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I've archived your talk pages as per your request. Feel free to let me know if there are any problems. Chris6d (talk) 20:03, June 22, 2020 (EST)

Ending Hartman and Vargas & Shane title

I decided to end Hartman after 12 years because I felt it was the right time to close out Chloe Hartman's story.

As for the second spin-off's title, while the other task force members will get focus, the titular characters will be the main focus as they try to put the Gordon Fontana saga behind them and regain control of their lives once and for all. Nashwalker 06:56, June 27, 2020 (UTC)

The Sullivans 1.08, 09, 10

I haven't forgotten that. Nash and I might make some tweaks in those episodes once you wrote them so that they could fit into the story of season 1 that involves Katherine's search for the mob assassin who killed most of her family leading to the climax of it in the season finale. BattleshipMan (talk) 14:40, June 29, 2020 (UTC)

Mile High City quotes

I added and clean up some of it.

Also, I thought the the names of the family Hartman and the MCS previously investigated are named the Harrington family and the murdered family in Denver the FJU are investigating are named the Beresford family. The patriarch of the Beresford family Robert, left a recorded video revealing the criminal activity of the trucking company is involved and hid it in a bank he never goes to, hench his name on the credits. BattleshipMan (talk) 02:29, June 30, 2020 (UTC)

I wonder what quotes Katherine would say to Vargas about how to fully move on from what Gordon did to her. BattleshipMan (talk) 20:27, July 2, 2020 (UTC)
Mile High City is the nickname for Denver because its official elevation is exactly one mile above sea level. BattleshipMan (talk) 21:08, July 2, 2020 (UTC)

Silent spell-check at your request

In the fifth last paragraph

Anna walks into the woods where she gets covered by Bethany and the rest of the members. Bethany violently beats Anna up for killing Ethan up before taking Anna back to the church. At the same time, Bailey gets questions by police officers about Turner's murder, strongly denies Bennett's involvement. Outside of station, Bailey witnessed Nicholas' strange behavior during a phone call before gets attacked by Kelly who accusing her of protect Bennett but Kelly gets pushed back by Nicholas, Willis and their other colleagues. Bailey runs away from the argument and then gets covered by Eliza in the street. Eliza breaks down to a confused Bailey, promising her that she will reveals the whole answers before drugged Bailey into her car, drive away. Hours later, Bennett frees himself in cabin and then walks back to the church, arms himself with the confiscated guns. Nicholas and Eliza arrive back at the church, left furious at Bethany for letting Bennet (You're missing the last letter t in Bennett) escape while tries to comfort a badly bruised Anna. Anna tries to warn a confused Bethany that her daddy will kill her before give her their mother's tape.

In the fourth last paragraph

Bennett sneaks into the church where he engage in a fight with some of the members. At the same time, Bailey wake up in the car and went to the church's secretout (might to change the word to better understand the meaning of it) where she gets confronted by Eliza who hold Bailey at gunpoint as Jason arrive and pleads Eliza into not killing Bailey but Eliza confesses to Jason that she was pregnant and has a baby girl who reveals to be Bailey. Bennett refuse to believe Eliza but she show him and Bailey the photo of herself and her baby, confirmed everything is true. Bennett and Bailey fights back to Eliza and hold her to gunpoint with Jason demanded Eliza to take him and Bailey to Anna. Then, Bennett and Bailey finally reunited with Anna who is in bad way after Eliza show them the location. Bennett and Bailey attempts to escape with Anna but Nicholas catch and threatens them but Bennett and Bailey refuse to give Anna to Nicholas just as Bethany arrive and angrily confront Nicholas about her mother, explaining she heard her mother's tape. Nicholas admits to Bethany the whole truth but defeated himself, saying it was her mother who cause his life to go wrong. Knowing everything about Anna has been a huge lie, Eliza and Bethany fight back against Nicholas, letting Bennett and Bailey escape with Anna.

In the last current paragraph

Eliza and the surviving members was arrested and taken away by the police while Bennett, Anna and Bailey was taken to the hospital where they recovered and survived despite Bennett almost succumbs to his injuries and was placed in the coma for a month. As he wakes up, Kelly furiously confront Bennett about Nicholas but Nicholas reminds Kelly that Nicholas was about to kill Anna before confessing his true feelings for Kelly and apologised (correct it to apologized) for his past actions but also says that Anna always come first. Later, Anna visits Bennett in his hospital bedside where they talks about their feelings to each other.

