09, April 27, 2020 (UTC)
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Don't worry about the plot of Flashback episode. I am going to do the plot. Just wait when I finished (Ednasharon24534)
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I know I am writing a long plot but after I finished it, I will sort out a page for flashback episode and then you rewrite everything shorter in [[Law & Order: New Orleans]] page. (Ednasharon24534)
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Help me out... Nash. I mess up with the flashback episode.  I through McCorrea was born in 1970s but I got it wrong. McCorrea was born in 1982, making it almost 10. I change the story but right back where I started. (Ednasharon24534)
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And Carcaterra is 27/28 in flashback episode and Josh Server is 41 years old. Too old to play a 27 years old detective. Change the actor as young Carcaterra. (Ednasharon24534)
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I have finished the plot of flashback episode and added the page of "The First Case" to let you know.(Ednasharon24534)
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One thing, don't rewrite anything short yet until I added all of the plot in "The First Case" page. OK? (Ednasharon24534; 11.39pm) May 5, 2020
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== Hartman final three season 11 episodes ==
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I probably will write the third to last episode of season 11 of ''Hartman''. Any hints that could help out for it? [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 02:28, May 8, 2020 (UTC)
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:What about part 2 of the season finale of Hartman? [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 01:49, May 11, 2020 (UTC)
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==Parker's family==
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Who will play Parker's older brothers - James, Davis and Robert (only appear at police academy in 1992) in [[The First Case (Law & Order: New Orleans)|flashback episode]]? I am having bit of a problem of finding actors... (Ednasharon24534; 1.52am) May 9, 2020
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== Plan? ==
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I am bit shocked that you choose [[Hartman (TV Series)]] to be end after 12 seasons. I thought the show will carry on longer but why? What is your plan? (Ednasharon24534; 3.47am) May 11, 2020.
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And I already added Tom Felton in [[The First Case (Law & Order: New Orleans)]] as Joseph Morgan - the reporter and Tawny Thompson's colleague. I should warn you, it must be difficult. (Ednasharon24534)
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I already know the plan but should we renamed it to task force something, not characters show title because it sound better than your idea name? It will mainly involves a whole team than two main characters.
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To make something different...(Ednasharon24534; 3.35pm) May 15, 2020
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Your idea is OK but I don't like the name of the show.  (Ednasharon24534; 3.11pm) May 15, 2020.
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:I think it's an alright name. It's like Cagney & Lacy and Rizzoli & Isles. Think about that. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 16:32, May 15, 2020 (UTC)
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:I don't know the name sound the same but bit odd. I know this is long time to start everything, what is the name of task force? "Task force?" It will sound better. (Ednasharon24534; 8.28pm) May 15, 2020.
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::Let it be. It's Nash's choice. Besides, "Vargas & Shane" sounds okay to me. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 20:21, May 19, 2020 (UTC)
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:OK but I still thinks the name of task force could be the name of the show, could be better. "Vargas & Shane" sound random. No offence but it is my opinion... Don't want to argue and this is Nash's choice, his decision. That is my final say. (Ednasharon24534, 1.19am) May 21, 2020
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== Hold on? ==
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I am sorry. What is a task force? I thought I knew but I actually don't... Help me out, anybody? Please? (Ednasharon24534; 8.36pm) May 15, 2020
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:I'm sure we'll know the name of the task force soon enough. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 19:41, May 15, 2020 (UTC)
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==The two crossover episodes==
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I think we should write the episodes that weren't meant to do a triple crossover with ''Dallas''. Once ''Dallas'' is written, we'll rewrite them. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 19:41, May 15, 2020 (UTC)
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== Hartman Season 12 Ideas ==
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I got a idea for Hartman season 12 premiere. It will be very difficult. The premiere will be a special lockdown episode which mainly involved on Hartman and the team handle the situations while the city goes to lockdown. We wants to explain how the police and D.A and their loved one handle everything while being on lockdown during works and home.
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It will not be a two parts episode, it will be 70 minutes special - longer episode ever of Hartman series. Episode 2 will move forward after the lockdown, carrying on as normal with normal minutes. I think my idea will worry because I seen other shows attempts to handle the topic but it will be different with the lives of police and D.A during lockdown.
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https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=F3jKkU0GBIk
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https://www.digitalspy.com/soaps/emmerdale/a32627796/emmerdale-return-to-filming-coronavirus-lockdown-episodes/
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(Ednasharon24534, 7.15pm) May 21, 2020.
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:Wait a minute, Ednasharon24534. The year of Hartman season 12 is actually 2029, which is nine years after all this. I get your intentions for this idea of yours, but seems inconsistent with the year of season 12. Also, if the idea does happen, it will have to be in flashback. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 18:21, May 21, 2020 (UTC)
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:Yikes, I didn't know but I don't think the flashback episode will be sorted. I wants a show to deals a real-life topic, a life during lockdown. The show we create is not real life, just fandom. We can use the idea but change it bit. (7.27pm, Ednasharon24534) May 21, 2020.
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::I know the show's fandom. I'm just trying to get you to understand the issues of consistency of the years of it. Alright, just make some necessary changes for it, but have it look like the people knew what they are doing after all this and have a fictional illness, among other things. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 18:30, May 21, 2020 (UTC)
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:::What about a massive earthquake? L.A. tends to have a lot of those. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 18:46, May 21, 2020 (UTC)
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:::It could work. Great idea. The city goes to lockdown while emergency attempts to deal the situation, attempts to protect the public. (Ednasharon24534; 7.47pm) May 21, 2020.
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:::Season 12 premiere will takes place 3 weeks after season finale. The next episode will takes place 5 months after the crisis. To make things easier. And nobody will died, it will be a life situation during city lockdown and all of the characters is involved. Nobody will be miss out.(Ednasharon24534, 8.10/19pm, 3.17am) May 21, 2020.
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== The Sullivans characters added ==
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I added some the characters of ''[[The Sullivans]]'', including [[Drake Sullivan]], [[Katherine Sullivan]] and [[Eugene Winder]]. Feel free to make some changes in some of their family names. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 22:05, May 24, 2020 (UTC)
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:That's all the main characters of ''[[The Sullivans]]'' added. Thanks for the help. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 03:47, May 25, 2020 (UTC)
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::Most biographies and personalities in some of the main characters were added so far. Still will need to add some biographies in some of the characters like Drake, Katherine, Ryan, Finn, Mary, Winder and Doyle.
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::I have plans for one character in ''[[Law & Order: New Orleans]]'' to appear in ''The Sullivans'' in one episode as a guest star. I think maybe either [[Colton Renko]], [[Brianna Carter]] or [[Lisa Zhao]], one of those three anyway. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 03:11, May 28, 2020 (UTC)
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== We got a problem... ==
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How old are Karl and Marlene because we got a promise? The actors are both in 1948 and Chloe is born in 1976. What about her father? (Ednasharon24534; 1.42pm) May 25, 2020
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==Chloe Hartman==
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Can you write a full biography of [[Chloe Hartman]] during her time before and during [[Law & Order: New Orleans]] and [[Hartman (TV Series)]]? (Ednasharon24534, 9.54pm) May 27, 2020
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== I Do ==
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I have create a episode article of [[I Do (Hartman)]], 60 minutes special to make things easier, like [[The First Case (Law & Order: New Orleans)]]. (Ednasharon24534, 10.49pm) May 29, 2020.
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For season 12 premiere, 70 minutes will be too much, so I choose 60 minutes like the flashback episode of Law & Order: New Orleans and 200th episode of Hartman. It is easier... (Ednasharon24534, 11.39pm) May 29, 2020
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I have create a page for [[Hartman (TV Series)]]/[[The Sullivans]]'s [[Mile High City]] together along with part 1 and part 2. (Ednasharon24534, 8.03pm) June 3, 2020
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== Heard anything about the triple crossover ==
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Heard anything from [[User:Talix|Talix]]? [[User:Ednasharon24534|Ednasharon24534]] and I are trying to figure out what we should do about this. I think we should write it, even if we don't heard from him. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 00:05, June 5, 2020 (UTC)
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== Gordon and Ralph ==
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The reason why I change Ralph as Gordon's half-brother because they was different dad. Ralph's mother has a 1 year affair with a police officer which results her getting pregnant with Gordon but the officer refuse to let a part of his son. There will be one scene when a young Gordon confront his biological father after spying him with his family but the father turn nasty on Gordon and threatens to come after Gordon if he come near his family. The police officer's family never knew about Gordon or his involvement with Fontana's family. Gordon's father is still alive, a retired police officer with his secret could be under threatens.
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Gordon has a rocky relationship with his stepfather/"adopted father" because he favours his real son Ralph over his step-son. The episode will explore Gordon's personality during his childhood. (Ednasharon24534, 10.36-42pm) June 6, 2020
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Which explains some of the notes added... (Ednasharon24534, 10.54pm) June 6, 2020
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I changed Ralph Gordon's half-brother to brother but I haven't give up on the idea yet. Use it as a big reveal into the episode. (Ednasharon24534, 3.57am) June 7, 2020
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== Ideas for The Sullivans first season ==
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I have some referals for actors in their upper 50s to lower 60s to portray the hitman who killed most of Katherine's family in ''[[The Sullivans]]''. Either Sean Bean, Will Patton, William Baldwin, Jason Issacs, James Spader, Thomas Haden Church and D. B. Sweeney. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 02:37, June 7, 2020 (UTC)
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== Mile High City ==
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For the names of the other characters in [[Mile High City]] as seen on the cast section. Robert Beresford was the patriarch of the murdered family in Denver who prerecorded the message of what he discovered about the trucking company that is a front for smuggling children on the portable USB stick and put it in safe deposit box in a bank branch he doesn't go before he and his family got murdered. Norman Pearson is Drake's CI who reveals the trucking company has questionable ties since they hired some ex-convicts and rumor has it that several employees tried to come forward, but they either backed out, disappeared or died by various causes. Judge David Catalano was the one who signed the subpoena to gain access to the manifests of the trucks and the company's business records before that shootout began. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 20:47, June 7, 2020 (UTC)
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Can you leave Gordon and Ralph as a brothers for now? I think the plan to the reveals into the episode... make the audience they are brother until big reveals. (Ednasharon24534, 2.24am) June 8, 2020
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== Hartman subsections and plans for The Sullivans ==
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Couple of things.
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Ednasharon and I have added some season sub-sections of some of the Hartman main characters, ready for work. Do you think there should be the same thing with L&O New Orleans main characters?
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Secondly, there will be at least two or three appearances of Katherine's brother Joey in the first season. The first one will be the brief appearance where he does the book signing of his latest novel in various cities, with Denver as one of them. Katherine and Drake go to his book signing, even though he didn't invite them because of his estrangement with Katherine. The second one might have Joey's girlfriend ask Katherine about Joey since he won't open up to her about his own problems. Joey would get into a bitter argument with Katherine about his girlfriend's visit to her with Drake and Ryan present. Joey says that all he wants to forget his childhood trauma, but Katherine says it's having a negative impact on him and it's not helping him psychologically since he doesn't open up to people about it. Joey says that she just couldn't let go of her obsession to find the person who murdered their family. Katherine states that finding the man responsible will bring closure to them. Joey bitterly states that he doesn't want closure anymore and that she will never find the man responsible after all these years. Katherine says that she's been staying patient for her own family. Joey coldly asked what about him and says that her life is no better than his. Drake sternly defends Katherine because she saved his life before they were married and she is a good wife and loving mother to Finn & Mary. Drake also defends that she prosecuted and brought down a lot of big time criminals and helped a lot of victims get justice. Ryan, fed up with the argument, berated Joey for his behavior and that he could've just seek Katherine's help with his problems and let her reach out to him instead of isolating himself from the last remaining immediate family and those around him. Joey bitterly says that he is not her father. Ryan says that he loves Katherine like a daughter and he will defend her with everything, including what will do to find the hitman who killed most of Katherine's side of her family. Finally, he orders Joey to leave and he threatened him with something to convince to leave. Joey says that he wouldn't that since he's retired among other things, but Ryan says that he maybe retired, but he still has his connections. Joey then left in disgust.
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After he left, Katherine muttered that she can't believe her brother. Drake can see that Katherine is upset over her argument with Joey as Ryan says that he brought that to himself. Katherine told Ryan that she heard what Joey said, which means won't listen to reason and that he will further isolate himself if they don't find the hitman who killed most of her family. Ryan says that that depends on how he will be when that's finally solved as he went to his room. Drake gives his wife some needed comfort and Katherine is anguished over losing most of her family and how her life & Joey's could have been if it didn't happened. Drake consoles her that it wasn't her fault or her father's fault in that tragedy and that she has children who love her like he does love her. What do you think? [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 06:52, June 15, 2020 (UTC)
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:Thanks. Not sure when all this will happen. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 20:52, June 15, 2020 (UTC)
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== Advice about Dallas and the triple crossover ==
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[[User:Ednasharon24534|Ednasharon24534]] and I are thinking that maybe we all should write the triple crossover and maybe take over writing [[Law & Order: Dallas]] since Talix has been inactive for too long. Do you think we should do that? [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 18:08, June 17, 2020 (UTC)
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:What is RL? I never heard of it. I hope Talix returns soon so the crossover will be done. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 01:54, June 18, 2020 (UTC)
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==L&O NOLA characters & The Sullivans characters==
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Good idea about Stetler returning with a vengeance against Katherine, Drake and the FJU. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 01:56, June 18, 2020 (UTC)
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:Stetler would indeed make his first appearance in flashbacks in the first season in the 15th episode, maybe in two parts. Not sure about the two parts. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 03:08, June 18, 2020 (UTC)
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::BTW, [[User:Jacobr1020|Jacobr1020]] did add a brief episode summary of episode 2 of ''[[The Sullivans]]'', as you may have noticed. I scheduled the start of both series in either late July/early August after he wrote that summary. What do you think? [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 14:41, June 21, 2020 (UTC)
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::What about [[Law & Order: Dallas]] and three part crossover? Should we wait or not? Have anybody ask Talix when he is returning? Hopefully not too late. (Ednasharon24534, 4.28pm) June 21, 2020
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==Hartman Season 12==
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Can I do the plot of season 12 premiere, 60 minutes episode because the plot was my idea? The episode will takes place 3 weeks after season finale. I write the plot in Hartman season 12 selection and then create the episode page - adding everything, this is a better way. (Ednasharon24534, 4.24-26pm) June 21, 2020
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You and BattleshipMan can help with the plot because of my "grammar" (Ednasharon24534, 4.35-37pm) June 21, 2020
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:From what I can see, [[Gideon Chess]] is now elected DA since the season 11 finale has him two weeks away from getting elected DA. Also, remember the guest stars who will appear on the season 12 premiere. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 15:41, June 21, 2020 (UTC)
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::As a reminder, the guest stars on season 12 premiere include Sylvester Stallone (in the special guest starring role) as the Chief of the Los Angeles Fire Department, Carl Lumbly as the director of Office of Emergency Management, Anthony Edwards as the father of the trapped family one of the main characters is trying to save and Terry Kinney as the Chief of the Los Angeles Police Department. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 22:42, June 22, 2020 (UTC)
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:::Ednasharon should write season 12 premiere of Hartman and we'll make corrections & additions if we have to. I have a idea for the season 1 premiere of The Sullivans. It's when [[Nicole Richter]] joins FJU and we get introductions of [[Mario Nazario]] and [[Hessa Cohen]] since they weren't seen on the backdoor pilot. BTW, I added the article of The Sullivans character Officer [[Kyle Francis]]. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 22:42, June 22, 2020 (UTC)
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== OK ==
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I understand but I strongly don't like second spin off's title because it sound ransom and odd, this is my opinion, sorry.
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I still think the name of team force to be the show's title because it will make it bit better. And also what about Ramsey and Lowry? They need to get mainly involved, not just Vargas and Shane. The choice of show name is your but I just share my own opinions.
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In season 12 episode 7, the main reason why Gordon wants Hartman to get involved with because he wants someone to take the fall if the truth about his past, meaning he plans a trap for Hartman. I still planning the big reveal about Gordon's real mother.
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Gordon was adopted by Ralph's mother when he was baby, he knew the woman who he raised wasn't his real mother. He spends his life of tracking his real mother but when he finally finds her after seeing her with her other family, she furiously rejects him and threatens to come after him if he don't leave her alone. His biological mother's rejection change Gordon's personality which results his obsession with young girls. The reveals of Gordon's parentage will revisit a past story in Hartman series (before Season 8).
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(Ednasharon24534, 3.15pm) June 27, 2020
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:Hang on. It's Nash's decision on what spinoffs he titled them. Vargas and Shane sounds okay to me because it focuses on them and their professional & personal lives. Like I said before, it's like Cagney & Lacey and Rizzoli & Isles, which is fine. So cut Nash some slack about it.
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:Also, I'm not sure about that revelation idea about Gordon's past and how it will affect Hartman's life. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 14:41, June 27, 2020 (UTC)
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:Strongly for my reason; I do admits I got a plans for some characters of spin off show. Not just Vargas and Shane. I mean new added characters... I do like the title show but everyone need to get involved. That's my final saying
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(Ednasharon24534, 12.43-45am) July 1, 2020
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I am thinking a big plot twist into the story which could shocks the viewers if the show was real. '''Check this video out to understand what I mean:[[https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=4yQQ7br3GQU]]''' (Ednasharon24534, 3.59pm) June 27, 2020
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==The Sullivans season 1==
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I think the pilot episode of ''[[The Sullivans]]'' will have Drake and the FJU investigate a brutal beating of a mother and they suspect it was her husband who did it. At the same time, Richter joins the unit and is met with lukewarm reception or something along those lines because of her opiolds addiction. Then, after her husband discharges his wife, the home was set ablaze by the trapped family to escape from their abusive husband and father who went to great lengths to keep them inside. As Katherine seeks to prosecute him, Nazario and Cohen make their first appearance to conduct their own investigation to the case. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 01:37, June 29, 2020 (UTC)
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== Advices ==
