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Black Soulstone wrote:

Hey everyone, sorry if i want to join this chat 3 days after this message sent. Actually, this was due to my freetime is limited for chat in this wikia as well as don't want to talk much. Anyway, i want to post an OC story (fanfic that both story and characters are based upon the fan themselves and original, but all of them truly based with fictions that they favored most) in this wikia that both the plot and characters are originally mine, but i create them based on several original fictions that i greately favored at the same time. Things that can be found in my story are:


 * The characters's design are anthropomorphic, and nearly identical/resembles with feline Dreamkeepers from Dreamkeepers Graphic novel saga by Dave and Liz in terms of appearance. But their powers are created by me. Like the Dreamkeepers, my characters fought demonic creatures like Dreamkeepers fighting Nightmares, though my characters fough Hellspawn demons instead.
 * The story would be dark fantasy universe, much like Diablo series or Dungeons and Dragons. Even the background (past times) of world within my story almost similar with the Diablo series as well(the world were formed by conflict between dark entities and light entities).
 * They also have powers that related with their inner psyche, similar with Persona power from Shin Megami Tensei: Persona series. But unlike Persona, which the user summon to their side like a summoned entity, characters in my story transformed into Persona itself.

Please reply soon So you want some criticism on your writing?