BattleshipMan (talk) 02:35, June 30, 2020 (UTC)

I don't know how to answer that for your story. BattleshipMan (talk) 03:24, June 30, 2020 (UTC)

I Know Your Secrets

Maybe. Probably sounds like it's based from Rear Window and Disturbia. BattleshipMan (talk) 02:29, July 5, 2020 (UTC)

No, I don't have any specific plans for something like this. BattleshipMan (talk) 02:33, July 5, 2020 (UTC)

The Sullivans season 2

Nah. The first season finale won't necessarily end in the cliffhanger, but it will in two parts. So maybe there should be something like what you said about a chase around the Europe about that starts in around episodes 5 or 6 in the second season, probably in three parts. Besides, I have some plans for season 2 of The Sullivans. BattleshipMan (talk) 21:20, July 8, 2020 (UTC)

Well, if it is a big event, it should be at least three parts. I know there was one five part event in Law & Order: New Orleans with Jack and Lauren. I can somewhat see why you thought that. Another thing, one main character will depart in the second season (not in death or anything). BattleshipMan (talk) 21:28, July 8, 2020 (UTC)

Road to...

After going the map, I say either Copenhagen, Denmark; Stockholm, Sweden; Paris, France; Berlin, Germany; Dublin, Ireland; or Vienna, Austria. Those are the Europe locations that might be ideal for season 2. BattleshipMan (talk) 21:41, July 8, 2020 (UTC)

After a moment of deciding, I say Copenhagen, Denmark will be good one. BattleshipMan (talk) 21:54, July 8, 2020 (UTC)
Yes, "Trip to Copenhagen" sounds good. BattleshipMan (talk) 22:00, July 8, 2020 (UTC)
We'll worry about that when the time comes. In the meantime, the plot arc of the second season will have the FJU investigates when multiple girls vanish and work with Vice Unit members Sergeant Alicia Pearce (Afton Williamson) and Detectives Taylor Kellerson (Tate Ellington) and Ramon Rivas (Kirk Acevedo) when they discover that a human trafficking ring is involved. So it could be something involving that. Another thing, two characters, who are recurring in season 1 (one will start midway in season 1), will be promoted to main cast in season 2 while one main cast member departs in the end of first season. Also, midway in season 2, there will be a family tragedy with one main character (no death by criminal act, just a tragic death).
I'm gonna have "Trip to Copenhagen" in two parts. That's more than enough. I gonna have Drake, Holmes, Richter, Katherine and Cohen go there to find an abducted girl with help from Interpol, while Winder has the other detectives work with Vice Unit about the case and it leads to a discovery of a crime ring involved. BattleshipMan (talk) 19:12, July 10, 2020 (UTC)

Teams for Copenhagen

We'll worry about that when season 2 comes closer. BattleshipMan (talk) 20:25, July 10, 2020 (UTC)

Hartman/The Sullivans crossover

Hartman season 12 and The Sullivans season will have a crossover in episode 13 in their respective seasons. BattleshipMan (talk) 01:32, July 15, 2020 (UTC)

The premiere dates

Around next week at least, the premiere of season 12 of Hartman and season 1 of The Sullivans should start. I'll write episode one of The Sullivans. You write episode one of Hartman. Nashwalker will handle the clean up of of those episodes. Also, the plot summary of Episode 2 of The Sullivans was already written by Jacobr1020. BattleshipMan (talk) 15:43, July 19, 2020 (UTC)

The funeral of Jasmine likely occurred episodes 18 and 19 of season 11 of Hartman. You might want to change something something involving the Hartman family in that restaurant. Also, one more thing, the event would occur a week after Gideon Chess gets elected District Attorney. BattleshipMan (talk) 00:12, July 20, 2020 (UTC)

Hey

Hey man, it's been a long time since we make projects together and I was wondering if you would like to work on one. Here's this one. Cillian (2021). It's a superhero horror. CillianChamp 02:11, July 20, 2020 (UTC)