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I need a small advices; if your friend or close one are unconscious with heroin in his system for hours and you can't call for police or ambulance because somebody is after you, how to wake him up and what will you do? This is for [[Silent]], the part where the lead female character tries to wake up her lover after he took the shot of heroin and being left unconscious for hours. The way I am handling is wrong, anybody will complain the way I am doing. Can you help me out? (Ednasharon24534, 2.45pm) June 30, 2020
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== Stories ==
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I noticed that you added a series of your own titled [[Shadow Kids]]. Why is that? I did add stories of my own, which is [[United Has Fallen]] and [[Pete's Dragon 2: Attack of the Dragons]].
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Also, what do you think of late July/early August as the premiere dates for Hartman season 12 and The Sullivans season 1? [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 17:32, July 3, 2020 (UTC)
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== Restaurant to Cinema (First Case) ==
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I change the scene of flashback episode of [[Law & Order: New Orleans]], [[The First Case (Law & Order: New Orleans)]] where Parker publicity confront Royce about Vanessa and Tawny in the cinema to make the arugment very public. "Batman Returns" was released in June 1992 where the episode was sets and also the film was bit hit for DC films in real life. https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Batman_Returns
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Check on the plot of the flashback episode:
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"'''Later, after finishing their day, Parker and Queen take their girlfriends on a double date at a cinema to see a film "Batman Returns". As they arrive at film screening, Parker and Queen see Royce, Shannon and their children attend the same cinema along with the bodyguards. During film showing, Parker sneaks behind Royce's seat where he confronts Royce about Vanessa. Royce claims that Vanessa has been stalking him for months and revealed the reason why she lost her career as a businesswoman. But when Parker attempts to question Royce about Tawny, Royce furiously lashes out at Parker before orders his guards to sort Parker's "big mouth" out. Royce's guards drag a yelling Parker out of the cinema as Queen, Denise, Paula and cinema audience look on.'''"
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(Ednasharon24534, 10.59pm) July 6, 2020
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== The Sullivans season 2 ==
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Nash, Ednasharon24534 thought of an idea for season 2 of The Sullivans. She thought of a five part trip of road to Europe, but with the ideas of season 2 of The Sullivans already planned out, I decided it will have to be in three parts taking place in Copenhagen. Maybe something related to the plot arc of that season. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 22:49, July 8, 2020 (UTC)
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:I am she. (Ednasharon24534, 12.21am) July 9, 2020.
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::Ah, sorry. Thanks for the clarity. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 23:24, July 8, 2020 (UTC)
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BattleShipMan choose Copenhagen as main location for season 2 but if you wants Interpol gets involved, he could work something out. (Ednasharon24534, 7.20pm) July 9, 2020
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:Oh, that's just for two or three episodes. Denver Vice Unit will still be involved with the FJU in that season. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 19:34, July 9, 2020 (UTC)
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== The premiere dates ==
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Around next week at least, the premiere of season 12 of ''Hartman'' and season 1 of ''The Sullivans'' should start. I would write episode one of The Sullivans and Ednasharon24534 said she would write episode one of Hartman. The plot summary of Episode 2 of The Sullivans was already written by Jacobr1020. What do you think we should do with it? [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 15:42, July 19, 2020 (UTC)
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I have started the plot of Hartman season 12 premiere. In opening scene, there are four different scenes start separately. One scene and then another scene but it happened at the same time and then earthquake start. I have added most of main characters in the opening scene. (Ednasharon24534, 12.46am) July 20, 2020
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The reason why most characters are moving to Hartman's house because it is a mix of safe and panic house, very protecting on inside and outside. Doesn't gets break anything around the house expect of the family's personal stuff. The house are very different than other characters' house... to let you know. (Ednasharon24534, 1.41am) July 22, 2020
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I call for a backup. The same guy has been editing and deleted stuff from my page - [[Silent]]. (Ednasharon24534, 3.57am) July 22, 2020
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== Mesenteric Ischemia ==
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Mesenteric Ischemia, Lowry's illness into the stomach... I tries to follow how to cause Mesenteric Ischemia during a scene in season 12 premiere. Look up on the links if you don't know about it.
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https://www.mayoclinic.org/diseases-conditions/intestinal-ischemia/diagnosis-treatment/drc-20373950#:~:text=Acute%20mesenteric%20artery%20ischemia,clots%20or%20dilate%20blood%20vessels.
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https://vascular.org/patient-resources/vascular-conditions/mesenteric-ischemia
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https://www.upmc.com/services/heart-vascular/conditions-treatments/chronic-mesenteric-ischemia#:~:text=What%20Is%20Chronic%20Mesenteric%20Ischemia,Weight%20loss
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(Ednasharon24534, 1.18am) July 25, 2020
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==[[7.5 (Hartman)|7.5]]==
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I finished the story... (Ednasharon24534, 10.11-12pm) July 27, 2020
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== 2nd episode The Sullivans ==
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What do you think we should add with the second episode of ''[[The Sullivans]]''? I did add that Drake convinced Katherine's defense lawyer friend Emily Thornton to represent the stepmother. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 05:17, July 28, 2020 (UTC)
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I have adding episode 2 of Hartman Season 12. "Peeping Tom". Check it. (Ednasharon24534, 10.47pm) July 29, 2020
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I have done third episode of Hartman season 12 "Living Dead Girl". A twisted case and a secret connection... (Ednasharon24534, 1.16am) August 2, 2020
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== Episode 5 of The Sullivans ==
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Nash, I have ideas on The Sullivans episode 5 that involves Doyle's sexuality and him dealing with a hate crime and also reveals Doyle & Bishop's awkward relationship because of Bishop's conservative views and a previous estrangement of his middle daughter due to the fact that she's a lesbian. Not sure which crime will be yet. Ednasharon will write episode 4 of the series. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 15:09, August 2, 2020 (UTC)
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:Now that episode 4 was written, episode 5 is ready to write. I don't know what the plans of it will be other than what I mentioned above. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 15:08, August 5, 2020 (UTC)
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I have added episode 5 of Hartman and The Sullivans. (Ednasharon24534, 2.58am) August 10, 2020
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I have added episode 6 of Hartman and The Sullivans. In Hartman, Hartman make a dangerous risk move while investigate a mysterious death of a young schoolgirl and discover Gordon's plan to sue visiting right for his children at the same time and in the Sullivans, a mysterious discover of a human bones found in school playground leads a old case from 17 years ago
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(Ednasharon24534, 1.07-11am) August 12, 2020.
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== The Sullivans episode 7 ==
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I've added episode 7 of The Sullivans. It's about Drake, Katherine and others celebrated the birth of Drake's late sister Amanda. Meanwhile, the FJU investigates the slaughter of the family, leaving one boy in the coma while trying to help a grieving mother (Jennifer Love Hewitt) go through with the tragedy. Drake and Katherine learn that her brother Joey is coming to Denver for his book signing. It's also where forensics psychologist and criminal profiler Dr. Kendall Fleiss makes her first appearance.
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I have added episode 7 of Hartman with a big twist and a some secrets being revealed from the grave (Ednasharon24534, 1.42am) August 15, 2020
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Who plays Emma Greico in flashbacks of season 7 and after that twist in season 12? She died in 1996 month after Beth turned 7.(Ednasharon24534, 1.02am) August 16, 2020
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== A fact about Barbara.... ==
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In season 7, Barbara Kinney mention she never had children of her but in season 12, it was revealed that Barbara has a son - Ralph - and adopted Gordon as her own. The part about having no more children was true but not the whole truth. When she was arrested for Emma's murder, Barbara didn't mention about her sons because she was trying to protect them and their family's legacy. 3 years after having Ralph, Barbara becoming infertile after involved in horrified accident. At the same time, Ralph's father was seeing Emma and got her pregnant with Gordon.
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Barbara knew about Emma being Gordon's real mother, wanting to wreck her life for abandoned Gordon and his son/cousin but she killed Emma during a fight before covering her death. Gordon knew Barbara kills Emma and they made a promise to keep each other secrets until years later, the past catch up with them.
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In 1964, Barbara was 18 when she has Ralph and in 1968, Emma was almost 22 when she has Gordon. Gordon's first son was born in 1985 but his aunt never knew the connection. Emma covers the truth to protect herself and her family.(Ednasharon24534, 1.29am) August 16, 2020.
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== Plans for The Sullivans in episodes 8-10 and 11. ==
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Since Ednasharon24534 will be writing the events on episode 8 and 10, the personal aspect of the characters, including the two episode with Katherine's brother Joey (who will appear in episodes 8 and 9), should be written by you and me. For episode 11, it will be the first appearance of Lieutenant Hannah Wie (Kelly Hu). [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 01:19, August 19, 2020 (UTC)
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:I think there should some necessary add-ons and changes of episode 8 of The Sullivans. I don't think that man with schizophrenia Wayne Prescott should stay in The Sullivans' house because Ryan is a judge and they got Finn & Mary living with their parents and grandfather, even though he will have some information regarding the hitman who killed most of Katherine's family. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 03:05, August 19, 2020 (UTC)
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:To have Wayne staying in The Sullivans' house is Katherine's idea because she feels sorry for him over the situation, not knowing the full picture. Drake will ends up back up Katherine's decision despite his colleagues' warning about Wayne's health and behaviour. In next episode, the team will make a shocking discovery involving Wayne. (Ednasharon24534, 4.25-26am) August 19, 2020
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::I added some stuff on episode 9 of ''The Sullivans''. I'm not sure about the ending Ednasharon put on it. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 17:44, August 19, 2020 (UTC)
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==Hartman 12.08-10==
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I have added episode 8 of Hartman. The team team up with their former colleague Jesse Temple to investigate a incident at bowling arena but things gets complicated while Hartman struggles after learning about Gordon's past. (Ednasharon24534, 3.24am) August 19, 2020
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I have added another episode (number 9) of Hartman and The Sullivans. Beth will learns about Gordon being her half-brother but not about Gordon's "incest" son yet.(Ednasharon24534, 6.20pm) August 19, 2020
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I have added episode 10 of Hartman. Barrera's daughters is accused of a crime, Abby and Beth seeking answers and an another secret about Gordon's past is revealed. (Ednasharon24534, 2.58-3.09am) August 22, 2020.
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== The Sullivans/Hartman crossover ==
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The crossover between those two shows should start with The Sullivans, when MCS detectives (not sure which ones yet) and Shane came over to the FJU about the case that is related to theirs. The sideplot of it will have Shane speak to fellow Gordon Fontana victim Wendy Driver. Then Drake, Katherine and one other detective (either Ruiz, Holmes or Andrea) would come to Los Angeles to help Hartman and the MCS, which Drake & Katherine visited Hartman at her home, like she did with them in the backdoor pilot. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 03:56, August 22, 2020 (UTC)
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:Alright, Nash. I will need some story ideas for the crossover, please. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 00:08, August 23, 2020 (UTC)
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== Terry Sanders' return ==
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I got a question. What is your idea involved Terry Sanders' return? I mean his character is dead. How will it work? (Ednasharon24534, 1.27am) August 23, 2020
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Good idea but can the ghosts appears in Episode 15 after Gordon exposed himself, his secrets and Hartman's "involvement". Also, the identity of Gordon's son/cousin will be revealed too. (Ednasharon24534, 5.22/23pm) August 23, 2020
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I have added episode 12 of The Sullivans and Hartman (most of the plot). (Ednasharon24534, 8.29pm) August 24, 2020.
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== Crossover #2 ==
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I have added crossover episode page [[Shards of Innocent/Shards of Guilt]]. (Ednasharon24534, 1.01am) August 27, 2020
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== Any ideas for 12.14 ==
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I am currently on break but any idea for episode 14? This episode will mainly involves on Dekker's campaign for state attorney and I was thinking to get Detective David McCall and Detective Thora Price involved. Also, Gordon sets a trap on Hartman to publicly expose himself but Hartman will be in huge trouble than Gordon, Lowry discover his husband's truth and the identity of Gordon's first born son will be revealed. (Ednasharon24534, 5.50pm) September 1, 2020.
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Gordon will be still in the hospital during episode 14 and 15 and the truth behind Gordon's attack will be revealed too. (Ednasharon24534, 6pm) September 1, 2020.
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== Talix has returned ==
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It seems that [[User:Talix|Talix]] is back and he made a edit on [[CSI: LA]]. Hopefully, he will work on [[Law & Order: Dallas]]. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 18:26, September 4, 2020 (UTC)
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Yes I'm back. I needed some personal time off. So regarding the crossover part, I will get to it very soon. [[User:Talix|Talix]] ([[User talk:Talix|talk]]) 10:08, September 5, 2020 (UTC)
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I have added the full plot of season 12 episode 14 of [[Hartman (TV Series)]]. The beginning of a downfall for Hartman... (Ednasharon24534, 7.31-34pm) September 6, 2020.
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== Detective Thora Price (Hartman) ==
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How we gets Detective Thora Price (Tracy Spiridakos) involved in the series? I am still planning of her first appearance... Thora is a Special Investigations detective who is inadvertedly dragged into her partner's mess. Any ideas? (Ednasharon24534, 1.13pm) September 7, 2020
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== 12x16 ==
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I have added season 12 episode 16 of Hartman and also first appearance of Detective Thora Price. In this episode, Vargas puts herself in danger while trying to prove Gordon killing her mother wasn't self-defense, the MCS and D.A struggle to cope of dealing the cases following recent events and Beth and Abby seeking answers over their absence aunt before things take a shocking u-turn.
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Viewers know Gordon killing his biological mother wasn't self-defense following a flashback episode. However, Barbara and somebody else know the full truth about Emma's death but Barbara ends up found dead in her cell. Her death will be very suspicious because Gordon's warnings to Vargas before.
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I am going to taking break after episode 16 while helping out [[The Sullivans]]. (Ednasharon24534, 3.59pm) September 7, 2020.
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== 1x14 and 1x15 of The Sullivans ==
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I think I may have a solution of 1x14. One of my ideas is that one of Andrea's daughters witnessed a crime. I think with help from Dr. Fleiss, Andrea and the FJU work to solve the crime without having her daughter testify. Not case which crime she will witness though.
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Also for 1x15, it's going to be a full episode and after that, it will have an episode article of it. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 15:00, September 7, 2020 (UTC)
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And the appearance of the ghosts will appears at the next episode when Hartman ends up reaching breaking point following a shocking death. (Ednasharon24534, 4.02pm) September 7, 2020.
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I have added a case in 1x14 of [[The Sullivans]] to let you know. (Ednasharon24534, 8.50pm) September 7, 2020.
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:I completed 1x15 of The Sullivans. The episodes needs to reveal what happens to Stetler and the believable ending speech for Drake and Katherine about their live together after the events 15 years before. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 21:14, September 10, 2020 (UTC)
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::I have added [[Past (The Sullivans)]]. Fell free to go over some things about it. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 01:03, September 11, 2020 (UTC)
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== Ghosts ==
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Which episode should we added the ghost of Terry Sanders, Hartman's parents, grandfather Karl and Jasmine? Do you have any idea? Episode 17, 18, 21, 22 or 23 (before final episode)? (Ednasharon24534, 2.09-21am) September 11, 2020.
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==1x18 of The Sullivans==
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I think Wayne should wake up close to the end of 1x18 of The Sullivans and reveal where the video is at. Katherine might call someone she knows and trusts in New York and that person finds the video, Then in episode 19, that person (played by James Morrison) gives her a DVD which he burned the VHS that recorded the video to the DVD. Then that character gets killed in front of her and Drake. Maybe later, the White Tiger and his associates would attack the safe house where Wayne is recovering. While Richter battles the attackers, the Wayne would get killed protecting Richer and Dr. Fleiss, the later got a minor wound, before Drake and others arrived. What do you think? [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 16:03, September 14, 2020 (UTC)
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Thank for adding season 12 episode 17 but BattleshipMan says he wants to add episode 17 before meddling things but I sorted things for Brandon to add anything else in episode 17. (Ednasharon24534, 7.37am) September 15, 2020.
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== 12x18 ==
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I have added season 12 episode 18 of Hartman and also, I added more stuff in episode 17. James Greico will return to help his family over the situation with Gordon (including finding Juilet - his long-lost absence aunt). He will appear at the end of episode 17 where he confront Gordon over the past. I am taking a break after episode 18... on other things. (Ednasharon24534, 12.57-1.07am) September 16, 2020.
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== Emma Greico ==
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I have added [[Emma Greico]] page because things was getting confused over the truth about Gordon. She was played by Anne Heche in flashback. Also, Emma has 14 grandchildren (plus one more = 15). (Ednasharon24534, 2.11-14am) September 16, 2020.
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== The Sullivans 1x19 ==
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Since I'm taking a short break, here's some ideas for The Sullivans 1x19. The man Katherine called in New York (James Morrison) called her saying that he found the tape and is on his way to Denver. He met up with Drake and Katherine and told them that he burned (copied) the video from VHS to DVD and, as he gave it to them, said he discovered some other things on that video, including the face of the White Tiger. Then The White Tiger (Thomas Haden Church) shot Katherine's contact dead as Drake and Katherine made their getaway. As they gather Ryan, Finn and Mary to the restaurant ready for the next plan in action, a bomb was discovered and they evacuated everyone out before the bomb exploded. Before that, Drake unknowingly met the White Tiger inside the restaurant before the bombing. They and the FJU will see the video in 1x20. What do you think? [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 07:32, September 16, 2020 (UTC)
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:Good idea about Michael, actually. Morrison does fit the bill as a colleague of Katherine's father. Also, I think Drake, Katherine and others would come clean to Winder and the rest of their people about Wayne being alive and hidden so the White Tiger would come find them in 1x20. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 20:37, September 16, 2020 (UTC)
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::I wonder what the best name for Morrison's character will be and anything else that goes on in 1x19. [[User:BattleshipMan|BattleshipMan]] ([[User talk:BattleshipMan|talk]]) 23:35, September 18, 2020 (UTC)
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== Ending of Hartman 12x16 ==
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I know I am on the break but I have added into the ending of season 12 episode 16. The MCS will gets in the argument with Hartman after learning what happened to Vargas during her visit with Gordon but Vargas defeated her captain and explaining it was her decision to visit Gordon, not Hartman. Then, you know the story... Hartman and Vargas decide to visit Barbara in prison but things quickly backfires on them. (Ednasharon24534, 12.24am) September 18, 2020.
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== Horror? ==
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Are you fan of horror film? (Ednasharon24534, 11.12pm) September 20, 2020.
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I think Beth should give birth before final episode (at episode 21/22), Lauren's birth will be something different. Beth will ends up in the same hospital where "Juliet" works, outside of Los Angeles.
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Episode 21 will mainly involves Hartman's past but The Greico siblings' search for Juliet gets throw into the mix. (Ednasharon24534, 10.35pm) September 21, 2020.

