Talk:Finding Marlin/@comment-28488428-20161024022153/@comment-28488428-20161024022903

I'll make a short beginning plot recommendation.

Marlin has a nightmare about losing Coral and their eggs to the baracuda. He wakes up Nemo and Dory in the process, they ask him what's wrong and he says nothing, telling them to go back to sleep.

Maybe it can be the school holidays for Nemo, so they're visiting a busier part of the Great Barrier Reef. A good point to cover would be the bleaching of the reef, so maybe Nemo goes by himself and sees a dead area of coral, which worries Dory and Marlin.

There could be a beaurocratic character who tells everybody that nothing is wrong despite the dying coral.

Marlin then finds clues that Coral used to leave him when she was alive on the sea bed, leading towards NZ. They head back home, but later that night he goes out to follow them. Nemo and Dory catch up and they all go towards NZ. Nemo falls asleep and they run into Bruce the shark, now completely vegetarian, who offer the 3 fishes a lift.

You can expand on this. IceAgeFanfromKiwiLand (talk) 02:29, October 24, 2016 (UTC)