You can add some images if you want. I don't mind. CillianChamp 02:16, July 20, 2020 (UTC)

Fanon Wiki Admin Election

Hello, I am messaging you as I think you would be a good candidate to become an admin on the wiki, so check out the forum to thread to sign up if interested: https://fanon.fandom.com/wiki/Thread:131583 --Etherean4 (talk) 01:07, July 21, 2020 (UTC)

Name character

How about Leonard Carlyle as the name of Anthony Edwards' character? Any other characters you need named? BattleshipMan (talk) 02:47, July 21, 2020 (UTC)

I think Stallone's character could be named Robert Bellucci. Not sure on Lumbly and Kinney's characters. BattleshipMan (talk) 15:14, July 21, 2020 (UTC)
The one name I can think of for Kinney's character might be Ollie Stern. Not sure on Lumbly's character yet. BattleshipMan (talk) 16:56, July 23, 2020 (UTC)
I think Lumbly's character name should be Kenneth Cooper. BattleshipMan (talk) 19:39, July 24, 2020 (UTC)
Alright, Leonard's wife should be Cheryl and oldest daughter should be Katie, middle son should be Will and the youngest daughter should be name Stacy. BTW, the name is just Leonard, not Leonardo. Remember that, please. BattleshipMan (talk) 02:32, July 25, 2020 (UTC)

Plans for Hartman episode 7.5

I think LAFD Chief Bellucci should come up with the plan to get Shane, Chess and the ailing Lowry out and explain the risks to Hartman, Dekker and others. I think also once they find Jonathan, they should have him use the radio to speak to his mother. BattleshipMan (talk) 02:41, July 25, 2020 (UTC)

I think they should do is to carefully cut a small hole in in the entry area, big enough without risk for collapse and use some heavy equipment to hold it in place to buy more time for the survivors to at least squeeze through the hole, starting with Lowry of course. They will use the fire truck's latter that is on the window to get to the ground. BattleshipMan (talk) 15:10, July 25, 2020 (UTC)
Well, they used some type of heavy duty saw that is cut from diamonds to made the blade super sharp. Firefighters usually use those to saw through concrete and metal walls during building collapse situations. They would use some air big system that lift things up to give enough space for people to get out of the rubble. You might want to use two airbags to lift up the rubble to get Chess, Shane and Lowry out. BattleshipMan (talk) 01:14, July 26, 2020 (UTC)
The one the paramedics used to carry victims are called backboard. Then they put them on the gurney in the ambulance. BattleshipMan (talk) 20:07, July 26, 2020 (UTC)
What is your plan for your ending for that episode? BattleshipMan (talk) 18:56, July 27, 2020 (UTC)
That might be a good idea. Maybe put the U.S. flag on some of the major Los Angeles landmarks. BattleshipMan (talk) 19:40, July 27, 2020 (UTC)
Alright, good. I'm gonna work on the first episode of The Sullivans now. BattleshipMan (talk) 21:21, July 27, 2020 (UTC)

Episode title #1.02

Probably, depends on how much we'll add to it. BattleshipMan (talk) 21:46, July 27, 2020 (UTC)


The plot of I know Your Secrets

Depends on what kind of secrets they discovered. BattleshipMan (talk) 01:27, July 29, 2020 (UTC)

The Sullivans episodes 3 and 4

You can write episode 4 of The Sullivans after I wrote episode 3 of it. BattleshipMan (talk) 02:11, August 1, 2020 (UTC)

Once I wrote episode 3 of The Sullivans, you write the summary of episode 4. I probably will write either episodes 4 or 5 of Hartman season 12. BattleshipMan (talk) 15:13, August 1, 2020 (UTC)
Not sure. That's up to Nash. I will publish episode 3 of The Sullivans within 2 days or thereabouts. I'm just gonna write episode 4 of Hartman. BattleshipMan (talk) 18:20, August 1, 2020 (UTC)
I saw what you wrote on episode 4. I'll tell you one thing. The FJU is like a fortress that is designed to protect the personnel and the victims from any criminal, abusive family members and such. BattleshipMan (talk) 16:27, August 3, 2020 (UTC)
Alright, I verified that it is in the Omaha police station. Anyone else came with Drake and Katherine in Omaha? BattleshipMan (talk) 16:46, August 3, 2020 (UTC)