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IdeasEdit

Hello I was wondering if you wanted to do a crossover with my show October Blue about a NYPD Detective. I think Chloe and Chris will work well together. ~ ~ ~ ~

Thank you for taking it into consideration. I have edited and added more things. Hopefully it will be enough to create a crossover. I have so many ideas ~ ~ ~ ~

I let to do season premiere of Law & Order: New Orleans Season 20. Carcaterra's fate will be revealed despite the actor is leaving... (Ednasharon24534)

DiscordEdit

Hey, Nashwaklker, you're a senior editor on the Fanon Wiki, so just letting you know that in case you haven't already seen, this wiki has an unofficial Discord server, so if you have Discord, I'd encourage you to join. If you don't have a Discord, I'd encourage you to make one, as it's free and epic. Once you're ready, join the server by clicking "Connect" in the Discord window on the Main Page of this wiki. If that doesn't work, tell me your Discord username and tag and I'll DM you the invite. Thanks, Chris6d (talk) 17:17, June 4, 2018 (UTC)

A character stabbedEdit

Who do you think will be stabbed at the end of episode 11; Beth, Young or Fontana? They will get mistake for Vargas after Gordon's plan goes wrong. (Ednasharon24534)

Gordon hired somebody to kill Vargas after he decides to have her "dealt with" but the plan end up goes wrong when the assailant attacks Beth, mistaking for Vargas before stabbing her. The assailant is not Gordon, he is a hitman who Gordon hired to kill Vargas. (Ednasharon24534)

Flashback episode (Season 9 of Hartman) Edit

Episode 13 of Hartman's season 9 will be flashback episode involved Shane and Vargas's past with Gordon. The episode will reveals the full story of Shane and Vargas's abuse at the hand of Gordon. The episode will takes place at 2006 to a year before Season 8.

In the other episodes, Gordon will attempts to track down Vargas after Hartman hides her. He will clashes with Hartman who threatens to expose him if he don't back off. (Ednasharon24534)

Have you asks Talix about which date of doing 12th season of Law & Order: Dallas? (Ednasharon24534)

Re: L&O Season 12Edit

The release date is targeted on a early to mid August. But I'm going to reveal some spoilers on the Dallas page soon. (Talix (talk) 06:10, July 2, 2018 (UTC))

Do you know which date Talix will being season 12 of Law & Order .Dallas? He says mid-August... (Ednasharon24534)

I had a family vacation. Don't worry, I'm about to finish s12 very shortly. And give you details of a game-changing season 13. (Talix (talk) 09:49, December 31, 2018 (UTC))

Message Edit

Talix send me the message; he said he will starts Season 12 of Law & Order: Dallas on August 1 but we will restart Law & Order: New Orleans and Hartman on the day after, August 2. We let Talix starts Season 12 first before we restart everything.

https://fanon.wikia.com/wiki/User_talk:Ednasharon24534#Re:_L.26O_Dallas_Season_12 (Ednasharon24534)

L&O: New Orleans Season 20 & Hartman Season 10 dates Edit

Law & Order: New Orleans's Season 20 premiere on October 19, 2018

Hartman season 10 premiere on October 27, 2018.

I got a question, is Talix still doing Season 12 of Law & Order: Dallas or Season 12 have finished? (Ednasharon24534)

I am bit confused. Has Taliz finished season 12 of Law & Order: Dallas? (Ednasharon24534)

Has Taliz finished his season of Law & Order: Dallas? (Ednasharon24534)

 ??? Edit

Have Talix finished season 12 of Law & Order: Dallas?  I can't wait that long. I wanted to start the new season of Law & Order: New Orelean and Hartman before Christmas. Any news? (Ednasharon24534)

Any luck yet? Have Talix finished Season 12 of Law & Order: Dallas? I can't wait too long. (Ednasharon24534)

Starting date for a new season of Law & Order: New Orleans and Hartman is March 6.

Who will plays Georgia Ramsay, the biological mother of Mike Ramsey? Any idea? We should explore Georgia's past if... 

What is the name of Hartman's half-brother and who will plays the half-brother? (Ednasharon24534)

#10.13 of HartmanEdit

Can you write season 10 episode 13 for Hartman? "True Lies". I am running out of idea. Please? (Ednasharon24534)

RE: Dallas Season 14/NOLA Season 22/Hartman Season 11 x-overEdit

Actually yes I would be interested in a crossover with Dallas Season 14/NOLA 22/Hartman 11. (Talix (talk) 06:55, August 1, 2019 (UTC))

What's your idea? I'm curious. (Talix (talk) 10:36, August 4, 2019 (UTC))

Idea for backdoor pilot of Hartman Edit

Hey, there. Sorry to bother you. I went over your Law & Order: New Orleans and Hartman stories and anything related to it. I think they work nicely, but you should make some tweaks, like adding fanfic seasons of those shows and such.

