Talk:Finding Marlin/@comment-28488428-20161024022153/@comment-28488428-20161025175841

I have already given you a list of the first scenes to change, and a new plot recommendation. Have you not read them?

Please, read my first two comments. If you choose to make the changes I have offered, then I will give you more suggestions after that.

But you NEED to be self-reliant and to come up with original ideas YOURSELF. Frankly, I didn't join the Wiki just to babysit other users and do all the work for their pages. IceAgeFanfromKiwiLand (talk) 17:58, October 25, 2016 (UTC)