#12.16 Hartman Idea

I think we should wait until what Nash has to say about it. BattleshipMan (talk) 20:08, August 9, 2020 (UTC)

The Sullivans episode 5

I added the part where Bishop admits the reason behind his awkward working relationship with Doyle. I think maybe Kim's pregnancy should happen elsewhere. But we'll think about this later. BattleshipMan (talk) 01:05, August 10, 2020 (UTC)

Not that. I meant location wise. BattleshipMan (talk) 01:18, August 10, 2020 (UTC)
Well, Denver Zoo is a really big zoo. 80 aches to be exact since the websites about it said so. So after thinking about it and what you thought of, it could be either Denver Zoo, one of the light rail trains or Denver Botanical Gardens. So it should be in Denver Zoo, that's fine with me. I'm just wasn't sure where it would be best yet. BattleshipMan (talk) 01:38, August 10, 2020 (UTC)
Good call on using the light rail train. I think we'll use the Denver Zoo later in the season for something crime related or something big. BattleshipMan (talk) 01:42, August 10, 2020 (UTC)

Trial of the Century

I saw. There's a lot of stuff to work on that episode Trial of the Century like quotes, cast, trivia and such. BattleshipMan (talk) 20:19, August 10, 2020 (UTC)

That's true.

The Sullivans episode 6

I added some personal lives stuff on that episode. Also, episode 7 of The Sullivans is mine to write since I'm having Jennifer Love Hewitt as a special guest star on it. BattleshipMan (talk) 01:01, August 12, 2020 (UTC)

Happy Birthday

Happy Birthday, Edna! Nutball5000 (talk) 18:33, August 13, 2020 (UTC)

Black Mirror

Have you ever watch this sci-fi anthology series Black Mirror? CillianChamp 15:40, August 15, 2020 (UTC)

Name character in The Sullivans 1.08 to 1.10

I remember you planned to have a surname Prescott for him. BattleshipMan (talk) 01:44, August 19, 2020 (UTC)

What about Albert, Jacob, Wayne, Thomas or Lawrence? BattleshipMan (talk) 01:48, August 19, 2020 (UTC)
I'm not sure if Wayne staying at The Sullivans' place is such a good idea. Ryan is a former judge and not to mentioned that Drake & Katherine have children (Finn & Mary). Even though Wayne will be the key to something Drake and Katherine have been looking for. BattleshipMan (talk) 02:33, August 19, 2020 (UTC)
Also, I wonder how Drake, Katherine, Hessa and the FJU will find out Wayne has some info about the hitman who killed most of Katherine's family. I think they found a diary that has Katherine's father's NYPD badge number and the hitman's alias or something like that. BattleshipMan (talk) 02:47, August 19, 2020 (UTC)
I added some things on episode 9 of The Sullivans. I added the part where they find Wayne's dairy in the bed with Ruiz and Hessa involved. It has the NYPD badge number of Katherine's father and the date of when most of her family was murdered. I added the part where Joey confronts Katherine for hinting his girlfriend about their childhood trauma. The ending, however, will probably have to change. BattleshipMan (talk) 17:38, August 19, 2020 (UTC)
What are your plans for part 3 of it? BattleshipMan (talk) 01:57, August 20, 2020 (UTC)
I added what I did add in episode 10 of The Sullivans. BattleshipMan (talk) 03:52, August 22, 2020 (UTC)

Birthday wishes

You're very welcome. --Nutball5000 (talk) 02:24, August 19, 2020 (UTC)

Dekker

Three actors I can think of for Dekker's opponent can be Dylan McDermott, Chi McBride and Daniel Baldwin. Other than that, I can't figure out anybody else. BattleshipMan (talk) 23:38, August 20, 2020 (UTC)

Not sure what the best name of the character would be. Maybe something less generic. BattleshipMan (talk) 00:20, August 21, 2020 (UTC)
Any names can you think of that character? BattleshipMan (talk) 16:41, August 22, 2020 (UTC)