Anyway, I thought of something after seeing that. I think there should be a backdoor pilot of Hartman in one of the later episodes of the upcoming season or something like that. I have some plans for it if you're interested. BattleshipMan (talk) 00:19, November 23, 2019 (UTC)

I think that a married couple from either Denver, Boston, Philadelphia or one those cities, the husband is a former elite soldier now detective in some type of special unit and the wife is a ADA, along the husband's police partner, go to Los Angeles searching for a suspect that matched the pattern of the current case that Hartman and the others are working on. BattleshipMan (talk) 02:40, November 23, 2019 (UTC)
What more you want to know is that the husband's name is Drake Sullivan (imagined to Chris Pratt), a former elite soldier (probably Delta Force, Navy SEALs and Marine Force Reconnaissance) turned main detective who comes from an Irish-American family. He is known to be confident, gritty, headstrong, rough-edged on the job with a strong sense of justice and is sensitive about cases involving children, since he has two himself. He has little regard or respect for authority and politics. On his personal life, he loves his family and is shown to be overprotective of them. His wife, ADA Katherine Sullivan (imagined to be Bryce Dallas Howard), the mother of his children, is shown to be uncompromising and stern against those who committed atrocious crimes against families and children, but can two-sided when it comes those who suffered a traumatic event or past that made them commit crime. She is compassionate to rape victims, abused women and children, since she has children with Drake and would seek justice for the families of the victims of the terrible crime. Katherine is also a very intelligent & well-organized person and is also hardened survivor of a past event that haunts her and only talks to Drake, her boss and few others about it. Because of that and her near perfect conviction record, she is the youngest executive ADA. She is also licensed to carry firearms. On the personal life of Drake and Katherine, they loved each other a lot, even though they banter and argued about cases, and are devoted to each other and their children, 10-year-old Finn (imagined to be Jason Maybaum) and 8-year-old daughter, Mary (imagined to be Spencer Moss), in their off time. Finn and Mary are often watched by Drake's father Ryan (imagined to be Clancy Brown), a retired judge. They swore to each other that their personal and private life would not interfere with their careers. Drake's police partner, Miguel Ruiz (imagined to be Nicholas Gonzalez), a womanizing police detective. He is dedicated to the job and the victims of the crime, but his personal life is jumbled. He had parents who abandoned him as a child and was raised by his uncle. He's twice divorced and has three kids from both marriages and often dates & leaves many women. Two other detectives include blunt, straightforward African-American Jackson Holmes (imagined to be Corey Hawkins), a former Army Ranger and squad leader, and single mother Andrea Donnell (imagined to be Teri Reeves), a tough, but compassionate detective who came from a law enforcement family. The IT guy is Officer Kyle Francis (imagined to be Joe Alder). Their CO is Captain Eugene Winder (imagined to be Keith David), a second-generation cop and a tough police veteran, but loyal to his officers. On Katherine's workplace, her second chair is Trent Doyle (imagined to be John Francis Daley), a competitive young ADA hoping to rise up his career. The DA is Andrew Bishop (imagined to be Scott Glenn), a conservative district attorney is who known to be stern and serious with the law.
What do you think? BattleshipMan (talk) 16:39, November 23, 2019 (UTC)
Well, I think either Denver, Boston and Philadelphia are the best settings. Might be a fictionalized police unit. Boston has some specialized police divisions, including The Fugitive Unit, which pursues local fugitives and Family Justice Division, that consists of four units: Crimes Against Children Unit (CACU), Domestic Violence Unit (DVU), Human Trafficking Unit (HTU) and Sexual Assault Unit (SAU). Denver has a Major Crimes Division which specialized investigations for homicides, robbery, sex crimes, missing persons, domestic violence, fraud, and the victim assistance unit. Philadelphia has it's own police divisions. I think Dave, Katherine, Miguel, maybe others, come to Hartman and her team for help on the case that matched patterns on the previous one Hartman and others worked on. What do you think it's the best? BattleshipMan (talk) 20:25, November 23, 2019 (UTC)
I might call the show The Sullivans about the family, a husband who is a cop and a wife who is an ADA that fights crimes involving families. Since it will take place in Denver, the Denver PD Family Justice Unit works on investigating crimes that involves families; rich, poor and such. The crime includes murder, kidnapping, rape and such. I think the pilot episode will have a family abducted from home and investigate the motive while trying to find them. BattleshipMan (talk) 03:59, November 24, 2019 (UTC)
I might need some help with plot ideas for a season. Also, what suggestions should I have for the Sullivan family and the other main characters? Also, I will need an idea for a case that Dave, Katherine, Miguel (maybe others) that would come to Los Angeles to meet up with Hartman and the others about the case that is related to the previous Hartman and others worked. BattleshipMan (talk) 05:30, November 24, 2019 (UTC)
Well, here's one case that will be ongoing for the season. It might be the one is the cold case murder of Katherine's parents and fiancee who were killed in a massacre in their home by a mob her father testified against the mob boss in court when she was 10 and she & her younger brother are the only survivors. Her brother leaves elsewhere. The hitman responsible was never found and the hitman responsible would be found by season's end. Drake helps Katherine find the hitman so she can have closure and to ensure their children's safety as the result. Also, I thought of the two child actors for Finn and Mary. Jason Maybaum for Finn and Spencer Moss for Mary. What do you think? BattleshipMan (talk) 08:13, November 24, 2019 (UTC)
Glad to hear that. I think I backdoor pilot would involve a murdered family in Denver and the patterns are matched to a case in Los Angeles, which is why Drake, Katherine and Miguel would go to Los Angeles and ask Hartman and others for help since they worked on the murder of the family in Los Angeles that went unsolved. BattleshipMan (talk) 16:48, November 24, 2019 (UTC)
I think after the backdoor pilot, I might add two D.A. Investigators on it. What do you think? BattleshipMan (talk) 02:00, November 25, 2019 (UTC)
I get to work on the adding the two D.A. Investigators who will be revealed after the backdoor pilot.
I see that the next season of Hartman comes out in a few days. I know you can't tell me much, but do you think The Sullivans backdoor pilot will be in the upcoming season? BattleshipMan (talk) 09:01, November 25, 2019 (UTC)
This is what I thought as the DA Investigators. Mario Nazario (Jeremy Ratchford), an old-school ex-Denver cop now top DA Investigator. His partner is Hessa Cohen (Sheila Vand), a third-generation Iranian-American, younger DA Investigator who was brought in by Katherine after she was fired as an undercover FBI agent when she was forced to use, let's just say, unorthodox methods to thwart a terrorist plot. What do you think? Any suggestions on those characters? BattleshipMan (talk) 01:59, November 26, 2019 (UTC)
Thanks for the suggestion. BattleshipMan (talk) 08:20, November 26, 2019 (UTC)
I think the good episode title name for the Hartman backdoor pilot might be "L.A. meet Mile High" or something with "Mile High" since Denver is a mile above sea level. BattleshipMan (talk) 22:05, November 27, 2019 (UTC)
I'm planning to put the backdoor pilot of The Sullivans in the later part of season 11 of Hartman. Since season 11 is about to begin, I want to make you and Ednasharon24534 are reminded. Also, do you think I should do it in one or two parts? BattleshipMan (talk) 04:25, November 29, 2019 (UTC)
Episodes 15 and 16. Got it. If there's any changes that are necessary to fit Hartman better during the backdoor pilot and some better improvements for it, you have my permission to make some necessary changes and corrections for it. BattleshipMan (talk) 04:58, November 29, 2019 (UTC)
I know I want Hartman to go to Denver in The Sullivans backdoor pilot while Barrera would take charge of things. The question now is which two detectives should go to Denver with Hartman (Greico, Ramsay, Ariel and Boscorelli)? Another question is since the Gordon Fontana case is a big one, how will the characters in the backdoor pilot would react to that? BattleshipMan (talk) 00:46, December 2, 2019 (UTC)
Okay, I'll have Hartman, Ramsay and Vargas go to Denver. BattleshipMan (talk) 01:25, December 3, 2019 (UTC)
I'll title the two-part backdoor pilot "Mile High City". BattleshipMan (talk) 01:25, December 3, 2019 (UTC)
I'll take what you said under consideration about Jackson, Trent and the recurring basis of Officer Francis, but D.A. Bishop will be a series regular in the first season. Also, I thought that Drake would have two other siblings (one deceased, one alive and working elsewhere). His mother had died of cancer few years before the backdoor pilot. Katherine will have a past that haunts her and only confides it with Drake, Ryan, D.A. investigator Hessa Cohen and to a less extent, Bishop. Captain Winder probably had a family with adult children. Andrea is a single mother who comes from a police family and she is tough as she can (since the actress I imagined Teri Reeves is a black-belt in Brazilian Jiu Jitsu). Hessa is a former undercover FBI agent who was fired from the bureau for torturing a terrorist which prevented an attack and Katherine got her a job as a D.A. Investigator. She has an older brother who is still in the FBI. Not sure on the personal lives on Nazario, Francis and Bishop. BattleshipMan (talk) 03:05, December 7, 2019 (UTC)

Here's what I got on the main characters of The Sullivans.

Chris Pratt as Drake Sullivan: Denver P.D. Senior Detective. Married to Katherine and has two children (Finn and Mary). His father Ryan is a retired judge. His mother Rachel died of cancer four years before. Older sister Amanda died in a car accident six years before and is survived by her husband & two sons. Younger sister Lydia is married with four children and lives in Chicago, where she works a Chicago 911 dispatcher.

Bryce Dallas Howard as Katherine Sullivan: Executive A.D.A. Married to Drake and has two children (Finn and Mary). Parents and two siblings murdered at a young age by a mob her father testified against. Is estranged from her surviving younger brother Joey who is living elsewhere.

Nicholas Gonzalez as Miguel Ruiz: Denver P.D. Senior Detective. Divorced twice with three children from both marriages (A son from the first marriage, two daughters from the second one).

Keith David as Captain Eugene Winder: Commanding Officer of Denver Police Family Unit. Married for 20 years and father of two (two sons).

Corey Hawkins as Jackson Holmes: Denver P.D. Junior Detective. Recently married to ICU nurse Kim Quincy and is expecting their first child.

Teri Reeves as Andrea Donnell: Denver P.D. Junior Detective. Divorced single mother to two daughters (Diana and Emily).

John Francis Daley as Trent Doyle: A.D.A. Openly gay and has a boyfriend.

Jeremy Ratchford as Mario Nazario: Former Denver cop now D.A. Investigator. Widowed with two sons.

Sheila Vand as Hessa Cohen: Third generation Iranian-American. Former undercover FBI agent now D.A. Investigator. Single with no children. Was fired from the FBI for torturing a terror suspect to stop the attack. Older brother is a FBI agent.

Jason Maybaum as Finn Sullivan: Drake and Katherine's oldest son.

Spencer Moss as Mary Sullivan: Drake and Katherine's youngest daughter.

Scott Glenn as D.A. Andrew Bishop: Conservative, married 24 years, has five children (two sons and three daughters) and several grandchildren. Was estranged from one of his daughters when she came out as a lesbian, but have since reconciled.

Clancy Brown as Ryan Sullivan: Retired judge. Widowed when his wife Rachel died of cancer. Has three children Amanda, Drake and Lydia and eight grandchildren. Older Amanda was killed in an car accident and is survived by her husband and two sons. His middle son Drake lives with him along with Drake's wife Katherine and their two children Finn and Mary. Lydia is a Chicago 911 dispatcher and is married with four children.

Joe Alder as Kyle Francis: Police officer who serves as an computer expert. Single with no children and has a twin sister who works a doctor in a local hospital.

See what you think? BattleshipMan (talk) 08:10, December 7, 2019 (UTC)

Glad you agree with the characters for the backdoor pilot. I have the plot for it set up. It will be ready when the finishing touches of episode 14 of season 11 of Hartman is done. I think when I wrote the backdoor pilot here, you probably should do some finishing touches and some necessary changes for it.
BTW, I added the article of Sean Carter, Brianna Carter's husband. BattleshipMan (talk) 20:09, December 8, 2019 (UTC)
I might change actors for Miguel Ruiz. Either Anthony Ruivivar, Lombardo Boyar, Rey Gallegos or Nicholas Gonzalez, one of those guys. What do you think? BattleshipMan (talk) 05:27, December 31, 2019 (UTC)


Nice picks on the recurring characters, not to mention another of the Winston siblings. Here's what I thought of as recurring characters also.

  • Commander Sam "Red Fox" Cutter, the police district commander where the FJU is at, probably will be only for the first season. His father was Caucasian and his mother was Native American. Was a Denver police officer for a long time and rose the rank of Commander. He is a widower with one son. Portrayed by Graham Greene.
  • Nathan Whitman, the widowed husband of Drake's older sister Amanda and the father of their two sons. He owns a shopping mall in Denver. Portrayed by Sebastian Arcelus.
  • Lydia Graves, Drake's younger sister and Ryan's youngest daughter. She is married with four children and works as a police dispatcher for Chicago Police Department. Portrayed by Elaine Cassidy.

What do you think? BattleshipMan (talk)

Thanks for that.

Here's what I thought of for the first season. There should be a flashback episode where Drake and Katherine first met and that how they became a married couple. Here's what I thought of: Drake, who had gotten out of the Marines not too long ago, is living in solitude and Katherine, who was newly appointed ADA and a second chair to one of the Executive ADAs who is seeking to become a DA, met each other, but with their differing personalities, they didn't exactly see eye to eye. Then when Drake was accused of murdering an ex-girlfriend, Katherine was the second chair on the case. It looked like a open and shut case at first, but when she learned from one of the DA investigators that there was evidence that would exonerated Drake and the Executive ADA she is working with had suppressed that evidence to get a conviction as a political stepping stone. Katherine then worked with Bishop, then Sergeant now Captain Winder and Ryan, who was then a judge at the time, on finding the evidence and discovered the actual killer was the jealous ex-boyfriend who killed her after she rejected his advances. Drake was then cleared of all charges and Katherine and Bishop turned in the corrupt Executive ADA to the bar association and he got disbarred. Afterwards, Drake and Katherine became a couple they are now and have two children as a result. What do you think? BattleshipMan (talk) 04:45, January 21, 2020 (UTC)

15 seasons...Maybe. That probably will be good. And Emily Deschanel is a good idea as Amanda. David Ramsey as Lydia's husband Owen...I think so if it works for interracial couples. Also, Ryan's wife and Amanda, Drake and Lydia's mother Rachel, who died on cancer four years before. She probably will have to appear in flashback scenes and episodes set in the past. BattleshipMan (talk) 17:09, January 21, 2020 (UTC)
Here's what I thought of. You can make some changes if you like. For the evidence, Drake was the last person to see his ex-girlfriend alive and he found the body. He didn't have a better alibi and he was subsequently suspected for the murder. The corrupt EADA saw that case as an opportunity to move him up the ranks and there was a security camera on the street that shown Drake walking at a bar at the time of the murder, which would have exonerated him and the EADA had buried that evidence so he can get a high conviction rating. But the DA investigator who found it told Katherine and she told Amanda, Ryan, Bishop (who was the EADA seeking election for DA) and Winder (who was the investigating police sergeant on the case). They conducted their own investigation and one witness told them that there was another man who was harassing the ex-girlfriend, which turned the former boyfriend of the murder victim. The man was arrested and he confessed that she rejected him & killed him out of jealousy. Drake was cleared of all charges and the corrupt EADA was disbarred. BattleshipMan (talk) 20:21, January 21, 2020 (UTC)
Great ideas. Thanks.
For the backdoor pilot, I like your input. It will involve Drake, Katherine and Ruiz visiting Hartman and the squad because the murdered family they are investigating matched the ballistics to the murdered family Hartman and the squad previously investigated, but the case went cold. Hartman takes Ramsey and Vargas to Denver. They met up with the rest of the FJU squad (Winder, Holmes, Andrea, Francis and a sergeant name Kruger who won't be a regular in the show). They say that they know about the Gordon Fontana case and mentions their shock that he got away with it for so long.
They eventually discovered that each murdered family in their respective cases involved the trucking company that each father worked in and it was a front for a criminal empire that smuggles abducted children and auctioned them off to the highest bidder. Two men were going to blow the whistle on them and they, along with their families, got murdered because of it. Katherine and Doyle got a subpoena to sub-headquarters in Denver with Drake, Hartman and the other detectives and confronted. Then a shootout occurred with six hitmen arrived. Ruiz and Doyle got wounded and Kruger got killed. But the four shooters got killed and one got wounded. When the lead hitman named Spears was about to shoot Katherine, she fired her hidden revolver at him and Drake took him down.
As the hospital took care of the mildly wounded Ruiz and the seriously wounded Doyle, Drake, Katherine and Hartman interrogated Spears in the hospital. Ballistics the gun used by Spears, who killed Kruger, matched the ones that killed the two fathers. Spears pointed out to the truck that carried several children and they stopped it. Winder and Bishop ordered everyone to shut down the criminal ring. Hartman visits Drake and Katherine at their home and met their two children; Finn and Mary and Drake's father Ryan. They talked about family and the jobs they do. Following Ryan's idea, they began to track down the ring by questioning of the kidnapped children, checking out the VIN numbers of the trucks, the cell phones used the shooters and files on the computers used by the company, they identified the mastermind as Jeffrey Dickenson, the owner of several businesses in America, including the trucking company. A joint police-FBI raid led to the arrest of Dickenson and the rescue of the other children nationwide. After the funeral of Kruger, Hartman, Ramsay and Vargas say goodbye to their Denver counterparts.
What do you think?

