User blog comment:TheGamerDudeGuy/RP(Role Play) Blog/@comment-4802209-20121203190320/@comment-4802209-20130109032326

GD: "Next up is a idea I've been tossing back and forth....."

(A New type of writing.)

GD: "Before you ask, here's a small snippet of it, along with a scene I've been tossing back and forth."

(Cue music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TzrYvXT1o8s)

Eve was dumbfounded at what she just saw. "How could he betray us?" she thought as his sword went through her stomach.

"Sorry doll, nothing personal." He said with a sneer as he withdrew his blade, leaving Eve to drown in her own blood.

Eve laid there, wounded with deadly cuts through out her body.

"........Nothing.........personal?" she the dying Rider.

Green tear, an unnatural color for it, fell from her eyes.

And then, all hell broke loose.

GD: "That was a small snippet. what did you think?" (Also, the one who stabbed Eve was a known tratior.)