The Sullivans 1x11

I'm gonna write episode 11 of The Sullivans, which will have an appearance of Lisa Zhao and the first appearance of Lieutenant Hanna Wie (Kelly Hu). BattleshipMan (talk) 16:41, August 22, 2020 (UTC)

Also, why that ending when Drake talking to a mystery person on the phone. BattleshipMan (talk) 23:37, August 22, 2020 (UTC)
I wonder how Katherine and others in his family will react to that. BattleshipMan (talk) 23:46, August 22, 2020 (UTC)

The Sullivans/Hartman crossover

All I can think of is that two of MCS detectives (not sure which ones) and Shane come to Denver about the case related to theirs. Shane would visit Wendy Driver during that time. Then Drake, Katherine and one other FJU detective travel to Los Angeles to help Hartman and the others out. Then Drake and Katherine visit Hartman and her family at her home, like Hartman visited the Sullivan family at their home in the backdoor pilot. BattleshipMan (talk) 23:36, August 22, 2020 (UTC)

I gonna write the The Sullivans/Hartman crossover. After that, you write episode 14 of The Sullivan. Also, in the personal basis in episode 14, Finn and Mary would be bullied at school and Ryan discovers it has to do with the case their parents previously worked on. BattleshipMan (talk) 20:49, August 24, 2020 (UTC)
One other thing. That episode should introduce Doyle's boyfriend Jake Montgomery who is a construction foreman. BattleshipMan (talk) 21:13, August 24, 2020 (UTC)

Terry Sanders' return

After Hartman finally tells the Greico family the truth about Emma's connection to Gordon, she'll be in a highly vulnerable emotional state and will begin to question her leadership of the MCS. Terry will appear as something of a ghost along with those of her parents, her grandfather Karl, and Jasmine to reassure her. Nashwalker 02:32, August 23, 2020 (UTC)

The Sullivans 1x12

I know Witness Protection. Although I have other ideas where the video will be found later in the season and the confrontation with the White Tiger will occur the final four episodes of the season. But I'm open to suggestions from you. BattleshipMan (talk) 18:12, August 24, 2020 (UTC)

I changed the ending of that episode, but kept Wayne alive and hidden. I also changed the part with Ryan since Joey doesn't live in Denver. BattleshipMan (talk) 18:46, August 24, 2020 (UTC)

The Sullivans later episodes

Don't forget that The Sullivans/Harmtan crossover happens in episode 13 and episode 15 will be a mostly flashback episode where Drake & Katherine first met, how Drake would become a cop and how he & Katherine became a couple. BattleshipMan (talk) 18:19, August 24, 2020 (UTC)

I know you're trying to help create drama for the shows and I do let you in on some ideas. But I also have my own ideas for the The Sullivans. I have the subplot ideas for the show on my profile page. While I do know you're trying to help, I just sometimes I want to know where your ideas are going at times and I don't like being out in the open. BattleshipMan (talk) 18:34, August 24, 2020 (UTC)

The ideas for The Sullivan seasons

For the ideas of The Sullivans seasons, Drake was already framed for a crime once in the past and it will be revealed in the 15th episode of the first season in a mostly flashback episode. It was where he first met Katherine, how he would become a cop and how he and Katherine became a couple. It probably will have to have an episode article of it. The other ideas will have to take that under consideration in the later seasons. BattleshipMan (talk) 01:36, August 26, 2020 (UTC)

Oh, that's right. I forgot that Edwin Hodge appeared as Elijah Okafor in Law & Order: New Orleans. BattleshipMan (talk) 01:40, August 26, 2020 (UTC)

Plans for Hartman and The Sullivans

I'm on break too. Not sure what ideas to give you for Hartman 12x14 and 12x15. But here's some ideas for The Sullivans 1x14. Personal life ideas in the episode: Finn and Mary get bullied by several kids at school and Ryan would discover that the reason for it has something to do with the previous case their parents worked on and they set out to deal with it. Winder's oldest son Eugene Jr. has finished med school and his youngest son Anthony will soon graduate college and he told his father he opts to be an FBI agent. Also, Doyle's boyfriend Jake Montgomery, a construction foreman, is introduced. About the case idea for the episode, don't know yet. BattleshipMan (talk) 17:19, September 1, 2020 (UTC)