Thanks for that. BattleshipMan (talk) 04:23, January 22, 2020 (UTC)

Good picks. I have one more addition for series regular since Sergeant Kruger was killed in the backdoor pilot.
  • Annie Wersching as Sergeant Nicole Richter, a police sergeant previously from undercover unit transferred to FJU. She is dedicated to her job and is divorced with a teenage son. Had a history of using opioids due to a gunshot wound she received in a line of duty and went to rehab for it.
For recurring
  • Danny Glover as Retired Colonel Frank Holmes, Jackson's father and retired Army colonel.
  • Judy Greer as Emily Thornton, a prominent defense lawyer who is friends with Katherine since law school.
  • David Morse as Peter Donnell, Andrea's father who is a former Denver homicide detective.
  • Mary McDonnell as Jane Donnell, Andrea's mother who was a former Denver cop until a gunshot wound ended her police career when Andrea and Robert were young. She then raised her children after her injury.
  • Luke Grimes as Robert Donnell, Andrea's brother who is a Denver police patrol sergeant. He and Andrea have an difficult relationship due to differing opinions on some things.
  • Ruben Santiago-Hudson as Judge Adam Wellington, a judge who is a close friend of Ryan when he was a judge. Although a friendly judge, he is nevertheless stern on the court and will be afraid to butt-heads with Katherine or any other lawyer at court.
Jackson also has an older brother who is a gun runner who is an CI for the Denver Police. Hessa has a older brother who is an FBI agent. What do you think of my picks? BattleshipMan (talk) 04:41, January 24, 2020 (UTC)
Yes, that's true. I think the Donnell family, Hessa's brother and maybe Jackson's father will wait until season 2. Besides, I'm not even sure who else will recur in the first season. BattleshipMan (talk) 07:17, January 24, 2020 (UTC)
I might start the first season of The Sullivans after Hartman and L&O: NO finishes their seasons.

Romance? - Hartland Season 11 Edit

Who will Shane date? I was thinking Vargas and Boscorelli (a new character) to get together but what about Shane? "someone we're already familiar with" (Ednasharon24534)

Hartman series's characters biographyEdit

Can you write Hartman (TV Series)'s characters biography - history and personal life? Past and present main characters. (Ednasharon24534)

Present main characters...

Can you write Chloe Hartman's biography, involving her time in Law & Order: New Orleans and Hartman (TV Series)? Please? And also the characters of Hartman series... (Ednasharon24534)

Hartman season 11 Edit

I just hope you liked the episode of Hartman I wrote on episode 6 of season 11. If there's any add-ons or changes that should be done, feel free to do so. BattleshipMan (talk) 21:28, December 15, 2019 (UTC)

You know, I think since it's close to Christmas, there should be a Christmas episode of Hartman. What do you think? BattleshipMan (talk) 04:12, December 23, 2019 (UTC)

Alright, Nash. That will be my last episode of Hartman I wrote until the backdoor pilot of The Sullivans is about to arrive. I might write one other episode after that. Also, I probably will need some help with The Sullivans when it comes to episode ideas, storyline for the characters and such.
Anyway, you should write few episodes of Law & Order: New Orleans as Ednasharon24534 asked to. BattleshipMan (talk) 07:52, December 28, 2019 (UTC)
I think after episode 12, episode 13 might be the time for the triple crossover with Law & Order: New Orleans and Law & Order: Dallas. Episodes 15 and 16 would have the backdoor pilot of The Sullivans. Episodes 18 and 19, would probably be the best place to focus on for the death of someone in Hartman's family. BattleshipMan (talk) 00:01, January 4, 2020 (UTC)
I wonder what the plot of episode 11 of Hartman would be about since episode 12 would involve the wedding of Grieco and Ramsay. I probably won't write it, but there could be some good ideas for it. Maybe one of the subplots of episode 11 would involve the few days before the wedding. Maybe with something Vargas and Delgado and learns that he is a cop. The main plot might have something to do with Angela since she ended things with her boyfriend after what they did. What do you think? BattleshipMan (talk) 03:11, January 10, 2020 (UTC)
Maybe Episodes 11 and 12 of Hartman should be written since episode 14 is where the triple crossover will take place and wait until Law & Order: Dallas is written. BattleshipMan (talk) 04:25, January 22, 2020 (UTC)

Flashback episode Edit

I know this will sound mad but episode 19 will be a flashback episode, revealing how Parker and Queen gets involved with each other for first time as a young officers. This episode will mainly focus on Parker and Queen's first time of meeting each other... Eddie Hicks, Alan Grimes and Cole McCorrea will be involved in the episode. There will youngest actors playing young vision of current and past characters. (Ednasharon24534)

In Parker and Queen's first case, they was involved in serious world of the politics after a campaign was found stabbed to death. Two young police officers was sent by two detectives, Hicks and Carcaterra to investigates a mayor of New Orleans who is romantically involved with a young reporter but they haven't got no idea their life will change forever and a big secret will be revealed. (Ednasharon24534)

Triple crossover Edit

Did you check Law & Order: Dallas page? Is Talix still doing Law & Order: Dallas or not? I feels Dallas has been off at the moment. (Ednasharon24534)

Talix hasn't been on since August and that's kind of a concern. If he's not available, then maybe you guys write episodes of L&O: Dallas until it reaches the crossover. BattleshipMan (talk) 01:55, January 11, 2020 (UTC)

Are you doing Law & Order: Dallas before crossover? Talix has been goes off since August... (Ednasharon24534)

I have to say this. I'm not sure how long we should wait for Talix to write the crossover in his end. I hate to say this, but if he takes too long, we should change plans for it. BattleshipMan (talk) 02:17, April 19, 2020 (UTC)

200th episode Edit

I am thinking that 200th episode of Hartman to be 60 minutes episode to make it different and long than other episode. (Ednasharon24534)

Who do you think should write that episode since it's main focus is the wedding of Grieco and Ramsay? BattleshipMan (talk) 03:42, January 29, 2020 (UTC)
I wrote the 200th episode of Hartman. I tried my best to figure what would happen to the past main characters and such with it. If there's anything to add, do so. BattleshipMan (talk) 19:20, January 29, 2020 (UTC)

Triple crossover Edit

Nash, have you heard from Talix? He/she has only wrote the first episode of the current season of L&O: Dallas and he/she said he was having personal issues and that he will work on it. But Ednasharon24534 is anxious to get that triple crossover done and I'm a little concerned about this. BattleshipMan (talk) 15:27, January 30, 2020 (UTC)

13th season 11 episode of Hartman and 12th and 13th episode of L&O: NO Edit

I wonder what social issue the 13th episode of season 11 of Hartman should be about. I wouldn't what the best social issue might be during the case. Also, we should write the 12th and 13th episodes of L&O: New Orleans since they are before the triple crossover event in the 14th episodes in each shows. BattleshipMan (talk) 22:54, February 2, 2020 (UTC)

?Any ideas what social issue the 11x13 of Hartman should have? BattleshipMan (talk) 18:51, February 19, 2020 (UTC)

Plans for the first seasons of The Sullivan Edit

Here are the plans for the potential first season of The Sullivans.

  • Drake helps Katherine find the mob hitman who killed her parents and two older siblings when she and her brother Joey were young. Hessa later joins in to help them out.
  • Ruiz's womanizing ways often ires other members of the FJU, including Winder.
  • The newly-married Holmes will become a father.
  • One of Donnell's daughters witnessed a crime.
  • Newly assigned Sergeant Nicole Richter adjusts to her post while continue visiting AA meetings for her previous opioids addiction while trying to get custody for her son.
  • Bishop and Doyle have an awkward working relationship due to Bishop's conservative views and that one of Bishop's daughters is a lesbian which led to a previous estrangement as the result of it.
  • Katherine's estranged brother Joey appears in one or two episodes when he did a book signing in Denver of one of his novels.
  • One episode will be mostly flashback on how Drake and Katherine met and how they became a couple.
  • Nazario struggles with his health due to years of drinking, smoking, and some poor dieting.
  • Ryan becomes restless in his retirement and lending himself out as a part-time legal consultant.
  • Winder becomes Holmes' go-to guy for advice on fatherhood. Also, he deals with his older son finishing medical school, and his younger son graduating college and opting to join the FBI as an agent.
  • Finn and Mary face bullying from several other kids at school, and the reasons behind it turn out to be linked to a previous case their parents worked on. BattleshipMan (talk) 17:10, February 5, 2020 (UTC)
  • Nice ideas for Winder, Nazario, Ryan and the Sullivan kids. I know for Hessa; she used to be an undercover FBI agent until she got fired for torturing a terror suspect to stop an attack and Katherine helped her get a job as a DA Investigator, which is why she is helping her and Drake find the hitman in that first season. BattleshipMan (talk) 08:19, February 6, 2020 (UTC)
I think Francis should be recurring for the first season and also midseason, a police lieutenant should join in at a recurring basis, like what I saw in Hartman. BattleshipMan (talk) 19:07, February 10, 2020 (UTC)
Sounds good. What do you think happened to Wie's sister since she is taking care of her sister's kids (a boy and a girl)? BattleshipMan (talk) 07:33, February 14, 2020 (UTC)
Nice to know. I added the ideas of The Sullivans in my profile page with subplot ideas from seasons 1 and 2 among thing. Any more subplot ideas for season 2 would be good. BattleshipMan (talk) 22:13, February 14, 2020 (UTC)
Hi, sorry to bother you. I could use your input on the plans for The Sullivans on my profile page and what story of episode 13 of Hartman should involve. BattleshipMan (talk) 20:05, March 4, 2020 (UTC)
Those plans sounds good. I might make some minor changes, but thanks for the help. I think in season 2 is where we introduce the families of Holmes and Andrea. For partners, I think Drake should partner up with Andrea and Ruiz will partner up with Holmes.
BTW, I added episode 13 of season 11 of Hartman. I haven't gotten the title name of it and I'm not sure what personal events of the main characters will have in it. BattleshipMan (talk) 18:46, March 5, 2020 (UTC)
Ah, Nash. I saw that Ednasharon24534 has added a brief summary of the 19th episode of season 22 of Law & Order: New Orleans. I think maybe I'll add the summary of the backdoor pilot of The Sullivans on season 11 of Hartman and leave the rest of the episodes of that season blank until the triple crossover has been written. How's that? BattleshipMan (talk) 03:37, March 23, 2020 (UTC)

The Sullivans backdoor pilot added Edit

The backdoor pilot of The Sullivans is added on Hartman. So do your thing on it. BattleshipMan (talk) 15:05, March 23, 2020 (UTC)

Good job working on it. BTW, so you know. I added The Sullivans. There's some season 1 news I put up, including how Odette Annable and Kelly Hu will later join the show. BattleshipMan (talk) 05:01, March 25, 2020 (UTC)
Alright, I managed to add some backstory of some of the recurring characters. It was my best describe them. Katherine and the others in the D.A. Office, I'm not sure what to describe their backstory. BattleshipMan (talk) 04:25, March 29, 2020 (UTC)
I was able to add the backstory of Doyle, Hessa and Bishop and partially for Nazario. Don't exactly know what to describe Katherine yet. From what I figure, she is a 15-year ADA and became Executive ADA with a near perfect conviction record. We know that she and her brother Joey saw their parents and two older siblings murdered by a mob hitman when their father was going to testify against the New York mob boss, which she and Joey are estranged as the result of it. Katherine is know to be steadfast & uncompromising against those who commit unspeakable acts against families & children, but is compassionate toward victims of domestic violence, child abuse & rape and loves her family. BattleshipMan (talk) 19:21, March 29, 2020 (UTC)

Have you heard from Talix about Dallas and the crossover? Only asking. (Ednasharon24534)

My idea for a Hartman spin-off/miniseries Edit

I got a idea but it isn't clear yet. My idea will mainly involved youngester of Hartman characters, a spin-off/mainseries will take place during season 12 of Hartman when the adults investigate crimes. They still gets involved in the beginning of season 12.

"The kids planned to create their own club while the adults working on their job. But a young girl reveals a dark secret which makes things difficult for the young investigations."

It will have 7 episodes with 22-27 minutes before their story will come together in the middle of Season 12 when the adults getting involved of their kids' mess.

Young Investigations: Daniel, Aurora, Angela, Jonathan, Diana Boscorelli, Marisol Barrera, Harrison Castillo, Ashley Novak-Lowry and Sean Novak-Lowry.

Other kids are involved like Stephen and Vanessa - Everett's older children and Harrison's siblings. The adults from the show will appear for a small cameo.

Yes or no for my idea; it will not become a long-time series, just short spin-off for Season 12.  It will premiere a day after episode 3 of Hartman (season 12).(Ednasharon24534)

The Sullivans characters Edit

I noticed that you have ideas for characters like A.D.A. Joshua Saxe (Matthew Goode), Lt. Henry Sykes (Ted Danson), Det. Nathan Redruth (Taylor Lautner) and Det. John Lincoln (Kenton Duty) in your profile page, as well as Wie, Quelling & Alicia Pearce (which I know of before). Wie & Quelling will become series regulars (Wie in season 2 and Quelling in season 3) and Pearce will be recurring in season 2 for the plot arc of The Sullivans. What's the involvement of Saxe, Sykes, Redruth and Lincoln in the show?

