Talk:Finding Marlin/@comment-28488428-20161024022153/@comment-28488428-20161026022036

Sorry, I'm not going to give you any more suggestions until you've decided whether to change the scenes I've already suggested or not.

I have already given you the start of a rough plot recomendation in my second comment.

Yes, you can use New Zealand, and yes, you can use the Tank Gang, but using a current might be too similar to Finding Nemo and Finding Dory. My suggestion is have Marlin, Nemo, and Dory hitch a lift with Bruce and the sharks to NZ, then on the way back to the Great Barrier Reef hitch a lift with the turtles again.

But I will NOT do the whole plot for you. This is for two main reasons.

1. I have my exams coming up so I will soon have to go on hiatus from Wikia for a while, and will not be able to help you.

2. I do feel like I have to babysit you and your ideas, because you aren't being proactive. I would be happy answering questions and giving suggestions if you'd come up with original ideas yourself, instead you just keep asking questions and it makes me annoyed. I feel like you want me to think up of all the plots for you so you don't have to do anything.

For the last time, try coming up with something all by yourself! That's the mark of a good writer, to be original and not need anybody's help!

IceAgeFanfromKiwiLand (talk) 02:20, October 26, 2016 (UTC)