I hope you take the ideas I gave you under consideration. BattleshipMan (talk) 02:33, September 4, 2020 (UTC)

I Do quotes

Little did Beth know she now married Ramsay in that episode later on in her life after that flashback scene. BattleshipMan (talk) 02:33, September 4, 2020 (UTC)

Talix has returned

It apparently seems that Talix is back and he made a edit on CSI: LA. Hopefully, he will work on Law & Order: Dallas. BattleshipMan (talk) 18:27, September 4, 2020 (UTC)

The Sullivans 1x15

I'm gonna write episode 15 that will be mostly flashback. It will written like how 7.5 (Hartman) was written and then it will become an episode article. BattleshipMan (talk) 19:25, September 6, 2020 (UTC)

Not sure what the summary of Shards of Innocent/Shards of Guilt will be. Also, I'm not even sure how long 1x15 will be. Either way, I'm just writing it, not known if it will be a regular or a 90 minute one. BattleshipMan (talk) 15:12, September 7, 2020 (UTC)
Alright, thanks for adding the case of 1x14. I just wasn't sure the case on it will be. BattleshipMan (talk) 15:34, September 7, 2020 (UTC)
No. Wait until episodes 18 or 19 when Wayne wakes up from his coma, but do have them check on Wayne on episode 16 at the end of it. Also, the "White Tiger" probably shouldn't be a police officer since he is one of the most wanted assassins in the world. Also, Episode 15 will be 60 minutes. BattleshipMan (talk) 01:16, September 10, 2020 (UTC)

Hartman 1x17

I'm gonna write 1x17 of Hartman. It will an introduction of one of Gordon's victims visits Vargas and Shane about Gordon and his plans for visitation rights for his children. That victim will just be on that episode. BattleshipMan (talk) 00:24, September 11, 2020 (UTC)

Ah, makes sense on what you said, I guess. It's just Gordon had four other children from his other victims. BattleshipMan (talk) 00:39, September 11, 2020 (UTC)
I know that Terry Sanders will make an appearance, probably as a ghost later in the final season of Hartman. BattleshipMan (talk) 00:51, September 11, 2020 (UTC)

Past quotes

I saw the quotes you added on The First Case (Law & Order: New Orleans). I'm just trying to figure out the right quotes in Past (The Sullivans). BattleshipMan (talk) 18:20, September 11, 2020 (UTC)

1x18 of The Sullivans

I think Wayne should wake up close to the end of 1x18 of The Sullivans and reveal where the video is at. Katherine might call someone she knows and trusts in New York and that person finds the video, Then in episode 19, that person (played by James Morrison) gives her a DVD which he burned the VHS that recorded the video to the DVD. Then that character gets killed in front of her and Drake. Maybe later, the White Tiger and his associates would attack the safe house where Wayne is recovering. While Richter would battle the attackers, Wayne would get killed protecting Richer and Dr. Fleiss, the later got a minor wound, before Drake and others arrived. What do you think? BattleshipMan (talk) 15:54, September 14, 2020 (UTC)

Problem is though the White Tiger is responsible for the killing of most of Katherine's family. That makes it personal for her & Drake and I want some focus about that. Also the White Tiger make his official appearance in episode 19. I have some plans for that. Since Wayne will awake on episode 18, he and Richter will certainly have some talk about their feelings later on until tragedy strikes, not sure it will be on 19 or 22 (the season finale). I wonder how Drake and the others will tell Winder and the others about Wayne's secret survival. BattleshipMan (talk) 17:02, September 14, 2020 (UTC)
They will see the video on on episode 20, with them, Winder and the FJU to see, that's where they might come clean about Wayne. I used Denver Zoo on the case in 1x17. But I will think about using it on part 2 of the finale. I thought about having Joey and his girlfriend get involved in the part 2 season finale. I'm think I might also bring Drake's younger surviving sister Lydia, her Chicago police sergeant husband Owen and such to help out, maybe few guest characters with knowledge of The White Tiger (maybe NYPD or FBI). BattleshipMan (talk) 17:22, September 14, 2020 (UTC)
I know Katherine and Joey's uncle Henry will show up in the part 2 of the finale. BattleshipMan (talk) 18:56, September 14, 2020 (UTC)