In season 2, Bishop will have a personal tragedy midway in season 2 and appointed A.D.A. Jeremy Pierce (Neal McDonough) as interim DA. I'm going to have Bishop retired as DA at the end of season 3. BattleshipMan (talk) 00:20, March 30, 2020 (UTC)

Nice ideas, actually. After Bishop retires, Pierce should be DA as of season 4. I think around in the potential season 6, with Sykes as Lieutenant, Winder will retire at the end of season 6 and Sykes will take a captain exam & will become Captain in the potential season 7. BattleshipMan (talk) 04:44, March 30, 2020 (UTC)
Well, I think either Rob Brown or Thomas Gibson will be goods ones as a Lieutenant in season 7. I think the best name for that character will be Lieutenant Gordon Stevens. What do you think? BattleshipMan (talk) 04:09, March 31, 2020 (UTC)
Okay. Here's some suggested names for the Lieutenant in season 7. Mike Coffey, Andrew Williams, Barry Knox, Robert Smith, Kevin Chambers, Benjamin Lloyd, Nick Lynch and Terry Buckley. See what you think of the names. BattleshipMan (talk) 06:17, March 31, 2020 (UTC)
Yes, that would work. I think Rob Brown is a right pick for Issac Whitlock since I saw him in Blindspot. Also, I hope Talix will give a reply soon. BattleshipMan (talk) 20:42, March 31, 2020 (UTC)
I have Lance Henriksen guest as Katherine's uncle who raised her and Joey after their parents and two siblings were killed in season 1. I think in season 3, Drake and Ryan's family will be further explored. BattleshipMan (talk) 14:52, April 1, 2020 (UTC)
I have one plan for a potential season 3. Drake and Ryan's family will be explored. A relative of Katherine passed away in New York and she, Drake, Ryan, Finn and Mary go to New York to attend a funeral. They would make a pit stop in Boston where Drake and Ryan's relatives live for a quick visit. I'm not sure what to name the relatives, but here's what i thought of. Ryan has an older brother who is a retired Coast Guardsmen living in Boston and he has a son (Travis Van Winkle) who is a firefighter and a daughter (Amanda Righetti) who is train operator for Massachusetts Bay Transportation Authority, both of them are Drake's cousins. The son is a married to a Boston SWAT officer (Jaina Lee Ortiz) having met while in a hostage situation. The daughter is married with a son. What do you think? BattleshipMan (talk) 03:51, April 5, 2020 (UTC)
I think either Stephen Lang or Michael Rooker would portray Ryan's older brother. I'm not sure the names of the extended Sullivan family. BattleshipMan (talk) 03:53, April 7, 2020 (UTC)
I think I came up with some names and added a family member for the extended family who will appear in the potential season 3. Ryan's older brother could be either Desmond, Patrick or Mark. The brother's wife (Cherry Jones), a semi-retired IT expert, could be named either Tara, Chloe, Emily or Clara. The brother's son who is a firefighter could be named Thomas, Adam or Daniel. The daughter who is the train operator could be either name Abbie, Grace or Megan. What do you think? BattleshipMan (talk) 01:36, April 11, 2020 (UTC)
I hope you can reply to me and Ednasharon24534 about our messages. BattleshipMan (talk) 14:12, April 17, 2020 (UTC)
I understand how things are busy around here now. Anyway, I put those names for the Sullivan extended family in my profile and I added the name of Daniel's wife on there too. BattleshipMan (talk) 21:09, April 17, 2020 (UTC)

Any word... Edit

Any news from Talix  about Law & Order: Dallas and the crossover? (Ednasharon24534)

I have to say this. This is taking way too long already. I hope we get an answer from Talix soon. BattleshipMan (talk) 16:34, March 31, 2020 (UTC)
I think what we should do since we saw that 15th episodes of both Law & Order: New Orleans and Hartman were added, we should maybe probably add the other episodes of each show while we wait for Talix to add his stuff...that is if he's going to do it. Other than that, I'm not sure what to do if it takes too long for Talix to add his stuff on Law & Order: Dallas. BattleshipMan (talk) 20:09, April 8, 2020 (UTC)


Should you work with writing of full history (biography & personality) of Hartman (TV Series) current and former main characters? I did some but I have been busy. It has been season 11 so yet and we are still waiting on Talix. Focus on that while waiting for an answer from Talix. (Ednasharon24534)

I think next week if there's no response from Talix, we should add the 14th episode crossovers in New Orleans and Hartman because Talix has not been answering. If he does respond later on and added it, we'll edit those episodes. BattleshipMan (talk) 01:44, May 10, 2020 (UTC)

Flashback characters Edit

I am going to clear out about the flashback characters, how old are they in 1992 and which year they was born.

Royce will turn 45 at the beginning of the flashback episode where his campaign manager was found stabbed to death at his home after the mayor's birthday party.

  • Kathryn Newton - Tawny Thompson (age 23 in 1992, born at 1969)
  • Patrick Wilson - Bill Royce (age 44/45* in 1992, born at 1947)
  • Elizabeth Banks - ADA Holly Donovan (age 43 in 1992, born at 1949)
  • Patricia Arquette - Captain Siobhan Thompson (age 50 in 1992, born in 1942)
  • Carmen Ejogo - Detective Jane Daniels (age 42 in 1992, born at 1950)
  • Claire Foy - Shannon Royce (age 36 in 1992, born at 1956)
  • AJ Cook - Vanessa Donovan (age 39 in 1992, born in 1953)

Detroit Edit

Parker and Queen will appear in flashback
New Orleans to Detroit

The journey is long...

episode at present day. They will appear in some scenes in some scenes their journey to Detroit and the rest of the episode shows the full story of their first case.

The episode will end in present day when Parker and Queen arrive at Detroit to confront their past (to end the episode with cliffhanger) (Ednasharon24534)

Villain Fanon Wikia Edit

I found a Fan-made wiki about Villain in the internet. To create your own villain. [[1]]

Can you fix episode 19 of Hartman season 11? I tries to follow the plot from the last episode. There is the short summary of episode 19. My best one.

"Tenision rise between Hartman and the team after Richie Daniels' arrest when Hartman believe there is something fishy over Jasmine's death. While, Delgaldo finds himself in dangerous situation as older kids target Daniel over his dead mother and Taylor visits Nancy's father in prison where their connection are revealed."

(Ednasharon24534)

Richie Daniels Edit

Who will plays Richie Daniels in season 11 of Hartman? (Ednasharon24534)

Depends on the age and ethnicity of Richie Daniels. BattleshipMan (talk) 21:21, April 25, 2020 (UTC)

Hartman/The Sullivans crossoverEdit

You know, I think there should a midseason crossover between Hartman and The Sullivans. BattleshipMan (talk) 21:21, April 25, 2020 (UTC)

I think The Sullivans should start the first part of the crossover and conclude it with Hartman, so that Drake and Katherine can visit Hartman's family like she did with them in the backdoor pilot. BattleshipMan (talk) 14:46, May 11, 2020 (UTC)

Flashback episode Edit

What is the plot of flashback episode of Law & Order: New Orleans? I want to do it but I trusted you because you are the better writer. I was thinking to end the flashback with a shock twist... and episode 19, we are taking a short break to wait for Talix over crossover. If he taking too long, just create two parts crossover between New Orleans and Hartman. (Ednasharon24534)

I think Ednasharon24534 is right. If Talix takes too long past them, we will just do a two part crossover with New Orleans and Hartman. If he does return and has written it in his own end, we will rewrite those crossover episodes. Also, you might want to write the 19th episode of New Orleans. BattleshipMan (talk) 02:09, April 27, 2020 (UTC)

Don't worry about the plot of Flashback episode. I am going to do the plot. Just wait when I finished (Ednasharon24534)

I know I am writing a long plot but after I finished it, I will sort out a page for flashback episode and then you rewrite everything shorter in Law & Order: New Orleans page. (Ednasharon24534)

Help me out... Nash. I mess up with the flashback episode.  I through McCorrea was born in 1970s but I got it wrong. McCorrea was born in 1982, making it almost 10. I change the story but right back where I started. (Ednasharon24534)

And Carcaterra is 27/28 in flashback episode and Josh Server is 41 years old. Too old to play a 27 years old detective. Change the actor as young Carcaterra. (Ednasharon24534)

I have finished the plot of flashback episode and added the page of "The First Case" to let you know.(Ednasharon24534)

One thing, don't rewrite anything short yet until I added all of the plot in "The First Case" page. OK? (Ednasharon24534; 11.39pm) May 5, 2020

Hartman final three season 11 episodes Edit

I probably will write the third to last episode of season 11 of Hartman. Any hints that could help out for it? BattleshipMan (talk) 02:28, May 8, 2020 (UTC)

What about part 2 of the season finale of Hartman? BattleshipMan (talk) 01:49, May 11, 2020 (UTC)

Parker's familyEdit

Who will play Parker's older brothers - James, Davis and Robert (only appear at police academy in 1992) in flashback episode? I am having bit of a problem of finding actors... (Ednasharon24534; 1.52am) May 9, 2020

Plan? Edit

I am bit shocked that you choose Hartman (TV Series) to be end after 12 seasons. I thought the show will carry on longer but why? What is your plan? (Ednasharon24534; 3.47am) May 11, 2020.

And I already added Tom Felton in The First Case (Law & Order: New Orleans) as Joseph Morgan - the reporter and Tawny Thompson's colleague. I should warn you, it must be difficult. (Ednasharon24534)

I already know the plan but should we renamed it to task force something, not characters show title because it sound better than your idea name? It will mainly involves a whole team than two main characters.

To make something different...(Ednasharon24534; 3.35pm) May 15, 2020

Your idea is OK but I don't like the name of the show.  (Ednasharon24534; 3.11pm) May 15, 2020.

I think it's an alright name. It's like Cagney & Lacy and Rizzoli & Isles. Think about that. BattleshipMan (talk) 16:32, May 15, 2020 (UTC)
I don't know the name sound the same but bit odd. I know this is long time to start everything, what is the name of task force? "Task force?" It will sound better. (Ednasharon24534; 8.28pm) May 15, 2020.
Let it be. It's Nash's choice. Besides, "Vargas & Shane" sounds okay to me. BattleshipMan (talk) 20:21, May 19, 2020 (UTC)
OK but I still thinks the name of task force could be the name of the show, could be better. "Vargas & Shane" sound random. No offence but it is my opinion... Don't want to argue and this is Nash's choice, his decision. That is my final say. (Ednasharon24534, 1.19am) May 21, 2020

Hold on? Edit

I am sorry. What is a task force? I thought I knew but I actually don't... Help me out, anybody? Please? (Ednasharon24534; 8.36pm) May 15, 2020

I'm sure we'll know the name of the task force soon enough. BattleshipMan (talk) 19:41, May 15, 2020 (UTC)

The two crossover episodesEdit

I think we should write the episodes that weren't meant to do a triple crossover with Dallas. Once Dallas is written, we'll rewrite them. BattleshipMan (talk) 19:41, May 15, 2020 (UTC)

Hartman Season 12 Ideas Edit

I got a idea for Hartman season 12 premiere. It will be very difficult. The premiere will be a special lockdown episode which mainly involved on Hartman and the team handle the situations while the city goes to lockdown. We wants to explain how the police and D.A and their loved one handle everything while being on lockdown during works and home.

It will not be a two parts episode, it will be 70 minutes special - longer episode ever of Hartman series. Episode 2 will move forward after the lockdown, carrying on as normal with normal minutes. I think my idea will worry because I seen other shows attempts to handle the topic but it will be different with the lives of police and D.A during lockdown.

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=F3jKkU0GBIk

https://www.digitalspy.com/soaps/emmerdale/a32627796/emmerdale-return-to-filming-coronavirus-lockdown-episodes/

(Ednasharon24534, 7.15pm) May 21, 2020.

Wait a minute, Ednasharon24534. The year of Hartman season 12 is actually 2029, which is nine years after all this. I get your intentions for this idea of yours, but seems inconsistent with the year of season 12. Also, if the idea does happen, it will have to be in flashback. BattleshipMan (talk) 18:21, May 21, 2020 (UTC)
Yikes, I didn't know but I don't think the flashback episode will be sorted. I wants a show to deals a real-life topic, a life during lockdown. The show we create is not real life, just fandom. We can use the idea but change it bit. (7.27pm, Ednasharon24534) May 21, 2020.
I know the show's fandom. I'm just trying to get you to understand the issues of consistency of the years of it. Alright, just make some necessary changes for it, but have it look like the people knew what they are doing after all this and have a fictional illness, among other things. BattleshipMan (talk) 18:30, May 21, 2020 (UTC)
What about a massive earthquake? L.A. tends to have a lot of those. BattleshipMan (talk) 18:46, May 21, 2020 (UTC)
It could work. Great idea. The city goes to lockdown while emergency attempts to deal the situation, attempts to protect the public. (Ednasharon24534; 7.47pm) May 21, 2020.
Season 12 premiere will takes place 3 weeks after season finale. The next episode will takes place 5 months after the crisis. To make things easier. And nobody will died, it will be a life situation during city lockdown and all of the characters is involved. Nobody will be miss out.(Ednasharon24534, 8.10/19pm, 3.17am) May 21, 2020.

The Sullivans characters added Edit

I added some the characters of The Sullivans, including Drake Sullivan, Katherine Sullivan and Eugene Winder. Feel free to make some changes in some of their family names. BattleshipMan (talk) 22:05, May 24, 2020 (UTC)

That's all the main characters of The Sullivans added. Thanks for the help. BattleshipMan (talk) 03:47, May 25, 2020 (UTC)
Most biographies and personalities in some of the main characters were added so far. Still will need to add some biographies in some of the characters like Drake, Katherine, Ryan, Finn, Mary, Winder and Doyle.
I have plans for one character in Law & Order: New Orleans to appear in The Sullivans in one episode as a guest star. I think maybe either Colton Renko, Brianna Carter or Lisa Zhao, one of those three anyway. BattleshipMan (talk) 03:11, May 28, 2020 (UTC)

We got a problem... Edit

How old are Karl and Marlene because we got a promise? The actors are both in 1948 and Chloe is born in 1976. What about her father? (Ednasharon24534; 1.42pm) May 25, 2020

Chloe HartmanEdit

Can you write a full biography of Chloe Hartman during her time before and during Law & Order: New Orleans and Hartman (TV Series)? (Ednasharon24534, 9.54pm) May 27, 2020

I Do Edit

I have create a episode article of I Do (Hartman), 60 minutes special to make things easier, like The First Case (Law & Order: New Orleans). (Ednasharon24534, 10.49pm) May 29, 2020.