Season 2 and 3 of The Sullivans

All I can say is that one of the main characters on The Sullivans will depart and it won't be by death. Also, Hannah Wie's sister's two children live with her as her sister has an abusive husband who she can't seem to get out of it. BattleshipMan (talk) 18:23, September 15, 2020 (UTC)

Also, in episode 18, Wie should confine with Winder about her sister's abusive relationship with her husband and that Wie has custody of her niece and nephew (her sister's kids) when her sister could've get out of the relationship. BattleshipMan (talk) 18:36, September 15, 2020 (UTC)
Mario Nazario will depart at the end season 2, due to the character's health issues that will be revealed midway in the season. Officer Kyle Francis and Lieutenant Hannah Wie will be upgraded to series regular in season 2. Francis will do field work now and is partnered with Richter. Nazario's replacement will appear in a recurring basis in season 2 and will be upgraded to regular status in season 3. Also, midway in season 2, Bishop will suffer a family tragedy and will go on leave, having an interim DA name Jeremy Pierce (Neal McDonough) take his place. BattleshipMan (talk) 22:11, September 15, 2020 (UTC)
Well, I have plans to explore Holmes's family and the rest Andrea's family to make appearances. There is Holmes's father, retired Army Colonel Frank Holmes (Danny Glover), mother Laura Holmes, h is older brother Terrell, who is a former Army Ranger now a gun dealer for several local gangs while working as a CI for the Denver PD Vice Unit. He also has a younger sister Jennifer Carter, who is an Army CID agent and youngest brother Peter, currently on tour in Iraq, but I doubt that Jennifer and Peter will make first appearances in season 2. For Andrea's family, her father is current Chief of Investigations Burton Donnell (David Morse) and her mother is Maggie (Mary McDonnell), a former cop herself. Her oldest brother Joseph (Kevin Connolly) is a SWAT officer and negotiator, who made an appearance in 1x18 of The Sullivans. Her second oldest brother is K9 officer Michael (Joseph Sikora) and her third oldest brother is Connor (Luke Grimes), a police patrol sergeant. The story of Wie's sister abuse by her husband would be more prominent. Whatever plans you got, think of these over. BattleshipMan (talk) 17:07, September 16, 2020 (UTC)
Hmmm...Not sure who I will pick as Michael and I will think on Toby Kebbell. BattleshipMan (talk) 20:19, September 16, 2020 (UTC)
I think I'll go for Joseph Sikora as Michael as Nash suggested. I'm also on short break. BattleshipMan (talk) 00:44, September 18, 2020 (UTC)
Wayne should do that. But I think it's best if he should be recurring though. BattleshipMan (talk) 22:57, September 25, 2020 (UTC)

Hartman 12x17

About what you added, don't forget Henderson is not DA anymore, unless you have her there for a visit to Chess and Shane. BattleshipMan (talk) 00:44, September 18, 2020 (UTC)

Buy my book and spread the word

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Black Mirror

Hi, I was thinking. Do you watch Black Mirror? CillianChamp 21:11, September 20, 2020 (UTC)


Bandersnatch? I love that film. Anyway, I was thinking if you would like to make a Black Mirror story with me. Interested? CillianChamp 22:00, September 20, 2020 (UTC)


It'll be fun. CillianChamp 23:08, September 20, 2020 (UTC)


I know, but I thought it should be fun working with you. You can help me out with Black Mirror: The Vanishing if you want. CillianChamp 23:58, September 20, 2020 (UTC)


I know. But, if we make a story that relates to Black Mirror, you don't have to watch the rest of the series. But, If we do, we can make the story more amazing and sci-fi adventure-ish.CillianChamp 00:12, September 21, 2020 (UTC)


I can tell you about the idea if you want. CillianChamp 00:23, September 21, 2020 (UTC)  



Here's this. Cillian Darcy: Wonders of the World. It serves as a Black Mirror episode. CillianChamp 22:08, September 21, 2020 (UTC)

Horror

Not a fan of horror stuff. BattleshipMan (talk) 22:20, September 20, 2020 (UTC)