For season 12 premiere, 70 minutes will be too much, so I choose 60 minutes like the flashback episode of Law & Order: New Orleans and 200th episode of Hartman. It is easier... (Ednasharon24534, 11.39pm) May 29, 2020

I have create a page for Hartman (TV Series)/The Sullivans's Mile High City together along with part 1 and part 2. (Ednasharon24534, 8.03pm) June 3, 2020

Heard anything about the triple crossover Edit

Heard anything from Talix? Ednasharon24534 and I are trying to figure out what we should do about this. I think we should write it, even if we don't heard from him. BattleshipMan (talk) 00:05, June 5, 2020 (UTC)

Gordon and Ralph Edit

The reason why I change Ralph as Gordon's half-brother because they was different dad. Ralph's mother has a 1 year affair with a police officer which results her getting pregnant with Gordon but the officer refuse to let a part of his son. There will be one scene when a young Gordon confront his biological father after spying him with his family but the father turn nasty on Gordon and threatens to come after Gordon if he come near his family. The police officer's family never knew about Gordon or his involvement with Fontana's family. Gordon's father is still alive, a retired police officer with his secret could be under threatens.

Gordon has a rocky relationship with his stepfather/"adopted father" because he favours his real son Ralph over his step-son. The episode will explore Gordon's personality during his childhood. (Ednasharon24534, 10.36-42pm) June 6, 2020

Which explains some of the notes added... (Ednasharon24534, 10.54pm) June 6, 2020

I changed Ralph Gordon's half-brother to brother but I haven't give up on the idea yet. Use it as a big reveal into the episode. (Ednasharon24534, 3.57am) June 7, 2020

Ideas for The Sullivans first season Edit

I have some referals for actors in their upper 50s to lower 60s to portray the hitman who killed most of Katherine's family in The Sullivans. Either Sean Bean, Will Patton, William Baldwin, Jason Issacs, James Spader, Thomas Haden Church and D. B. Sweeney. BattleshipMan (talk) 02:37, June 7, 2020 (UTC)

Mile High City Edit

For the names of the other characters in Mile High City as seen on the cast section. Robert Beresford was the patriarch of the murdered family in Denver who prerecorded the message of what he discovered about the trucking company that is a front for smuggling children on the portable USB stick and put it in safe deposit box in a bank branch he doesn't go before he and his family got murdered. Norman Pearson is Drake's CI who reveals the trucking company has questionable ties since they hired some ex-convicts and rumor has it that several employees tried to come forward, but they either backed out, disappeared or died by various causes. Judge David Catalano was the one who signed the subpoena to gain access to the manifests of the trucks and the company's business records before that shootout began. BattleshipMan (talk) 20:47, June 7, 2020 (UTC)

Can you leave Gordon and Ralph as a brothers for now? I think the plan to the reveals into the episode... make the audience they are brother until big reveals. (Ednasharon24534, 2.24am) June 8, 2020

Hartman subsections and plans for The Sullivans Edit

Couple of things.

Ednasharon and I have added some season sub-sections of some of the Hartman main characters, ready for work. Do you think there should be the same thing with L&O New Orleans main characters?

Secondly, there will be at least two or three appearances of Katherine's brother Joey in the first season. The first one will be the brief appearance where he does the book signing of his latest novel in various cities, with Denver as one of them. Katherine and Drake go to his book signing, even though he didn't invite them because of his estrangement with Katherine. The second one might have Joey's girlfriend ask Katherine about Joey since he won't open up to her about his own problems. Joey would get into a bitter argument with Katherine about his girlfriend's visit to her with Drake and Ryan present. Joey says that all he wants to forget his childhood trauma, but Katherine says it's having a negative impact on him and it's not helping him psychologically since he doesn't open up to people about it. Joey says that she just couldn't let go of her obsession to find the person who murdered their family. Katherine states that finding the man responsible will bring closure to them. Joey bitterly states that he doesn't want closure anymore and that she will never find the man responsible after all these years. Katherine says that she's been staying patient for her own family. Joey coldly asked what about him and says that her life is no better than his. Drake sternly defends Katherine because she saved his life before they were married and she is a good wife and loving mother to Finn & Mary. Drake also defends that she prosecuted and brought down a lot of big time criminals and helped a lot of victims get justice. Ryan, fed up with the argument, berated Joey for his behavior and that he could've just seek Katherine's help with his problems and let her reach out to him instead of isolating himself from the last remaining immediate family and those around him. Joey bitterly says that he is not her father. Ryan says that he loves Katherine like a daughter and he will defend her with everything, including what will do to find the hitman who killed most of Katherine's side of her family. Finally, he orders Joey to leave and he threatened him with something to convince to leave. Joey says that he wouldn't that since he's retired among other things, but Ryan says that he maybe retired, but he still has his connections. Joey then left in disgust.

After he left, Katherine muttered that she can't believe her brother. Drake can see that Katherine is upset over her argument with Joey as Ryan says that he brought that to himself. Katherine told Ryan that she heard what Joey said, which means won't listen to reason and that he will further isolate himself if they don't find the hitman who killed most of her family. Ryan says that that depends on how he will be when that's finally solved as he went to his room. Drake gives his wife some needed comfort and Katherine is anguished over losing most of her family and how her life & Joey's could have been if it didn't happened. Drake consoles her that it wasn't her fault or her father's fault in that tragedy and that she has children who love her like he does love her. What do you think? BattleshipMan (talk) 06:52, June 15, 2020 (UTC)

Thanks. Not sure when all this will happen. BattleshipMan (talk) 20:52, June 15, 2020 (UTC)

Advice about Dallas and the triple crossover Edit

Ednasharon24534 and I are thinking that maybe we all should write the triple crossover and maybe take over writing Law & Order: Dallas since Talix has been inactive for too long. Do you think we should do that? BattleshipMan (talk) 18:08, June 17, 2020 (UTC)

What is RL? I never heard of it. I hope Talix returns soon so the crossover will be done. BattleshipMan (talk) 01:54, June 18, 2020 (UTC)

L&O NOLA characters & The Sullivans charactersEdit

Good idea about Stetler returning with a vengeance against Katherine, Drake and the FJU. BattleshipMan (talk) 01:56, June 18, 2020 (UTC)

Stetler would indeed make his first appearance in flashbacks in the first season in the 15th episode, maybe in two parts. Not sure about the two parts. BattleshipMan (talk) 03:08, June 18, 2020 (UTC)
BTW, Jacobr1020 did add a brief episode summary of episode 2 of The Sullivans, as you may have noticed. I scheduled the start of both series in either late July/early August after he wrote that summary. What do you think? BattleshipMan (talk) 14:41, June 21, 2020 (UTC)
What about Law & Order: Dallas and three part crossover? Should we wait or not? Have anybody ask Talix when he is returning? Hopefully not too late. (Ednasharon24534, 4.28pm) June 21, 2020

Hartman Season 12Edit

Can I do the plot of season 12 premiere, 60 minutes episode because the plot was my idea? The episode will takes place 3 weeks after season finale. I write the plot in Hartman season 12 selection and then create the episode page - adding everything, this is a better way. (Ednasharon24534, 4.24-26pm) June 21, 2020

You and BattleshipMan can help with the plot because of my "grammar" (Ednasharon24534, 4.35-37pm) June 21, 2020

From what I can see, Gideon Chess is now elected DA since the season 11 finale has him two weeks away from getting elected DA. Also, remember the guest stars who will appear on the season 12 premiere. BattleshipMan (talk) 15:41, June 21, 2020 (UTC)
As a reminder, the guest stars on season 12 premiere include Sylvester Stallone (in the special guest starring role) as the Chief of the Los Angeles Fire Department, Carl Lumbly as the director of Office of Emergency Management, Anthony Edwards as the father of the trapped family one of the main characters is trying to save and Terry Kinney as the Chief of the Los Angeles Police Department. BattleshipMan (talk) 22:42, June 22, 2020 (UTC)
Ednasharon should write season 12 premiere of Hartman and we'll make corrections & additions if we have to. I have a idea for the season 1 premiere of The Sullivans. It's when Nicole Richter joins FJU and we get introductions of Mario Nazario and Hessa Cohen since they weren't seen on the backdoor pilot. BTW, I added the article of The Sullivans character Officer Kyle Francis. BattleshipMan (talk) 22:42, June 22, 2020 (UTC)

OK Edit

I understand but I strongly don't like second spin off's title because it sound ransom and odd, this is my opinion, sorry.

I still think the name of team force to be the show's title because it will make it bit better. And also what about Ramsey and Lowry? They need to get mainly involved, not just Vargas and Shane. The choice of show name is your but I just share my own opinions.

In season 12 episode 7, the main reason why Gordon wants Hartman to get involved with because he wants someone to take the fall if the truth about his past, meaning he plans a trap for Hartman. I still planning the big reveal about Gordon's real mother.

Gordon was adopted by Ralph's mother when he was baby, he knew the woman who he raised wasn't his real mother. He spends his life of tracking his real mother but when he finally finds her after seeing her with her other family, she furiously rejects him and threatens to come after him if he don't leave her alone. His biological mother's rejection change Gordon's personality which results his obsession with young girls. The reveals of Gordon's parentage will revisit a past story in Hartman series (before Season 8).

(Ednasharon24534, 3.15pm) June 27, 2020

Hang on. It's Nash's decision on what spinoffs he titled them. Vargas and Shane sounds okay to me because it focuses on them and their professional & personal lives. Like I said before, it's like Cagney & Lacey and Rizzoli & Isles, which is fine. So cut Nash some slack about it.
Also, I'm not sure about that revelation idea about Gordon's past and how it will affect Hartman's life. BattleshipMan (talk) 14:41, June 27, 2020 (UTC)
Strongly for my reason; I do admits I got a plans for some characters of spin off show. Not just Vargas and Shane. I mean new added characters... I do like the title show but everyone need to get involved. That's my final saying

(Ednasharon24534, 12.43-45am) July 1, 2020


I am thinking a big plot twist into the story which could shocks the viewers if the show was real. Check this video out to understand what I mean:[[2]] (Ednasharon24534, 3.59pm) June 27, 2020

The Sullivans season 1Edit

I think the pilot episode of The Sullivans will have Drake and the FJU investigate a brutal beating of a mother and they suspect it was her husband who did it. At the same time, Richter joins the unit and is met with lukewarm reception or something along those lines because of her opiolds addiction. Then, after her husband discharges his wife, the home was set ablaze by the trapped family to escape from their abusive husband and father who went to great lengths to keep them inside. As Katherine seeks to prosecute him, Nazario and Cohen make their first appearance to conduct their own investigation to the case. BattleshipMan (talk) 01:37, June 29, 2020 (UTC)

Advices Edit

I need a small advices; if your friend or close one are unconscious with heroin in his system for hours and you can't call for police or ambulance because somebody is after you, how to wake him up and what will you do? This is for Silent, the part where the lead female character tries to wake up her lover after he took the shot of heroin and being left unconscious for hours. The way I am handling is wrong, anybody will complain the way I am doing. Can you help me out? (Ednasharon24534, 2.45pm) June 30, 2020

Stories Edit

I noticed that you added a series of your own titled Shadow Kids. Why is that? I did add stories of my own, which is United Has Fallen and Pete's Dragon 2: Attack of the Dragons.

Also, what do you think of late July/early August as the premiere dates for Hartman season 12 and The Sullivans season 1? BattleshipMan (talk) 17:32, July 3, 2020 (UTC)

Restaurant to Cinema (First Case) Edit

I change the scene of flashback episode of Law & Order: New Orleans, The First Case (Law & Order: New Orleans) where Parker publicity confront Royce about Vanessa and Tawny in the cinema to make the arugment very public. "Batman Returns" was released in June 1992 where the episode was sets and also the film was bit hit for DC films in real life. https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Batman_Returns

Check on the plot of the flashback episode:

"Later, after finishing their day, Parker and Queen take their girlfriends on a double date at a cinema to see a film "Batman Returns". As they arrive at film screening, Parker and Queen see Royce, Shannon and their children attend the same cinema along with the bodyguards. During film showing, Parker sneaks behind Royce's seat where he confronts Royce about Vanessa. Royce claims that Vanessa has been stalking him for months and revealed the reason why she lost her career as a businesswoman. But when Parker attempts to question Royce about Tawny, Royce furiously lashes out at Parker before orders his guards to sort Parker's "big mouth" out. Royce's guards drag a yelling Parker out of the cinema as Queen, Denise, Paula and cinema audience look on."

(Ednasharon24534, 10.59pm) July 6, 2020

The Sullivans season 2 Edit

Nash, Ednasharon24534 thought of an idea for season 2 of The Sullivans. She thought of a five part trip of road to Europe, but with the ideas of season 2 of The Sullivans already planned out, I decided it will have to be in three parts taking place in Copenhagen. Maybe something related to the plot arc of that season. BattleshipMan (talk) 22:49, July 8, 2020 (UTC)

I am she. (Ednasharon24534, 12.21am) July 9, 2020.
Ah, sorry. Thanks for the clarity. BattleshipMan (talk) 23:24, July 8, 2020 (UTC)

BattleShipMan choose Copenhagen as main location for season 2 but if you wants Interpol gets involved, he could work something out. (Ednasharon24534, 7.20pm) July 9, 2020

Oh, that's just for two or three episodes. Denver Vice Unit will still be involved with the FJU in that season. BattleshipMan (talk) 19:34, July 9, 2020 (UTC)

The premiere dates Edit

Around next week at least, the premiere of season 12 of Hartman and season 1 of The Sullivans should start. I would write episode one of The Sullivans and Ednasharon24534 said she would write episode one of Hartman. The plot summary of Episode 2 of The Sullivans was already written by Jacobr1020. What do you think we should do with it? BattleshipMan (talk) 15:42, July 19, 2020 (UTC)

I have started the plot of Hartman season 12 premiere. In opening scene, there are four different scenes start separately. One scene and then another scene but it happened at the same time and then earthquake start. I have added most of main characters in the opening scene. (Ednasharon24534, 12.46am) July 20, 2020

The reason why most characters are moving to Hartman's house because it is a mix of safe and panic house, very protecting on inside and outside. Doesn't gets break anything around the house expect of the family's personal stuff. The house are very different than other characters' house... to let you know. (Ednasharon24534, 1.41am) July 22, 2020

I call for a backup. The same guy has been editing and deleted stuff from my page - Silent. (Ednasharon24534, 3.57am) July 22, 2020

Mesenteric Ischemia Edit

Mesenteric Ischemia, Lowry's illness into the stomach... I tries to follow how to cause Mesenteric Ischemia during a scene in season 12 premiere. Look up on the links if you don't know about it.