Mostly Action, some Drama, few Comedies and some decent Sci-Fi/Fantasy stuff. BattleshipMan (talk) 22:29, September 20, 2020 (UTC)

Hartman final episodes

I erased your idea for 12x22, because it wasn't how I envisioned how Hartman will end. I have my own ideas for the final four episodes, if you don't mind. Nashwalker 08:17, September 24, 2020 (UTC)

The Sullivans 1x21 and 1x22

I have some plans for the final 2 episodes of season 1 of The Sullivans I'm gonna share with you and Nash. For characters on that episode, it will have one of Katherine's father's old colleagues, now Deputy Chief Lauren Williams (Alfre Woodard), by-the-book NYPD captain Norman Farmer (Conor O'Farrell), whom Drake, Katherine and others are at odds with, but they are supported by NYPD Detectives Damian Decker (Jonathan LaPaglia) and Cindy Mesmer (Robin Tunney). Any other characters suggestions will be good. BattleshipMan (talk) 18:07, September 24, 2020 (UTC)

No, Richter wasn't present when the call happened. Drake and Katherine are with Cohen and Ruiz in New York and Richter is still in Denver. BattleshipMan (talk) 20:16, September 25, 2020 (UTC)
Coleman suspected that Wayne, whom he thought he killed but in reality is alive, was the one who told them about where the video was and confronted Katherine, Drake and others with that knowledge. BattleshipMan (talk) 20:21, September 25, 2020 (UTC)
It's a live video call from Coleman to Katherine and Drake. That's what it is. BattleshipMan (talk) 20:28, September 25, 2020 (UTC)
Alright, alright. I apologize for the confusion. I'm not the best of interpreting things at time. Anyway, Drake and Katherine were still in New York when Coleman's video call happened. Then they hurry to take an emergency flight to Denver. As that was happening, Coleman's flight landed in Denver. BattleshipMan (talk) 20:42, September 25, 2020 (UTC)
Ok. Here's the plan for part 2. Drake, Katherine, Ruiz, Cohen and two NYPD detectives fly to Denver and warned their family and the FJU that Coleman is coming for the rest of the Sullivan family. Coleman and his goons search for the Sullivan family, but with no luck for awhile. They discovered that Wayne is alive and is in hospital under protection Then Drake and Katherine arrived in Denver and rushed to get to their family. Richter and Winder, maybe Wie, would be in the hospital when Coleman's few men came after them. Coleman and his goons would discover that the rest of the Sullivan family are in Judge Adam Wellington's home. But they are guarded by Holmes, Andrea, Nazario and two undercover cops, as well as Drake's brother-in-law Owen (a Chicago Police sergeant). Ryan and Judge Willington would also be armed. Then Drake, Katherine, Ruiz, Cohen and two NYPD detectives Paterson and Mesmer arrived in those locations. I know that Drake and Katherine would do for their children. I think I'll have Ruiz go to Wayne, Richter, Winder, Richter and Wie. I think Cohen, Paterson and Mesmer will go with Drake and Katherine. I want your input on this. BattleshipMan (talk) 21:02, September 25, 2020 (UTC)
I added part 2 of the first season finale of The Sullivans. Wayne is still living. Also, I know you're trying to help certain things to create drama and sometimes it can be confusing, so I hope things are okay between you and I so that the series can have some help from you. BattleshipMan (talk) 22:35, September 25, 2020 (UTC)
I think I have one idea for Wayne in season 2 of The Sullivans. Once he gets well enough, he could work as an analyst in FJU since Francis decides to work on the field and will be partnered with Richter. What do you think? BattleshipMan (talk) 22:48, September 25, 2020 (UTC)

Sullivan character ideas

For your ideas about Sophie on The Sullivans, I think the secret about it should wait until after the death of someone in Katherine's family, not during it since I got Drake, Katherine, Ryan, Finn and Mary go to visit Drake's uncle and cousins in Boston during that time. BattleshipMan (talk) 22:35, September 25, 2020 (UTC)

I haven't thought who should portray Sophie to be honest with you. BattleshipMan (talk) 22:57, September 25, 2020 (UTC)
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