https://www.mayoclinic.org/diseases-conditions/intestinal-ischemia/diagnosis-treatment/drc-20373950#:~:text=Acute%20mesenteric%20artery%20ischemia,clots%20or%20dilate%20blood%20vessels.

https://vascular.org/patient-resources/vascular-conditions/mesenteric-ischemia

https://www.upmc.com/services/heart-vascular/conditions-treatments/chronic-mesenteric-ischemia#:~:text=What%20Is%20Chronic%20Mesenteric%20Ischemia,Weight%20loss

(Ednasharon24534, 1.18am) July 25, 2020

7.5Edit

I finished the story... (Ednasharon24534, 10.11-12pm) July 27, 2020

2nd episode The Sullivans Edit

What do you think we should add with the second episode of The Sullivans? I did add that Drake convinced Katherine's defense lawyer friend Emily Thornton to represent the stepmother. BattleshipMan (talk) 05:17, July 28, 2020 (UTC)

I have adding episode 2 of Hartman Season 12. "Peeping Tom". Check it. (Ednasharon24534, 10.47pm) July 29, 2020

I have done third episode of Hartman season 12 "Living Dead Girl". A twisted case and a secret connection... (Ednasharon24534, 1.16am) August 2, 2020

Episode 5 of The Sullivans Edit

Nash, I have ideas on The Sullivans episode 5 that involves Doyle's sexuality and him dealing with a hate crime and also reveals Doyle & Bishop's awkward relationship because of Bishop's conservative views and a previous estrangement of his middle daughter due to the fact that she's a lesbian. Not sure which crime will be yet. Ednasharon will write episode 4 of the series. BattleshipMan (talk) 15:09, August 2, 2020 (UTC)

Now that episode 4 was written, episode 5 is ready to write. I don't know what the plans of it will be other than what I mentioned above. BattleshipMan (talk) 15:08, August 5, 2020 (UTC)

I have added episode 5 of Hartman and The Sullivans. (Ednasharon24534, 2.58am) August 10, 2020

I have added episode 6 of Hartman and The Sullivans. In Hartman, Hartman make a dangerous risk move while investigate a mysterious death of a young schoolgirl and discover Gordon's plan to sue visiting right for his children at the same time and in the Sullivans, a mysterious discover of a human bones found in school playground leads a old case from 17 years ago (Ednasharon24534, 1.07-11am) August 12, 2020.

The Sullivans episode 7 Edit

I've added episode 7 of The Sullivans. It's about Drake, Katherine and others celebrated the birth of Drake's late sister Amanda. Meanwhile, the FJU investigates the slaughter of the family, leaving one boy in the coma while trying to help a grieving mother (Jennifer Love Hewitt) go through with the tragedy. Drake and Katherine learn that her brother Joey is coming to Denver for his book signing. It's also where forensics psychologist and criminal profiler Dr. Kendall Fleiss makes her first appearance.

I have added episode 7 of Hartman with a big twist and a some secrets being revealed from the grave (Ednasharon24534, 1.42am) August 15, 2020

Who plays Emma Greico in flashbacks of season 7 and after that twist in season 12? She died in 1996 month after Beth turned 7.(Ednasharon24534, 1.02am) August 16, 2020

A fact about Barbara.... Edit

In season 7, Barbara Kinney mention she never had children of her but in season 12, it was revealed that Barbara has a son - Ralph - and adopted Gordon as her own. The part about having no more children was true but not the whole truth. When she was arrested for Emma's murder, Barbara didn't mention about her sons because she was trying to protect them and their family's legacy. 3 years after having Ralph, Barbara becoming infertile after involved in horrified accident. At the same time, Ralph's father was seeing Emma and got her pregnant with Gordon.

Barbara knew about Emma being Gordon's real mother, wanting to wreck her life for abandoned Gordon and his son/cousin but she killed Emma during a fight before covering her death. Gordon knew Barbara kills Emma and they made a promise to keep each other secrets until years later, the past catch up with them.

In 1964, Barbara was 18 when she has Ralph and in 1968, Emma was almost 22 when she has Gordon. Gordon's first son was born in 1985 but his aunt never knew the connection. Emma covers the truth to protect herself and her family.(Ednasharon24534, 1.29am) August 16, 2020.

Plans for The Sullivans in episodes 8-10 and 11. Edit

Since Ednasharon24534 will be writing the events on episode 8 and 10, the personal aspect of the characters, including the two episode with Katherine's brother Joey (who will appear in episodes 8 and 9), should be written by you and me. For episode 11, it will be the first appearance of Lieutenant Hannah Wie (Kelly Hu). BattleshipMan (talk) 01:19, August 19, 2020 (UTC)

I think there should some necessary add-ons and changes of episode 8 of The Sullivans. I don't think that man with schizophrenia Wayne Prescott should stay in The Sullivans' house because Ryan is a judge and they got Finn & Mary living with their parents and grandfather, even though he will have some information regarding the hitman who killed most of Katherine's family. BattleshipMan (talk) 03:05, August 19, 2020 (UTC)
To have Wayne staying in The Sullivans' house is Katherine's idea because she feels sorry for him over the situation, not knowing the full picture. Drake will ends up back up Katherine's decision despite his colleagues' warning about Wayne's health and behaviour. In next episode, the team will make a shocking discovery involving Wayne. (Ednasharon24534, 4.25-26am) August 19, 2020
I added some stuff on episode 9 of The Sullivans. I'm not sure about the ending Ednasharon put on it. BattleshipMan (talk) 17:44, August 19, 2020 (UTC)

Hartman 12.08-10Edit

I have added episode 8 of Hartman. The team team up with their former colleague Jesse Temple to investigate a incident at bowling arena but things gets complicated while Hartman struggles after learning about Gordon's past. (Ednasharon24534, 3.24am) August 19, 2020

I have added another episode (number 9) of Hartman and The Sullivans. Beth will learns about Gordon being her half-brother but not about Gordon's "incest" son yet.(Ednasharon24534, 6.20pm) August 19, 2020

I have added episode 10 of Hartman. Barrera's daughters is accused of a crime, Abby and Beth seeking answers and an another secret about Gordon's past is revealed. (Ednasharon24534, 2.58-3.09am) August 22, 2020.

The Sullivans/Hartman crossover Edit

The crossover between those two shows should start with The Sullivans, when MCS detectives (not sure which ones yet) and Shane came over to the FJU about the case that is related to theirs. The sideplot of it will have Shane speak to fellow Gordon Fontana victim Wendy Driver. Then Drake, Katherine and one other detective (either Ruiz, Holmes or Andrea) would come to Los Angeles to help Hartman and the MCS, which Drake & Katherine visited Hartman at her home, like she did with them in the backdoor pilot. BattleshipMan (talk) 03:56, August 22, 2020 (UTC)

Alright, Nash. I will need some story ideas for the crossover, please. BattleshipMan (talk) 00:08, August 23, 2020 (UTC)

Terry Sanders' return Edit

I got a question. What is your idea involved Terry Sanders' return? I mean his character is dead. How will it work? (Ednasharon24534, 1.27am) August 23, 2020

Good idea but can the ghosts appears in Episode 15 after Gordon exposed himself, his secrets and Hartman's "involvement". Also, the identity of Gordon's son/cousin will be revealed too. (Ednasharon24534, 5.22/23pm) August 23, 2020

I have added episode 12 of The Sullivans and Hartman (most of the plot). (Ednasharon24534, 8.29pm) August 24, 2020.

Crossover #2 Edit

I have added crossover episode page Shards of Innocent/Shards of Guilt. (Ednasharon24534, 1.01am) August 27, 2020

Any ideas for 12.14 Edit

I am currently on break but any idea for episode 14? This episode will mainly involves on Dekker's campaign for state attorney and I was thinking to get Detective David McCall and Detective Thora Price involved. Also, Gordon sets a trap on Hartman to publicly expose himself but Hartman will be in huge trouble than Gordon, Lowry discover his husband's truth and the identity of Gordon's first born son will be revealed. (Ednasharon24534, 5.50pm) September 1, 2020.

Gordon will be still in the hospital during episode 14 and 15 and the truth behind Gordon's attack will be revealed too. (Ednasharon24534, 6pm) September 1, 2020.

Talix has returned Edit

It seems that Talix is back and he made a edit on CSI: LA. Hopefully, he will work on Law & Order: Dallas. BattleshipMan (talk) 18:26, September 4, 2020 (UTC)

Yes I'm back. I needed some personal time off. So regarding the crossover part, I will get to it very soon. Talix (talk) 10:08, September 5, 2020 (UTC)

I have added the full plot of season 12 episode 14 of Hartman (TV Series). The beginning of a downfall for Hartman... (Ednasharon24534, 7.31-34pm) September 6, 2020.

Detective Thora Price (Hartman) Edit

How we gets Detective Thora Price (Tracy Spiridakos) involved in the series? I am still planning of her first appearance... Thora is a Special Investigations detective who is inadvertedly dragged into her partner's mess. Any ideas? (Ednasharon24534, 1.13pm) September 7, 2020

12x16 Edit

I have added season 12 episode 16 of Hartman and also first appearance of Detective Thora Price. In this episode, Vargas puts herself in danger while trying to prove Gordon killing her mother wasn't self-defense, the MCS and D.A struggle to cope of dealing the cases following recent events and Beth and Abby seeking answers over their absence aunt before things take a shocking u-turn.

Viewers know Gordon killing his biological mother wasn't self-defense following a flashback episode. However, Barbara and somebody else know the full truth about Emma's death but Barbara ends up found dead in her cell. Her death will be very suspicious because Gordon's warnings to Vargas before.

I am going to taking break after episode 16 while helping out The Sullivans. (Ednasharon24534, 3.59pm) September 7, 2020.

1x14 and 1x15 of The Sullivans Edit

I think I may have a solution of 1x14. One of my ideas is that one of Andrea's daughters witnessed a crime. I think with help from Dr. Fleiss, Andrea and the FJU work to solve the crime without having her daughter testify. Not case which crime she will witness though.

Also for 1x15, it's going to be a full episode and after that, it will have an episode article of it. BattleshipMan (talk) 15:00, September 7, 2020 (UTC)

And the appearance of the ghosts will appears at the next episode when Hartman ends up reaching breaking point following a shocking death. (Ednasharon24534, 4.02pm) September 7, 2020.

I have added a case in 1x14 of The Sullivans to let you know. (Ednasharon24534, 8.50pm) September 7, 2020.

I completed 1x15 of The Sullivans. The episodes needs to reveal what happens to Stetler and the believable ending speech for Drake and Katherine about their live together after the events 15 years before. BattleshipMan (talk) 21:14, September 10, 2020 (UTC)
I have added Past (The Sullivans). Fell free to go over some things about it. BattleshipMan (talk) 01:03, September 11, 2020 (UTC)

Ghosts Edit

Which episode should we added the ghost of Terry Sanders, Hartman's parents, grandfather Karl and Jasmine? Do you have any idea? Episode 17, 18, 21, 22 or 23 (before final episode)? (Ednasharon24534, 2.09-21am) September 11, 2020.

1x18 of The SullivansEdit

I think Wayne should wake up close to the end of 1x18 of The Sullivans and reveal where the video is at. Katherine might call someone she knows and trusts in New York and that person finds the video, Then in episode 19, that person (played by James Morrison) gives her a DVD which he burned the VHS that recorded the video to the DVD. Then that character gets killed in front of her and Drake. Maybe later, the White Tiger and his associates would attack the safe house where Wayne is recovering. While Richter battles the attackers, the Wayne would get killed protecting Richer and Dr. Fleiss, the later got a minor wound, before Drake and others arrived. What do you think? BattleshipMan (talk) 16:03, September 14, 2020 (UTC)

Thank for adding season 12 episode 17 but BattleshipMan says he wants to add episode 17 before meddling things but I sorted things for Brandon to add anything else in episode 17. (Ednasharon24534, 7.37am) September 15, 2020.

12x18 Edit

I have added season 12 episode 18 of Hartman and also, I added more stuff in episode 17. James Greico will return to help his family over the situation with Gordon (including finding Juilet - his long-lost absence aunt). He will appear at the end of episode 17 where he confront Gordon over the past. I am taking a break after episode 18... on other things. (Ednasharon24534, 12.57-1.07am) September 16, 2020.

Emma Greico Edit

I have added Emma Greico page because things was getting confused over the truth about Gordon. She was played by Anne Heche in flashback. Also, Emma has 14 grandchildren (plus one more = 15). (Ednasharon24534, 2.11-14am) September 16, 2020.

The Sullivans 1x19 Edit

Since I'm taking a short break, here's some ideas for The Sullivans 1x19. The man Katherine called in New York (James Morrison) called her saying that he found the tape and is on his way to Denver. He met up with Drake and Katherine and told them that he burned (copied) the video from VHS to DVD and, as he gave it to them, said he discovered some other things on that video, including the face of the White Tiger. Then The White Tiger (Thomas Haden Church) shot Katherine's contact dead as Drake and Katherine made their getaway. As they gather Ryan, Finn and Mary to the restaurant ready for the next plan in action, a bomb was discovered and they evacuated everyone out before the bomb exploded. Before that, Drake unknowingly met the White Tiger inside the restaurant before the bombing. They and the FJU will see the video in 1x20. What do you think? BattleshipMan (talk) 07:32, September 16, 2020 (UTC)

Good idea about Michael, actually. Morrison does fit the bill as a colleague of Katherine's father. Also, I think Drake, Katherine and others would come clean to Winder and the rest of their people about Wayne being alive and hidden so the White Tiger would come find them in 1x20. BattleshipMan (talk) 20:37, September 16, 2020 (UTC)
I wonder what the best name for Morrison's character will be and anything else that goes on in 1x19. BattleshipMan (talk) 23:35, September 18, 2020 (UTC)

Ending of Hartman 12x16 Edit

I know I am on the break but I have added into the ending of season 12 episode 16. The MCS will gets in the argument with Hartman after learning what happened to Vargas during her visit with Gordon but Vargas defeated her captain and explaining it was her decision to visit Gordon, not Hartman. Then, you know the story... Hartman and Vargas decide to visit Barbara in prison but things quickly backfires on them. (Ednasharon24534, 12.24am) September 18, 2020.

Horror? Edit

Are you fan of horror film? (Ednasharon24534, 11.12pm) September 20, 2020.

I think Beth should give birth before final episode (at episode 21/22), Lauren's birth will be something different. Beth will ends up in the same hospital where "Juliet" works, outside of Los Angeles.

Episode 21 will mainly involves Hartman's past but The Greico siblings' search for Juliet gets throw into the mix. (Ednasharon24534, 10.35pm) September 21, 2020.

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